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Sweet Dreams-Chapter 4
I took a deep breath and rested my back against the headboard, preparing for this trip into my past. It’s a treacherous journey. For Tina, a journey into uncharted territory. She holds her breath, waiting for me to speak. I clear my throat nervously, searching for the right way to start.
“I’m a fraud!” I blurt out.
She looks at me as if I’ve grown two heads. Before she can speak, I try to explain myself.
“Just hear me out, please. There’s so much I need to tell you.”
Her expression darkens, and I can tell she’s finding it hard to maintain that eye contact with me, but she does. It’s almost as if she’s trying to read me.
“Let me just start from the beginning. I grew up in this really small town in Texas with my father, mother, and younger sister Kit.”
“Texas?!” She interrupts. “You told me you grew up in California! You have a sister?! You told me you were an only child!”
“Please Tina, just let me finish. This will all make sense once I explain. Please.”
She nods her agreement. Now she’s looking at me as if she’s trying to pierce me with her eyes. I’m almost afraid to carry on, but I can’t shrink back. I can’t let fear ruin our relationship. I can’t live this lie forever. So, I muster up the courage to continue.
“When I was 8, my father was diagnosed with schizophrenia. At first, the treatments and medication were working. He seemed like his usual self. For some reason when I was 11, something changed. He became introverted. He was paranoid. He was having hallucinations. He saw things and heard things that weren’t there. He became suspicious of everything and everyone. I remember once he thought that the FBI was tapping our phone so he took it outside and burned it, then ripped all the wiring from the wall. My mother was trying to be supportive, but his illness was a horrible burden to carry. He began to treat her like the enemy, suspecting that every time she left the house, she was reporting his activities and whereabouts to the FBI. My younger sister, who was 6 at the time, got the worst of it. She was too young to understand why Daddy acted like that. He treated her as if she didn’t even exist. I’m sure in his mind she was some kind of traitor too.”
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(41 votes, average: 3.37 out of 5)
wow… never would od guessed this… now the turth is out and hopefully bette is not like her father… the next step is she should go see a doctor and get tested… if there is such a test.. i have no clue.. but to answer your question.. please contiue.. you can build this story, there is so much you could write about… so i hope you give us all the loving and keep the story going…
That threw me for a loop! Great update. PPVS
I second that… I think if there’s a chance to continue beyond the 5chapters you’ve written, you should. In the meantime, NC-17s! As for Bette, I can totally understand the part about inheriting a disease. I have a lot of aunts and uncles that succumbed to cancer, so there’s a high chance that it can be genetics…
I am all for continuing this story, especially with NC17’s. Looking forward to more.
Oh wow, I wasn’t expecting that. How heartbreaking for Bette. I’m sure she is terrified of Tina rejecting her. Please do continue.
Terrible!!!
Oh wow…sooo good!!
wow!! i’d really like to see how things go for them after the wedding. thx-a bit breathless after Bette’s confession. DAMN!! That was hard yards for any kid. good s/l.
I agree with AmandaMG and i would like you to continue youre story
Wow. Intense chapter. I never would have guessed that this is what happened! But Bette is stronger than that, and she has Tina’s love and support. You should definitely continue this story with NC-17s! PPS! =)
That was some loop to the story. I hope that you continue. Thanks for posting!
DANG!!!!!!!, that is some story. As for your question, the second option would be great. Just continue to write this story with your hot NC-17’s, just don’t let Tina leave her. I think Bette may be fostering upon herself her fathers illness which may or may not be true and I would hope not for her and Tinas sake and their family. What a horrible burden to carry around for so long. Hopefully Tina will continue to love and help her. Great update. Thanks for posting.
DANG!!!!!!!, that is some story. As for your question, the second option would be great. Just continue to write this story with your hot NC-17’s, just don’t let Tina leave her. I think Bette may be fostering upon herself her fathers illness which may or may not be true and I would hope not for her and Tinas sake and their family. What a horrible burden to carry around for so long. Hopefully Tina will continue to love and help her. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Oh wow! What an interesting twist. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. You should definitely continue this story and write those NC-17s as well :)
Bette is not like her father. She has not shown the signs of the disease yet. At least she is aware of the possibility. So sad to lose her family like that.
I would really like to see you continue this story. Oh and those pesky NC -17’s…duh please keep writing those!!!
………………uummmm………………*crickets*……….so yeah um…..ok im speechless