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Something so right
Chapter 91
Tina steered her car out of the car-park and in a few minutes she was driving home. Bette was staring out of the window – she was very quiet.
“It’s not your fault “ Tina said
Bette looked at her and smiled
“She made me feel terrible “
“She made all three of us feel bad “
“It was nice of her to come and see us “
“Bette – I know things are really fragile between the two of you but – well I have to say this – you and I need time alone at the moment. I don’t expect her to understand that running makes us both horny and that we have some dirty ideas when it comes to motivation”
“I know – I just feel bad “
“I know”
Tina rested her hand on Bette’s thigh “You okay ?”
“Its done now isn’t it – you talked us out of it “
“At least I know that if you are ever unfaithful I will know in seconds – you suck as a liar “
“Is that not a good thing ?”
“It is “
“Its not easy is it ?”
“No its not and I am worried about you. You remember when we had lunch with Kit last week and we went back to the gallery “
“Yeah “
“I went to look at the pieces like I always do and Elizabeth was there”
“I know “
“Well I said hello an quick as a flash she said that she’d spoken to James “
“James didn’t mention it “
“Exactly – James is an excellent assistant and that is something that he would not forget to mention to you”
Bette looked at Tina
“What do you think was going on ?”
“Not a clue – not theory – I am not thinking anything bad. I just thought it was odd. She comes to the gallery to see you. She doesn’t find you but why did James not even say – your mother turned up looking for you I think she’s gone “
“You don’t think she did look for me ? “
“I don’t know babe. It crossed my mind when I was running – that’s why I am mentioning it now”
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Maybe rare, but sizzling.
WoWWWWW!! and Thanks for the heat in the foggies and freezing day in Chicago. :)
I’m with the others in not trusting Elizabeth. She comes across very overbearing and intrusive, not to mention her creepy, stalker tendencies. She makes Melvin look like the good parent…yikes! As for the NC-17, feel free to describe each day of Tina’s dominance. So glad you’re back posting!!
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
That was great and hot, they are wonderful. Elizabeth need to back off a little and let Bette breath and have time with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
okay what does bette’s mom really want? :)PPS
I think meeting Hannah may shed a little light. And when is Bette going to beat Melvin senseless for hiding all this info? Thanks for posting!
Yes Wow! Wow! Wow! What a post all right. Thank you for this story. So so loving it.
WOW!! What a post to wake up to so early in the morning. Elizabeth is coming on a little strong. I wonder does she have something up her sleeve?I would be a little annoyed and curiousas to why she’s being so pushy. Love this story and all you write. PPVVS
It does bother me that Elizabeth is being a little pushy and coming on too strong right now. I’m not sure that I trust her, but I’m interested to see how things develop and how their dinner goes. Thanks for the NC17! What a way to wake up this morning, and from one of my favorite writers! PPS
“the heat they were going to generate could accidentally defrost the fridge” – love it! Elizabeth intrigues me, what is she up to?! PPS!
At least they conserve water by showering together, cause they may be responsible for some of the wildfires plaguing LA these days.
As the saying is, Elizabeth “so sticks than the burdock.” :o)
I’ll raise my glass to that too. Cheers! Thanks for the update.
I agree with trecelovinit, there is something about Elizabeth that is making me feel uneasy. I hope Elizabeth doesn’t make Melvin look like a saint. Tina will rip Elizabeth’s head off if she as so much makes Bette shed a tear. Awesome update.
Terrific!!!! That was sexy and hot!!! Elizabeth will back off somewhat now. Thx.
Hey Ally, You always keep the physical side of Bette and Tina’s realtionship fresh and exciting. Their need for each other was immediate while the pay-off was so torturously slow that eveyone was due to explode. Good to have Bette and Tina so passionate in their carnal relationship. This cements their union at every turn. The heat between them was intense and I am surprised that the shower didn’t just evaporate when they entered. Now could we have Tina returning the favour as the show mainly had Bette was the giver. I want to have the tables turned. OK so Bette is the slave but I believe handcuffs were mentioned and shouldn’t Ti be teasing her sexual minion. Please make it so and make it soon. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m like Tina and still think there’s something that’s not quite right with Elizabeth. I hope for Bette’s sake it isn’t something major. Sooo happy you’re posting again!
WOW!!! Another wonderful update Ally!!! I do hope Elizabeth is not up to something. Thank you
Great post. I”m glad Bette has her priorities straight. Even though she has always longed for a relationship with her mother she knows that her relationship with Tina is the primary one. Hopefully Elizabeth will keep that in my too.