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Sweet Dreams-Chapter 4
I paused, struggling to keep my composure. I knew the part of the story I had to tell next. The subject of my nightmares would be revealed. Her concern was once again one of worry. She grabbed my hand and held it between her own, encouraging me to continue. I sighed deeply.
“One night, a few days before my 12th birthday, I was awakened by the sound of screaming. I instantly recognized it as my sister’s. She slept in her bed on the other side of the room. I peaked my head from under the covers, and I saw blood spattering.”
My voice began to crack at this memory.
“My eyes focused, and I realized what was happening. My father was stabbing my little sister.” A lonely tear fell from my eye. I took a deep breath, knowing I had to continue.
“He was stabbing her, and blood was everywhere! Her screams were deafening. After a few moments, I only heard faint whimpering. I realized then that she was dead, and I had to get out of there, but there was no way out. He was by our bedroom door so he would have killed me too if I had tried to get by him. I frantically searched the room for a way out. There wasn’t any. He turned his head towards my bed, and I saw this sinister smile appear on his face. I knew he was coming for me next. I looked at the nightstand next to my bed and saw the lamp that his mother had given me for my birthday when I was 8. I knew it was heavy. When he got close to my bed, I did the only thing I could do. I hit him. He fell to the floor, and I ran out of the house as fast as I could. I went next door to the neighbor’s house. They were all standing on the porch. They told me they had heard the screaming coming from my house and had already called the cops. My adrenaline must have been running high because I wasn’t afraid, I wasn’t sad or upset as I waited for the cops to come. I was emotionless. I just sat and shivered. I remember how hot it was that day, but I sat there shivering.”
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(41 votes, average: 3.37 out of 5)
wow… never would od guessed this… now the turth is out and hopefully bette is not like her father… the next step is she should go see a doctor and get tested… if there is such a test.. i have no clue.. but to answer your question.. please contiue.. you can build this story, there is so much you could write about… so i hope you give us all the loving and keep the story going…
That threw me for a loop! Great update. PPVS
I second that… I think if there’s a chance to continue beyond the 5chapters you’ve written, you should. In the meantime, NC-17s! As for Bette, I can totally understand the part about inheriting a disease. I have a lot of aunts and uncles that succumbed to cancer, so there’s a high chance that it can be genetics…
I am all for continuing this story, especially with NC17’s. Looking forward to more.
Oh wow, I wasn’t expecting that. How heartbreaking for Bette. I’m sure she is terrified of Tina rejecting her. Please do continue.
Terrible!!!
Oh wow…sooo good!!
wow!! i’d really like to see how things go for them after the wedding. thx-a bit breathless after Bette’s confession. DAMN!! That was hard yards for any kid. good s/l.
I agree with AmandaMG and i would like you to continue youre story
Wow. Intense chapter. I never would have guessed that this is what happened! But Bette is stronger than that, and she has Tina’s love and support. You should definitely continue this story with NC-17s! PPS! =)
That was some loop to the story. I hope that you continue. Thanks for posting!
DANG!!!!!!!, that is some story. As for your question, the second option would be great. Just continue to write this story with your hot NC-17’s, just don’t let Tina leave her. I think Bette may be fostering upon herself her fathers illness which may or may not be true and I would hope not for her and Tinas sake and their family. What a horrible burden to carry around for so long. Hopefully Tina will continue to love and help her. Great update. Thanks for posting.
DANG!!!!!!!, that is some story. As for your question, the second option would be great. Just continue to write this story with your hot NC-17’s, just don’t let Tina leave her. I think Bette may be fostering upon herself her fathers illness which may or may not be true and I would hope not for her and Tinas sake and their family. What a horrible burden to carry around for so long. Hopefully Tina will continue to love and help her. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Oh wow! What an interesting twist. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. You should definitely continue this story and write those NC-17s as well :)
Bette is not like her father. She has not shown the signs of the disease yet. At least she is aware of the possibility. So sad to lose her family like that.
I would really like to see you continue this story. Oh and those pesky NC -17’s…duh please keep writing those!!!
………………uummmm………………*crickets*……….so yeah um…..ok im speechless