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    Something so right – chapter 89+90

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 89

    Tina was really looking forward to meeting Kit. It was obvious that
    Bette really adored her older half sister and was concerned about her
    problems. Tina’s prime fear was for Bette – she was not handling the
    whole business about her mother very well and unless things improved
    Bette was going to start cracking up. Tina knew how Bette reacted under
    pressure – they had been together for two shows. She knew that work
    pressure was something that she was learning to leave behind when she
    got home.

    Tina had gently taught her how to work smarter by not working
    such long hours. That had paid off with Bette being less freaked out
    when it came to the show’s launch. What Tina was less sure that Bette
    could deal with was personal pressure – she had gone to pieces when Tina
    had refused to marry her. There had been other times when they had
    argued and Bette had not dealt well with the strain it had put on their
    relationship.
    Tina saw Bette with Kit – the older woman was handsome with Bette’s
    winning smile.
    "Hey there "Tina walked across
    Bette was beaming
    "Hey honey – Tina -I want you to meet my sister Kit Porter. Kit – this
    is beloved Tina "
    "Hello Kit – pleased to meet you "Tina took her hand and shook it "It’s
    great to finally put a face to the name. How are you?"
    "I am delighted to meet you Tina – Bette is always singing your praises.
    You must be one heck of a gal to have tamed my ass chasing sister "
    "Bette’s a pussy cat "Tina replied sitting down and looking at Kit. The
    older woman had long dark hair just like Bette – her facial features
    were a little fuller but she was still a Porter. Kit saw immediately how
    Bette looked at the blonde – with total puppy dog devotion. Yes – she
    had met her match and not before time.
    "Well it’s really good to have the two of you together – I think lunch
    is on me – do you want to see a menu Ti "
    "Chicken sandwich is fine by me Bette "
    "Okay – Kit?"
    "I will have the same "
    "Okay – three chicken sandwiches, three coffees and as it’s a
    celebration I think chocolate cake to follow "
    "You trying to sabotage me before this race on Sunday "Tina challenged
    Bette laughed and explained to Kit
    "Tina and I are taking part in a 10k race for breast cancer on Sunday
    with a friend of ours. Its going to be tasty as I have no intention of
    letting Tina or our friend Helena bet me"
    "Bette usually wins every race she takes part in – you shouldn’t feel
    too bad about losing to her "
    Tina raised an eyebrow
    "Care to tell your sister what happened the first time that you and I
    went running?"
    "I can’t remember "Bette lied with a hug grin on her face
    "You damn liar Porter – god – I cannot believe how blatantly you just
    lied there Bette "
    "You heard my sister – I always win "
    Tina pretended to be outraged
    "I am shocked that you can tell such a bare faced lie Bette Porter "
    Bette was laughing "Its true – can’t remember. I guess that I won "
    "Three lies in a row "Tina shook her head "That’s just disgraceful "
    Bette was still laughing "Okay – just to stop Little Ms Honest – the
    first time Tina and I ran it was down at the beach and she burnt me. I
    was close to collapse. In fact looking back I think the only thing that
    stopped me collapsing before our run had finished was how hard I was
    trying to impress this new girlfriend of mine. It was the closest I have
    ever come to throwing up after a run"
    Kit was amazed
    "You did that to Bette?"
    "She’s run me into the ground a few times. I would say that in the rare
    times we race one another it’s about 50/50 wouldn’t you babe?" Bette
    explained
    "I would say 60/40 in my favour but as Bette is so bad at maths at the
    moment I will let it go "
    Bette laughed and rested her hand on Tina’s back
    "I love how competitive she is – I just didn’t bank on the fact that she
    can whip my ass "
    "Well Lord Almighty – that is one turn up for the books. Bette Porter
    not winning all the time "
    "I know – its mean of her isn’t it Kit. You are my sister – tell her to
    let me win "
    "Oh no – you have been the top of the class for far too long… it
    doesn’t do you any harm to lose out. Is she a graceful loser?"
    "She is a good loser even though I know how much it drives her crazy "
    "Well Bette girl – this is a good thing "
    "How can losing be good?" Bette objected
    "Because not everyone can be first – you have to learn to lose"
    "She will get a further lesson in losing on Sunday – don’t worry about
    that Kit "
    Bette raised an eyebrow "You interested in turning your self confidence
    into a bet?"
    "What did you have in mind?"
    As what Bette had in mind was sexual and she didn’t think her sister
    needed to hear the finer points of their love life she shrugged
    "I sure I can come up with something "
    As Tina also knew that their bets were nearly always sexual and she also
    didn’t want to discuss it in front of Kit she nodded
    "I look forward to your suggestions – now about that sandwich you
    promised us?"
    "Okay – I’m going to the counter "
    Bette got up and looked at her sister
    "If she asks you to tell her embarrassing stories you are to say no "
    Kit laughed "We’ll see "
    Bette walked off delighted at the opening interchanges between the three
