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My Savior- Chapter 5
Shane was fixing her tie in the mirror, but it always looked off.
Shane: Al! Alice! Help me!
Alice ran in thinking maybe Shane’s butt had caught on fire, but stood there looking at a Shane who was being choked to death by her own tie.
Alice: Jeez, are you that worried?
Alice loosened the tie and helped make it straight. She dusted off Shane’s shoulders and looked at her.
Alice: Dana! DANA! Help me!
Dana rushed in thinking Alice had cut herself, but saw Shane standing there with Alice who messed up the tie even more. Dana sighed. She fixed the tie and told Alice not to touch it. Shane was from head to toe hot and sexy. The suit was from Hugo Boss. It had light gray vertical lines on the suit barely visible. Shane had on some black pants and nice shiny black shoes. Lastly she had the skinny black tie with a gleaming silver clip on it against a white dress shirt.
Shane: Good?
Alice and Dana: Smokin’ hot.
Shane: Well, I got to go pick up some last minute things. I’ll see you guys there.
Dana: Shane you better not be driving you bike.
Shane: I’m not, I took my Benz SLK 55 out today.
Alice: That’s a sexy car.
Dana: Don’t be late. Wait! Your handkerchief in the breast pocket!
Shane nodded and went out the door and Dana chased after her. Finally she was ready to go. All set and gorgeous. She stopped at the flower store to pick up a humongous bouquet of red and white roses. 99 in all. Then went to Tiffany and Co. to pick up her custom made key necklace. The silver necklace dangled in the moonlight. It was starting to get dark. She looked at her cell phone. The analog read 7:30. She quickly got into her car to get back to the club.
Carmen was sitting on her bed while Bette and Tina rushed around trying to get her ready.
Tina: You may not cry again Carmen! I’ve had to fix your make up five times already! We’re running late!
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(22 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
hella great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa! Shane really made up BIG! Sweet chapter. :)
Waoooooooooo great. Bye Molly
Yay!!!
AWWWW! Love the song, love the chapter, love the couple! You’re doing great! PPVS!