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Something so right – chapter 95
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Something so right
Chapter 95
　
Tina was sitting on the porch taking in the night air. She always loved to spend time out here alone when she was at home – the air was so sweet and refreshing. She was just sitting with her eyes closed seeing if she could recognise all the small sounds that mildly disturbed the night silence. She heard the front door open and someone came out – she listened – it wasn’t Bette – the heaviness of the tread pointed totally towards her brother. She opened her eyes – Finn was standing in shorts and nothing else.
“You awake ?”
“Yes “
He walked across and sat beside her on the step.
“What’s mum doing ?” Tina asked
“She went to bed about 15 minutes ago “
“How do you think she is doing ?”
“Hey – I don’t understand women that well – but she does seem less scary than usual “
“You are scared of her ?”
“God yes- for years she has scared me – she just has to look at me and I am 8 again “
“That 15 years ago “
“You mean she doesn’t scare you ?”
“Not especially “
“Where you not scared when you brought Bette here for the first time. I figured that was why you told dad first – so he could tell her and you could be a continent away “
“I told dad about Bette because he showed up at my apartment at 6:30 on morning because his flight to San Francisco was delayed by fog and she was walking around the flat half naked “
He laughed “Cool “
“Not cool – embarrassing as hell. I told him because – well I had to “
“Do you regret how it came out ?”
“No – it made it easier for him to accept my sexuality because Bette was there and looking divine and smiling at me with her usual look of devotion”
“Mom hit the roof “
“Did she ? that’s not how either of them tell it “
“She did and she yelled at him for ages – Willow and me both went out”
“Why did she yell at him ?”
“I guess because you were not there – hey I really have no idea – Willow told me -she heard what they were talking about and she said – guess what Tina is gay and dad meet her and her girlfriend “
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Great Chapter!!! I am glad Sarah is seeing how Bette and Tina belong together. Now I hope Tina’s grandparents will be kind to Bette. I hope the B&T find Tina’s dad. Thank you Ally
That was great and can’t wait to see Bette meet Tina’s grandparents. Please post more, thanks!
I’m going to agree with geekgal’s gay dad theory. Can’t wait for the intro to the grandparents.
I love how Bette and Tina support each other.
something is up with dad, might be gay? dunno but great updates!!! :)PPS
The Niall mystery deepens by the minute. I can’t wait to see what Tina’s grandparents think about Bette. They are young enough though to have a more open mind than some. Absolutely fabulous chapter Ally. PPS!
I think Tina’s dad is gay (and initially hid it) which is why they had an open marriage (so her mom could have sex with others)and was mad when she found out Tina was gay.
It’s almost sad to see this kinda defeated version of Sarah, who went from this formidable woman who her 6’5″ son was scared of to someone who will just let her kids make decisions about her business when she hadn’t been willing to make changes before. It seems like Niall’s devotion was returned in spades if not in quite such an obvious manner. It’s a nuanced thing but you do those so well, Ally. Thanks for posting!
Thanks for the update. I’m so glad Sarah is welcoming Bette this time around. It seems that this experience has softened her, maybe made her think about things more than she had to before. I agree with Jikes, I don’t like to see her feeling defeated but maybe this will eventually make her a stronger person…she’s a fighter.
Wow! The mystery thickens. Thank you for this story. Love it :)
Hello AllyE, Back at the farm and loving it. Good to get Finn’s thoughts on his time with Tina and Bette as well as on their relationship.Bette has been an absolute star in dealing with so much to get them there safe and sound.Tina is trying to sort through things in her head and I feel that she needs to discuss them with her father to get some resolution and closure.Bette and Tina’s baby talk was sweet.Now, where the heck can Tina’s dad be? I want her grand-parents to fall in love with Bette and tell Tina where her dad is.Only by facing problems and talking can things get truly sorted.More plaase of your magical writing and storytelling.Many thanks for it all, Your Loyal Fan.
Thanks for this posting! I was on the same wavelength as geekygal. Wouldn’t it be a strange twist if Niall is gay and the open relationship worked fine because it gave him a chance to dabble in the lifestyle freely. PPS
There are relationships where the strong, vocal partner is really not the strongest but the quiet one the rock. When the rock leaves, the “strong” one wanders about randomly looking for solace. Your 3 pages in like other writers 6 pages. Just detail and depth. So satisfying.
“”Mom isn’t going to be given an alternative ” Finn said” Ally, do you WANT me to hate an entire generation of Kennards? When’s Willow going to show up with her need for world domination? That would just round things out nicely.
Regardless of why Niall left, he is WRONG for abandoning the family business with no one there but Sarah. This is his children’s legacy and he is WRONG for just walking away and letting it possible just fail. I hope this helps Tina havew more respect for her mother. It is soooo easy to be a daddy’s girl and be judgemental. Been there, done that. PPS:o).
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