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Phoenix Rising (11)
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Bette stood up and flailed her arms.
“Kit, I know…I don’t know how…All I want to is go over there, put her in the car, take her home, and take care of her …Shit Kit… “
“Listen Bette…This isn’t about what you want, or need.”
“I know Kit! Give me some credit…Please…?”
Kit looked at her sister and saw the woman before her for the first time since she came in the door. She motioned for Bette to sit next to her.
“Come sit down with me Bette. I’m sorry. You’re right Bette…you do deserve some credit…you’ve changed…Oh course you wanna take her in your arms and take care of her…it must be hard not to be able to do that. I’m sorry.”
Kit wrapped her arms around Bette and pulled her into her as Bette rested her head on Kit’s shoulder and sobbed. After several minutes Bette whispered.
“Kit…something bad happened didn’t it?”
“I don’t think life has been too kind to Tina, no…I’m sorry Bette.”
Bette held tightly to her sister and just let the tears fall.
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As soon as Tina and Alice got in the door to Alice’s apartment, Alice helped Tina to the bedroom, and she collapsed on the bed. While Tina slept Alice touched base with work and then got on the phone with Shane and Kit and pieced together a plan for someone to be with Tina over the next few days. Dana would be returning in four days and that would help a lot. She then went to the store and when she returned she tried to make room for Tina’s things. With that done, she sat at her computer and started to catch up on work.
After about 2 hours she heard something at the door and went to see what was up. As she approached the door she saw something on the floor. She bent down and picked it up and found she was holding a card with Tina’s name written on it in a very familiar hand writing. Alice smiled a very sad smile and returned to the living room looking at the card.
“Hey Al, sorry I slept so long.”
“Oh…oh Tina, you’re up…”
“Al, you look like you’ve seen a ghost what’s wrong?”
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I really love this story you’re writting it perfect thank you
I really love this story and can’t wait for them to finally meet again. Alice, Shane, Kit and Dana are the truest of friends. True friends are there for you even at your worst. Please post again soon.
Oh Bette is right. That was so beautiful. I just love your Kit she does have it all together. Awesome
This story – really twists the heart.
Poor Bette. She must be crawling the walls emotionally. That letter was perfect!
Oh Wow. Thank you so much writing this Dazed. Awesome.
Loved this chapter, and I too loved this version Kit. Beautiful, please post soon!
sweet of Bette…letting her know she is there but also staying at a distance
Dazed, you’re ROCKING this story. It’s one of my favorites. Thanks for the tears you had me shed.
another great chapter… lets hope tina lets her in so they both can heal each other… pps
I love the way you’re writing this. Bette must be going crazy inside. PPS
Whew!and thanks for drama I can respect.
Excellent thank you. So emotional but oh so lovely as well.
Warm and loving chapter, even if it does hurt reading each and every word. They are both in so much pain, plus Bette has a humungous level of guilt heaped on top of the hurt and pain. Hopefully when Tinas’ bruises and swelling has gone down she will talk to Bette and maybe they can begin to heal. And I don’t think they will heal until they can talk to each other, neither of them has moved very far from that night of Provocations and the ensuing hurt and guilt. Bette should let Tina know that the accounts are still jointly held and she should avail herself of anything that she needs. Bette should offer to get her a car for when she is able to get around a bit by herself. Tina knows how generous Bette can be and Bette would want to do this for her. Kit should tell Bette to do this if she has not thought of it herself. This was an awesome chapter and you have not failed to make me cry a little with each chapter so far. Very moving story. Thanks for posting.
Love this Kit.the story is awesome. Maybe Tina will heal quickly. thanks
I don’t think it will be that long before Tina calls or sees Bette, but I’d imagine that it’s going to feel like forever to her. Thanks for posting, DnA. :)
Loving this story. Tina needs to let Bette in.pps
Yes, it is your Bette Tina. She will always be there for you as you will be for her too. This must be hard for Bette I hope Tina will let Bette in but what a friends the others are. I wish I have them too lol. Very emotional. PPVS
Your story is just getting better and better…thank you for posting so soon…my heart ached reading Bette’s message…wonderful update!
They need each other,great story.
Such a beautiful card. It should give Tina some strength and courage.
oh that’s sweet!
I cannot imagine how hard it is for Bette to silently stand by…..and yet she knows nothing of what has happened to tina or how she looks and when she gets that opportunity she will freak for sure….oh this story is so heartbreaking but I love it…..