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My Savior- Chapter 5
Over again
Don’t make me change my mind
Or I won’t live to see another day
I swear it’s true
Because a girl like you is impossible to find
It’s impossible
Shane stopped playing and the band started came in smoothly. Microphone in hand she sang while she walked. The husky voice, dreamy. She walked towards Carmen with the roses in her hand. She had a crooked smile on her face.
So breathe in so deep
Breathe me in
I’m yours to keep
And hold onto your words
Cause talk is cheap
And remember me tonight
When you’re asleep
Carmen took the roses and Shane led her back up to the stage and sat her down on the piano bench next to her. The band faded out as she started to play again.
Because tonight will be the night that I will fall for you
Over again
Don’t make me change my mind
Or I won’t live to see another day
I swear it’s true
Because a girl like you is impossible to find
The beautiful voice made her heart melt. Carmen was so taken aback by what Shane had planned for her.
Tonight will be the night that I will fall for you
Over again
Don’t make me change my mind
Or I won’t live to see another day
I swear it’s true
Because a girl like you is impossible to find
You’re impossible to find
Shane finished. She got up and knelt in front of Carmen.
Shane: I’m sorry about everything that’s happened in the two weeks. I can’t make up for lost time, but I can promise to try my best and make you happy for all the time to come. Now it’s my turn to ask, will you marry me?
Carmen’s tears were running down her face. Carmen nodded and managed to choke out a yes.
Shane: You already have a ring, but here’s a key. Even if it sounds cliché I’m still going to tell you, that’s the key to my heart, to our future. My happiness is in your hands. I’m yours forever. Just don’t lose it or toss it please.
Carmen nodded as Shane placed the necklace around her neck. Shane gave her a hug; pulling apart a little they kissed. Both of them missed this feeling. Soft luscious lips. Shane felt Carmen’s tears on her cheek. They pulled apart and Shane held her close.
Alice: If she keeps crying like that, her make up is going to look like someone drew all over her with a sharpie.
Tina: I used waterproof stuff.
Dana: Nice thinking.
Shane: You’re all here to be my witness! That Shane McCutcheon loves Carmen de la Pica Morales! And nothings going to change that!
The club went wild. Dancing, drinking, partying. The whole night, Carmen didn’t leave Shane’s arms for one second. And they loved it that way.
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(22 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
hella great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa! Shane really made up BIG! Sweet chapter. :)
Waoooooooooo great. Bye Molly
Yay!!!
AWWWW! Love the song, love the chapter, love the couple! You’re doing great! PPVS!