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Something so right – chapter 94
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Something so right
Chapter 94
Bette looked up from her novel and smiled at Tina who was looking out of the plane window staring at the clouds. It was less than 24 hours since Tina had found out that her father had left her mother and it had been a hectic few hours. Bette had worked late the night before identifying work to delegate to James and work to take with her and work through at the farm. While Bette had worked late Tina had packed enough clothes for both of them and she’d rung their friends to say that they would be out of town for a few days. They had talked late into the night discussing what they would face when they arrived in North Carolina, Finn had shown up to sleep on the sofa so they didn’t have to waste time picking him up on the way to the airport.
Finn had changed in the year that he had lived in LA – he had quickly made progress at the country club and was now on a management training scheme that the company used to develop the brightest of the staff. His extreme height and easy going personality made him popular and he was smart – showing an intelligence that surprised everyone bar his sister. He was still living with Shane – the two forming an unlikely double act and his drug free beliefs were having a positive impact on the normally chemically enhanced young woman. Bette didn’t think that Finn would ever go back to the farm on a permanent basis – he was worried for his parents but the farms problems were not his most pressing concern.
Bette looked at Finn who was sitting across the aisle to the two women. He was asleep – his
headphones clammed to his ears – he did look different than the first time she had met him on the farm. In jeans and a white shirt he looked casual but not grungy as he first had.
Bette rested her hand on Tina’s – the blonde looked at her
“You okay ?”Tina nodded “Thanks for arranging all of this – my head was all over the place yesterday”
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Let’s just wait and see what has actually happened.
Good to see you posting on a regular basis, Miss Drama Queen! Love this story and NYM. Perhaps you should seek help at DQA(drama queen anonymous), lol! PPS!
Well,the obvious reason for Niall leaving would be another woman…and maybe it wasn’t sex…it turned out to be love. But…Ally, you do not always do the obvious in your stories, so I will wait and see what you come up with. PP(again)S!
Yes AllyE, you are a drama Queen and we love it or we wouldn’t keep coming back or searching you out when you have taken a hiatus. You do have the drama just ripping from all directions in this one. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.
Hi Ally hahaha what a Drama Queen you are lol. I guess Tina’s dad have another woman and can’t deal with Tina’s mom anymore that’s why he leave. Glad Bette is there for Tina and help her get through this. Please psot more, thanks!
I wonder what kind of life changing decision Bette suspects to be the reason for Niall’s disappearance. They all seem to sense that it’s not another woman since there have been other women in his life all along. Maybe it’s midlife crisis. :) Thanks for the update. Please post again soon.
Tina’s father wont just disappear for nothing, there is a more drama in this that what is revealed right now. Cant wait!
I’m gonna go with the other woman theory, maybe other man ;) And funnyone, be nice!
Ally, yes rou are a drama Queen but I like that you are. Now I think Bette is right that there is another woman. Great Post. Thank you PPS
i think its b/c of another woman…it must
Be as much of a drama queen as you want. I just love your stories.
maybe its another man? what a turn up that would be!! lol. great writing as usual. thx.
You know, I was in a hurry when I read the last chapter, but I was really surprised by the fact that everyone “expected” something like this to happen. This is a 30 year marriage that has worked as an open relationship for a very, very long time. Mr. Kennard has changed the rules after many, many successful years. I can’t imagine ever being in a relationship like that, but I figure if you manage to sustain it for that long, it’s because you really are able to separate sex from love and are VERY, VERY confident in your love. You couldn’t last that long without that ability and I think it’s something that is a personality trait and wouldn’t change. I actually think that his leaving her has nothing to do with the openness of their marriage. Obviously it hasn’t been a problem for him in the past so why would it change 30 years on? I hope Tina and Finn’s (and to a lesser extent Bette’s) presence is comforting to Mrs. K, and that they’re able to help her with the farm, but without making any changes. Big decisions shouldn’t be made at times like this.
“”I have held back interfering and I should have” Tina admitted” No, you really shouldn’t Tina. Not in their business (unless asked) nor in their marriage. Neither is really Tina’s direct business. Frankly, I think all 3 of them have gone in with some pretty fucked up ideas. I personally am aware of successful long standing group marriages, so there is no reason to believe that one-on-one monogamy is better or more successful OR NORMAL than any other form of relationship. A pair of lesbians should be among the first to question traditional definitions. Bette may have become part of the family, but she certainly is the most peripherally attached and so she should do her best to remain calm and supportive, but it’s not her job to put out fires. Some fires can’t be, they need to burn themselves out. And that Tina thinks she now needs to blame Pops instead of Mom is truly back assward. She needs to grow up and accept her parents for who they are and that statement proves how far away from that she is. And of course, none of them so far have a clue where Niall is. Maybe he’s wandering around Atlantic City with amnesia. Maybe he’s gone on retreat to clear his head. Maybe he’s with his new male lover. But let’s all shit on him anyway. And let’s see how much worse their ‘contributions’ will make the situation.
Oh dear! I hope it’s not another women and he’s just teaching Sarah a lesson. Thank you for this story!