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Starting Over (14)
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Chapter 14
Bette and Tina walked into the beautiful Inn James had booked them. It was stunning and the views of the harbor were breathtaking. They stood looking at the view from the lobby when Bette excused herself to go check them in. Bette introduced herself to the clerk and asked about her reservation. The clerk handed her the key and offered the paperwork. Bette addressed the clerk,
“Um, excuse me my assistant was supposed to book two rooms. May I have another room under the same reservation please?”
“Oh, Ms. Porter, you’re booked in a two bedroom suite. I’m sorry that is all we have available for tonight.”
Bette turned and called Tina over.
“Hey what’s up Bette?”
“Well, you see James, in his infinite wisdom has booked us a 2 bedroom suite instead of 2 separate rooms, and of course they have no other rooms available.”
“That’s great Bette we’ll have a lot more room to spread out and work. Besides, it’ll be fun.”
“Okay, as long as you’re okay with it you know I don’t want you to feel uncomfortable or anything.”
Tina got very close to Bette and playfully grabbed the front of Bette’s shirt and said, “You know Porter, I think that, that was very close to an insult, and if you didn’t look completely mortified right now I might continue to tease you, I’m kidding, let’s let our key.”
The women laughed as Bette turned back to the desk to retrieve their keys and sign for their room. They made their way up to the suite and were pleasantly surprised by the lovely room and the amazing view. Tina immediately ran toward the full length windows and opened the balcony doors.
“Oh my God Bette this is beautiful. Wow it’s going to be hard to work.”
“Don’t worry Tina, we really don’t have much to do. The layouts will only take about an hour and we have about three hours until we have to leave for dinner. How about I order up some lunch and we can get the work done so we can relax a bit.”
“Hey Bette, do you think we’ll be staying tonight?”
“Well as much as I hate to say it that really depends on how tonight goes. If it goes badly we’ll have to head out right after the dinner so we can start bright and early to salvage the show. If tonight goes well then I don’t see why we wouldn’t want to spend the night maybe even take our time in the morning. We are well ahead of schedule for the show that is, assuming there aren’t any more disasters.”
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Phew! Will I be able to handle the next?
Completely charming.
WOW!!! That was a great chapter!!!! Thank you PPS
Wow, absolutely lovely. They have really just charmed the pants off each other, and are falling so fast….”I’d go anywhere with you in that skirt. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks for posting.
Wow, absolutely lovely. They have really just charmed the pants off each other, and are falling so fast….”I’d go anywhere with you in that skirt. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thanks for posting.
That was great. Give James a raise for booking a two-bedroom suite.
Well at least her husband respected her enough not to bring home disease to her. I don’t understand cheating. But I do respect his honesty with Tina. Great story. More Please :)
Thank you James lol. Bette do not ever let her go she is your future.So what happen in the morning???? PPVS
Is it safe to say that for future trips for B&T there will be a shortage of adjoining rooms, but plenty of rooms with a single bed?
You’re killin’ me! I need some B&T lovin’. PPS!!
This was oh so great. Thank you!
I hope Tina will not be cold and distant with Bette the next morning. I really don’t want to see this Bette be hurt. James needs a raise for getting them a two bedroom suite! PPS
Wow, I was only 3 chapters behind. I too moved around in my childhood and spent my later teens and twenties in Hawaii. Man, what a place. I believe that it is time for Bette to meet Ellie. Maybe Ellie can let Bette know that maybe it is time for her mom to move on and gain her (Tina) own happiness.
Bette’s suit jacket is going to be ruined from all the tears. Thanks for this chapter. I love the way you have written Tina’s struggle. I’m so glad she was able to open up to Bette.
I don’t think Bette is going to have to fight *too* hard to win Tina’s heart. Joe’s about to lose out, big time. And I gotta say, it’ll serve him right. Great update, thanks, D&A!
i agree with brwnsuga. James needs a raise!
What a fabulous amazing chapter. Thank you. Love it!