    women. Kit looked at Tina and approved – she was beautiful, smart and
    was obviously a match for Bette.
    Tina wanted Kit to like her – especially as she hoped Kit would become
    an ally.
    "It’s good to meet you "Tina said
    "It’s very good to meet you "Kit said "I know Bette well enough to know
    that she adores you "
    Tina nodded "It’s a two way thing – I love Bette very much and we are
    happy "
    "That is obvious – she just lights up when she talks about you and I can
    see why "
    Tina smiled "Thank you "
    "I am sorry that it has taken so long before we have met. That was all
    down to me – I was worried that "
    "Its okay Kit – I am just glad that we have met. I hope that you will be
    around more – you are welcome to come over to see us any time you want.
    I am especially glad that you and Bette are talking at the moment "
    "Her mother "
    Tina glanced behind her and looked to see Bette standing waiting to be
    place her order. Tina looked back
    "Kit – this really worries me. Bette is not as strong as she pretends.
    This thing with her mother is hard for her "
    "I can see that – I am shocked "
    "That she has shown up?"
    "Yes – how long has it been since she saw Bette?"
    "27 years"
    Kit shook her head "I really do not understand people at times. Honestly
    Tina – how is she handling it?"
    "It could go either way – she is thrilled in a lot of ways but she is
    also just terrified in case she hurts her again"
    "I can see that "Kit nodded "What do you make of her?"
    "She seems genuine – she really seems that she wants to make amends for
    the life time that she has been out of her life. But and it’s a but –
    Bette’s scared "
    "Well let’s see if we can talk to her about how she feels"
    "Two hands are better than one "Tina said reassured
    A few minutes later Bette came back and sat down
    "I told Kit about my mom "Bette told Tina "I was asking her what she
    remembered about her"
    "Would you recognise her?" Tina asked
    "I have said that I would give it a go but it’s been a long time. Do you
    still need proof?"
    Bette shrugged "I don’t know "
    "Babe – I think she is your mom. That’s not in question unless we go for
    a blood test. You told Kit about the trust fund?"
    "Not yet "Bette looked at her sister
    "She set a trust fund up for me "
    "Nice "
    "To inherit it when Bette was 30 "
    Kit raised her eyebrow "I might have lost several million brain cells
    through booze but you are not 30 "
    "No – I am 31 "Bette said
    "You don’t have your trust fund?"
    "When Elizabeth told me it existed it was the first I had heard of it"
    "Who knew about it?"
    "Melvin "
    "Oh man -he’s keeping money from you – hey I wouldn’t put it past him to
    have kept some of the money for himself "
    Both Bette and Tina were on the comment at once – kit saw the way they
    looked at one another
    "What?"
    "Elizabeth told Bette that she had to top up Bette’s college fund "Tina
    explained
    "Oh boy "
    Bette nodded "Why did you say that you wouldn’t put it past him?"
    Kit held her hands up "He washed his hands of me a long time ago – you
    know that but I do have very clear memories of him and one of the things
    I remember clearly was that he was obsessed with money and having as
    much of it as possible. He earned lots of money but still he would bring
    home things that he had taken from work – not just the odd pen but boxes
    of paper and huge packs of pencils. Don’t you remember Bette he used to
    have a cupboard in his study that looked like a damn stationary store?"
    "He stole all of them? "
    "Hell yes – you didn’t know that?"
    "No "
    "My point is – he didn’t need these things, it wasn’t about not being
    able to afford a notebook or pen. I always assessed that he was just
    plain mean. He was the original Scrooge – it wasn’t a great
    neighbourhood we lived in but we all went trick or treating and everyone
    gave us candy – I remember being so embarrassed when the sweets that he
    gave away were out of date and tasted nasty. My mother was always
    calling him mean "
    Bette rubbed her brow "So you are not surprised that he dipped into my
    college fund "
    "When you went to college I remember being surprised that he had kept
    his sticky fingers out of your fund "
    "Did you have a college fund Kit?"
    "My fund wasn’t as huge as Bette’s and that was fine because I never
    wanted to go to college – I never had the brain that my clever sister
    has. There was money when I was 21 – I used it to get a nice apartment
    and to pay the deposit on a car "
    Bette looked at Tina
    "So she could well have been right about having to top up my college
    fund "
    Tina nodded
    "The circumstantial evidence is good so far "
    "Has he been dipping into this trust fund?" Kit asked
    "He can’t "Bette says
    "But he can keep its existence from you "Tina said "What happened? It
    slipped his mind – I don’t buy that "
    "That’s what I want answers about " Bette said "Why has he not told me
    anything about her – he told me that she had gone because she just
    didn’t love me and him enough to stay"
    Tina’s hand had been on Bette’s knee – she took hold of her hand and
    squeezed it. Kit saw it and approved – that was what Bette had always
    needed – love and it looked like she had it in abundance now. Kit relied
    a lot on her instincts and she was telling herself that Bette had found
    a soul mate – it was truly wonderful to see.

