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UNBREAKABLE CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 3
*****FLASHBACK****
His fist came from nowhere…It punched Tina’s head back against the kitchen wall…She started crying…Trying to say “sorry” for giving him broccoli instead of carrots with his dinner…But Henry wasn’t listening to Angie’s mother…He was incandescent with rage…In a blind fury…
Lost in a fog of anger…
He punched Tina over and over again…Then the brute grabbed her hair, and dragged her away from the wall…Yelling at her, telling her she was “a Lez” and saying she was “good for nothing”
Mikey was there…He was screaming from the sofa at Henry, begging him to stop…But not daring to move, frightened his father’s anger would turn on him for trying to interfere…
And there, huddled in the corner, was a little girl. She had tears streaming down her cheeks as she watched the horror in front of her unfold. As she rocked back and forth, she put her hands over her ears, trying to block out the sound of her mother’s cries of pain…..
PRESENT NIGHT
Angie kept seeing this evenings events run through her mind…She saw them in slow motion…
She couldn’t sleep…She felt so alone…This strange place she was in was scary and eerily quiet…All the other kids had been sleeping when she got into her tiny steel bed, complete with a lumpy mattress…The dormitory was huge…It smelled rancid…
It was dark and very intimidating place, especially to a small child…
Tears streamed from her eyes as she wondered what would become of her…What if her mom died? She’d be all alone in the world…She would not have a mommy anymore! Who would take care of her? She’d probably have to live here forever!…Henry wouldn’t want her…He didn’t like her…He said she was a bad seed…He had yelled at her tonight…In front of her mother (which he had never done before)
He had called her a “half-breed” What did that mean? she thought What did “Lez” mean? She didn’t understand…
She said her prayers and talked to God…the teachers at school had told her God saw everything…So she asked the “Big Fellow” as her brother called him to wave his magic wand and make everything better…She hoped he’d listen and make Henry nice. And if he didn’t maybe the wish she made on her birthday would come true? – Maybe her, mommy and Mikey would move away from Henry…She sure hoped that wishes came true…Because Henry was a bad man…
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(32 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
I just finished the 2nd chapter and there is chapter 3…I’m a mess…Oh my God…Please tell me at some point things get better…but I am seriously hooked…Thank you…and PPS…
I am hooked too. You have my heart breaking for Angie and Tina. And frightened as ever for Mickey
Kill the basterd, coward!
Where is Bette? Angie could be with her
I would think of Angie and to hell with Henry, I,m afraid that I myself would end up killing him if he touch me in angry again. Kill or be killed. that he will do. he will kill her sooner or later. thanks
so sad, heatbreaking, hope Tina will tell police about henry so they can put him away forever. Bette where is Bette! Please post more, thanks!
Thanks for the second gift. It hard to see Tona this way. She should be able to tell Henry to step off if not for herself then for Angie. What a pickle. Great story
2 really really heartbreaking chapters. There is some good coming right? Thank you for this story am sure it must have been tough to write.
This is one of the most difficult post I ever read. I am crying and my heart hurts. Can Tina tell the police where to find Bette and ask the Social services to bring Angie to her? please, fix this as soon as possible.PPVS
This is a nightmare.PPS
God! I read this with my hand pressed against my chest the entire three chapters! It’s intense…it’s powerful…it’s heartbreaking…and I wish I could read the next chapter right now!! Damn, this is good! Thanks for posting!
my breathing just slowed down, fuck!!!where is Bette?????Angie and Tina need you and kill Henry please!