Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Phoenix Rising (11)
Login to add story to favorites
(29 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Chapter 11
Bette sat on the couch staring at the clock on the wall. The minutes ticked by slowly as she stared ahead. After what seemed liked hours she let her head fall into her hands as yet another wave of remorse hit her. After a few moments she got up and started pacing and running her hands through her hair. Finally she heard a knock at the door. She ran to the door and pulled it open.
“Kit…Kit…Come in…Did you see her? Is she alright? Kit…Please…”
Bette covered her face as the tears streamed down her face. Kit grabbed her sister and pulled her into a hug.
“Bette, calm down…let’s sit down…C’mon”
Kit led Bette to the kitchen table and held a chair for her.
“Please Kit…Please…”
“Okay…Bette here goes…I found her at the airport…She said she was in a car accident and Bette I ain’t gonna lie to you…She’s banged up something bad. She’s got bruises on her face, her head and her eye… Bette…there are stitches and…it’s so swollen. She has a cast on her right wrist and she’s favoring her right leg…um, a lot… and she was walking like her back or ribs hurt.”
Bette gasped and stared at Kit as she brought her hand to her mouth.
“Shit Kit, what else.”
“Bette…she’s really thin, and she looks…oh I don’t know…tired…”
Bette whispered through her tears.
“Was she glad to see you?”
Kit gave her sister a sweet smile.
“Oh course she was happy to see me…She looks different, but she’s still the same sweet Baby Girl as always.”
Bette managed a smile.
“Kit…what the fuck is going on?”
“Baby Sis, I pretty much told you what I saw, and what she told me…but Bette if you ask me, that girls been down a hard road.”
Bette released a wail as she buried her head in her hands and sobbed.
“I did this Kit…I did this to her….Kit, how the fuck am I going to make this right? Kit…I have to make this right…I have to.”
Kit took her sister in her arms and rocked her and then spoke quietly in her ear.
“You listen to me, and you listen good, Bette. You fucked up…big time… and you’ve been paying for it. Tina made her own choices. Whatever has been going on in her life has been up to her. You can make a choice Baby Sis, you can continue to be sorry for all that has happened to you two or you can pull yourself together and you can be there for her and start lookin’ toward the future.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I really love this story you’re writting it perfect thank you
I really love this story and can’t wait for them to finally meet again. Alice, Shane, Kit and Dana are the truest of friends. True friends are there for you even at your worst. Please post again soon.
Oh Bette is right. That was so beautiful. I just love your Kit she does have it all together. Awesome
This story – really twists the heart.
Poor Bette. She must be crawling the walls emotionally. That letter was perfect!
Oh Wow. Thank you so much writing this Dazed. Awesome.
Loved this chapter, and I too loved this version Kit. Beautiful, please post soon!
sweet of Bette…letting her know she is there but also staying at a distance
Dazed, you’re ROCKING this story. It’s one of my favorites. Thanks for the tears you had me shed.
another great chapter… lets hope tina lets her in so they both can heal each other… pps
I love the way you’re writing this. Bette must be going crazy inside. PPS
Whew!and thanks for drama I can respect.
Excellent thank you. So emotional but oh so lovely as well.
Warm and loving chapter, even if it does hurt reading each and every word. They are both in so much pain, plus Bette has a humungous level of guilt heaped on top of the hurt and pain. Hopefully when Tinas’ bruises and swelling has gone down she will talk to Bette and maybe they can begin to heal. And I don’t think they will heal until they can talk to each other, neither of them has moved very far from that night of Provocations and the ensuing hurt and guilt. Bette should let Tina know that the accounts are still jointly held and she should avail herself of anything that she needs. Bette should offer to get her a car for when she is able to get around a bit by herself. Tina knows how generous Bette can be and Bette would want to do this for her. Kit should tell Bette to do this if she has not thought of it herself. This was an awesome chapter and you have not failed to make me cry a little with each chapter so far. Very moving story. Thanks for posting.
Love this Kit.the story is awesome. Maybe Tina will heal quickly. thanks
I don’t think it will be that long before Tina calls or sees Bette, but I’d imagine that it’s going to feel like forever to her. Thanks for posting, DnA. :)
Loving this story. Tina needs to let Bette in.pps
Yes, it is your Bette Tina. She will always be there for you as you will be for her too. This must be hard for Bette I hope Tina will let Bette in but what a friends the others are. I wish I have them too lol. Very emotional. PPVS
Your story is just getting better and better…thank you for posting so soon…my heart ached reading Bette’s message…wonderful update!
They need each other,great story.
Such a beautiful card. It should give Tina some strength and courage.
oh that’s sweet!
I cannot imagine how hard it is for Bette to silently stand by…..and yet she knows nothing of what has happened to tina or how she looks and when she gets that opportunity she will freak for sure….oh this story is so heartbreaking but I love it…..