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Something so right – chp 91
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“You don’t get extra points for that – that’s too easy. Yes falling for Tina took me some getting used to “
“And I am sure that you over came it because of the support of your friends and of Tina “
Bette nodded
“Well if we keep being honest with each other we can over come this. I was hurt this morning Bette but I know now why you did it. There are few better things than spending an afternoon naked with a beautiful woman “
She got up
“Hannah is looking forward to meeting you both. Go back and enjoy your day with Tina”
Bette looked at Elizabeth
“Thank you”
“Look in the box when I am gone. See you soon “
As Bette sat in astonishment Elizabeth swept out of the house closing the door behind her. Bette shook her head – they hadn’t deserved to be let off the hook like they just had. It was clear that her mother was a remarkable woman. After a few minutes curiosity got the better of her. She got up and investigated the contents of the box.
“Bless you mom “ Bette said grinning
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Tina was lying on the bed dozing – the race and the sex had left her sleepy. She opened her eyes when she heard Bette coming into the room
“What’s in the box ?”
“Present from Elizabeth “
Tina raised an eyebrow
“Trust me “
Bette put the box down and lifted out the six pack of beer and the containers of Chinese food from the most exclusive Chinese restaurant in the area.
“Wow “ Tina exclaimed
“Exactly “
“Did you send her out for this ?”
“She rumbled our rubbish lies this morning “
“She should be furious with us “
“She was upset. Hannah pointed out to her that running does rather induce horny feelings”
“She knew we blew her off so we could fuck ?”
“She didn’t put it as crudely as that but basically yes. We talked about how she is crowding us and how I am not handling it very well “
“And she dropped off some food ?”
“Yeah “
“I have to say that if we had blown my mother off so we could indulge our carnal passions she would not have brought round Chinese and beer “
Bette grinned
“My mom is special “
“She is – not just any Chinese either – wow “
“Have you noticed that whenever she comes round with food or drink its always from the best place in town ?”
“Exactly – are we picking the restaurant for Tuesday or is she ?”
“I can’t remember “
Bette opened a lid and inhaled the smells of the take away
“Oh that smells good “
“It does”
“Plates “ Tina said getting up “ You want chopsticks or a fork ?”
“Fork “
Tina left the room – when she returned with a couple of tea towels, plates and forks she sat down and looked at Bette
“Our clothes are all over the floor “
“That would be when we tore them off so we could get in the shower because I wanted to fuck you “ Bette suggested
Bette carefully divided up the food and opened two beer bottles.
“A toast “
Tina looked up “To ?”
“May my mother’s taste in food never change and may our passion for one another always be as all consuming as it is at the moment “
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Maybe rare, but sizzling.
WoWWWWW!! and Thanks for the heat in the foggies and freezing day in Chicago. :)
I’m with the others in not trusting Elizabeth. She comes across very overbearing and intrusive, not to mention her creepy, stalker tendencies. She makes Melvin look like the good parent…yikes! As for the NC-17, feel free to describe each day of Tina’s dominance. So glad you’re back posting!!
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
That was great and hot, they are wonderful. Elizabeth need to back off a little and let Bette breath and have time with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
okay what does bette’s mom really want? :)PPS
I think meeting Hannah may shed a little light. And when is Bette going to beat Melvin senseless for hiding all this info? Thanks for posting!
Yes Wow! Wow! Wow! What a post all right. Thank you for this story. So so loving it.
WOW!! What a post to wake up to so early in the morning. Elizabeth is coming on a little strong. I wonder does she have something up her sleeve?I would be a little annoyed and curiousas to why she’s being so pushy. Love this story and all you write. PPVVS
It does bother me that Elizabeth is being a little pushy and coming on too strong right now. I’m not sure that I trust her, but I’m interested to see how things develop and how their dinner goes. Thanks for the NC17! What a way to wake up this morning, and from one of my favorite writers! PPS
“the heat they were going to generate could accidentally defrost the fridge” – love it! Elizabeth intrigues me, what is she up to?! PPS!
At least they conserve water by showering together, cause they may be responsible for some of the wildfires plaguing LA these days.
As the saying is, Elizabeth “so sticks than the burdock.” :o)
I’ll raise my glass to that too. Cheers! Thanks for the update.
I agree with trecelovinit, there is something about Elizabeth that is making me feel uneasy. I hope Elizabeth doesn’t make Melvin look like a saint. Tina will rip Elizabeth’s head off if she as so much makes Bette shed a tear. Awesome update.
Terrific!!!! That was sexy and hot!!! Elizabeth will back off somewhat now. Thx.
Hey Ally, You always keep the physical side of Bette and Tina’s realtionship fresh and exciting. Their need for each other was immediate while the pay-off was so torturously slow that eveyone was due to explode. Good to have Bette and Tina so passionate in their carnal relationship. This cements their union at every turn. The heat between them was intense and I am surprised that the shower didn’t just evaporate when they entered. Now could we have Tina returning the favour as the show mainly had Bette was the giver. I want to have the tables turned. OK so Bette is the slave but I believe handcuffs were mentioned and shouldn’t Ti be teasing her sexual minion. Please make it so and make it soon. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m like Tina and still think there’s something that’s not quite right with Elizabeth. I hope for Bette’s sake it isn’t something major. Sooo happy you’re posting again!
WOW!!! Another wonderful update Ally!!! I do hope Elizabeth is not up to something. Thank you
Great post. I”m glad Bette has her priorities straight. Even though she has always longed for a relationship with her mother she knows that her relationship with Tina is the primary one. Hopefully Elizabeth will keep that in my too.