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Something so right – chapter 89+90
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Something so right
Chapter 90
　
“I just hope that you are ready to be run into the ground “
Tina glanced across from giving all her attention on the road ahead and nodded
“Anything you say Porter – anything you say honey “
Next to her Bette was watching Tina closely
“You don’t believe me ?”
“Yes I believe you “ Tina replied switching her line of vision back to the road ahead. They were heading for the 10km road race – it was 8am on Sunday morning and Tina was trying to spot a place to park her car that was close enough to the start and finish of the race so they wouldn’t have to trudge back probably when they were both a little tired after the race.
“I cannot believe that you haven’t accepted the inevitable “ Bette continued
Tina grinned – Bette must be seriously worried that she was going to lose a competitive race with Tina in it for the first time if she was trying to play mind games. Then again Tina was not too honourable not to try some games of her own
“So you realise that no only might you be beaten by me but you might get beaten by Helena as well – beaten by a Peabody – the shame of it “
“WHAT !! “
“Helena is a good runner in her own right – I am just saying that if it means so much to you to win I assume that you also want to beat her”
Bette was slightly thrown “ Well – yes of course “
Tina chuckled to herself as she manoeuvred her car into a space in the corner of a car park. She parked the car and carefully fitted the wheel lock before looking at Bette again.
“Very sure of yourself Porter “
“And what’s wrong with that ?”
“Nothing at all “ Tina said smiling at her lover “I will try and be gentle with you when I beat you”
Bette grinned “I like it when you aren’t gentle “
Tina raised an eyebrow at her
“Really ?”
“Yeah “
Tina got out of the car and waited for Bette to get out. They faced over another with the car between them. They smiled at one another
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I’m another fan who is very glad you’re posting again.I love this story for the many connections and strong characters.
gosh your craving me crazy with all there teasing. HAVE A HEART WOMAN I DONT HAVE A GF!!! this story rocks!!! i love it and i wonder what will happen with bettes mam
I am allways thrilled to see your name when I open the site.
I’m still failing to comprehend how Elizabeth is supposed to perform according to Tina’s mutually exclusive requests that she back off and yet at the same time throw every detail of the last 27 years at Bette immediately. And I’m further baffled by Tina wanting to have a three way with some random guy from the Pyrenees while she and Bette war sexy underthings. Hope this will all be cleared up for me in the next chapter.
Ally, you have been busy, 104 chapters of this story just sitting there waiting for us. GREAT!!!! I loved the interaction with Bette, Tina and Kit. I hope that Kit becomes an allay for Tina when she needs to calm Bette down. When Tina had told Elizabeth to give Bette everything, wouldn’t that freak Bette out??????? As for the 10k run, I thought you were going to sneak Bette past Tina, but you thru us a curve. I would have felt like shit when Elizabeth gave me a check for the BCR after blowing for off. AWESOME update, Ally. I am ecstatic that you have come back to us.
10k run? I will be dead tired because of the thought. But to read good about it mainly in your story. :o)
Ally… I love this story!!! The race was definitely interesting to see play out, i actually thought Tina might let Bette win to get her confidence back up after her mother… but Bette being her sex slave as 2nd place, is better that winning! And i agree with Tina telling Elizabeth to give it to her at once…holding back something like “you have a brother” is a pretty big thing. Loved it all! PPS
The drought for SRR is over! Until Chapter 104 to come. Thank you. Elizabeth is not giving Bette her space, she ought to since she already overwhelmed not in a good way.
Thanks for the update. I guess Elizabeth didn’t take Tina’s advice to back off a bit and give Bette some space to come to terms with everything. If they keep setting boundaries she’ll eventually catch on I suppose.
THank you for posting. I so love this story and it’s just getting better and better. I can’t believe you have already written up to Chapter 104. Please post as many as you can. Thank you again :)
That was great and hahaha Bette gonna do anything Tina said cause she is Tina’s sex slave now lol and can’t wait to see it happen lol. Please post more, thanks!
Great chapter, I know its hard and nothing can excuse what Elizabeth did 27 years ago but Bette should lether in a little bit. PPS
Wow…Bette’s Mom is really pushing things despite her talk with Tina. There is either something odd about her or she is truly overwhelmed at having Bette back in her life again. Hahahaha…that bet was one Bette or Tina couldn’t lose! PPS Ally!
amazing update!!!!! :)PPS
oh yea mothers can make us feel so guilty without even trying especially when they get in the way of ‘our life’. wats up with elizabeth-this is overkill!!!
I’m so glad your back to writing. Just finished all your updates in one sitting! Please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Yippee!!! I don’t know how I did it, but I actually opened this story when it had zero views. I don’t think I’d ever done that in a story that wasn’t my own. But anyway, this was great. Kit’s always amazing to have and I can’t wait for at least some of Tina’s ideas for Bette to come about. Is it mean that I want her to have something planned for Tuesday’s dinner? I mean, yes, it would be cruel to make your girlfriend show up for dinner with her absent mother with crotchless panties or something, but it would also be so funny. PPS, Ally!
im with funnyone. tina is contradictory. thx for the update.