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    Comments

    1. gosh your craving me crazy with all there teasing. HAVE A HEART WOMAN I DONT HAVE A GF!!! this story rocks!!! i love it and i wonder what will happen with bettes mam

    2. I’m still failing to comprehend how Elizabeth is supposed to perform according to Tina’s mutually exclusive requests that she back off and yet at the same time throw every detail of the last 27 years at Bette immediately. And I’m further baffled by Tina wanting to have a three way with some random guy from the Pyrenees while she and Bette war sexy underthings. Hope this will all be cleared up for me in the next chapter.

    3. Ally, you have been busy, 104 chapters of this story just sitting there waiting for us. GREAT!!!! I loved the interaction with Bette, Tina and Kit. I hope that Kit becomes an allay for Tina when she needs to calm Bette down. When Tina had told Elizabeth to give Bette everything, wouldn’t that freak Bette out??????? As for the 10k run, I thought you were going to sneak Bette past Tina, but you thru us a curve. I would have felt like shit when Elizabeth gave me a check for the BCR after blowing for off. AWESOME update, Ally. I am ecstatic that you have come back to us.

    4. Ally… I love this story!!! The race was definitely interesting to see play out, i actually thought Tina might let Bette win to get her confidence back up after her mother… but Bette being her sex slave as 2nd place, is better that winning! And i agree with Tina telling Elizabeth to give it to her at once…holding back something like “you have a brother” is a pretty big thing. Loved it all! PPS

    5. The drought for SRR is over! Until Chapter 104 to come. Thank you. Elizabeth is not giving Bette her space, she ought to since she already overwhelmed not in a good way.

    6. Thanks for the update. I guess Elizabeth didn’t take Tina’s advice to back off a bit and give Bette some space to come to terms with everything. If they keep setting boundaries she’ll eventually catch on I suppose.

    7. THank you for posting. I so love this story and it’s just getting better and better. I can’t believe you have already written up to Chapter 104. Please post as many as you can. Thank you again :)

    8. Wow…Bette’s Mom is really pushing things despite her talk with Tina. There is either something odd about her or she is truly overwhelmed at having Bette back in her life again. Hahahaha…that bet was one Bette or Tina couldn’t lose! PPS Ally!

    9. oh yea mothers can make us feel so guilty without even trying especially when they get in the way of ‘our life’. wats up with elizabeth-this is overkill!!!

    10. Yippee!!! I don’t know how I did it, but I actually opened this story when it had zero views. I don’t think I’d ever done that in a story that wasn’t my own. But anyway, this was great. Kit’s always amazing to have and I can’t wait for at least some of Tina’s ideas for Bette to come about. Is it mean that I want her to have something planned for Tuesday’s dinner? I mean, yes, it would be cruel to make your girlfriend show up for dinner with her absent mother with crotchless panties or something, but it would also be so funny. PPS, Ally!

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