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UNBREAKABLE CHAPTER 3
Angelica curled up into the fetal position and cried uncontrollably, she silently wished she had Hamlet with her…She missed him…He would have made her feel safe…
Eventually she drifted off into a fitfull sleep, full of monsters and other dark, scary things that nightmares are made of.
MEANWHILE AT THE HOSPITAL….
The detectives walked into the sterile white room that smelled of germoline….And audibly gasped…
The blonde woman was hooked up to various monitors and her face was a mess…Both Her eyes were black and very swollen…her face looked disfigured as one of her cheeks had swelled up like balloon…
Dylan’s stomach lurched as she took in the broken sight before her…
Tina had cuts and bruises on every visible part of her body…Dried blood was in her drab, lanky blonde hair…It was even inside her earlobe…
There was a cut on her bottom lip that was very swollen, and there was what appeared to be two smaller cuts, close together, on her upper lip.
"What do you suppose caused those?" Angus said, indicating the smaller cuts.
"Her teeth," Dylan stated, fighting down the bile that had risen to her throat.
“Mrs Morgan?..” Angus said softly…
“Tina?..”
The blonde visibly winced as she slowly opened her painful swollen eyes…Her mouth was dry…She tried to clear her throat to answer…
“You want some water Tina?” Dylan asked…
A slight sound came out the blonde’s mouth…Dylan took that as a ‘yes’ and went to fill up the jug that was lying alongside a glass at the side of the bed
“Tina ,I’m DCI Parsons and the woman who just spoke to you is DCI Moorland…We are here to talk to you about what happened this evening..”
Dylan walked over to Angelica’s mother and put the glass of water to the battered women’s swollen, cut lips. She tilted the glass and Tina sipped the drink a few times…Wincing every time she closed her mouth…Then she moved her head slightly to indicate she’d had enough…
“Ang…W-Where’s Angie?” Tina asked with great difficulty…
Her voice was barely more than a whisper, her vocal chords had sustained some damage from the screaming she did during the beating.
“I’m afraid because we were unable to trace any relatives Mrs Morgan we had to put Angelica in the hands of Social Services…
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(32 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
I just finished the 2nd chapter and there is chapter 3…I’m a mess…Oh my God…Please tell me at some point things get better…but I am seriously hooked…Thank you…and PPS…
I am hooked too. You have my heart breaking for Angie and Tina. And frightened as ever for Mickey
Kill the basterd, coward!
Where is Bette? Angie could be with her
I would think of Angie and to hell with Henry, I,m afraid that I myself would end up killing him if he touch me in angry again. Kill or be killed. that he will do. he will kill her sooner or later. thanks
so sad, heatbreaking, hope Tina will tell police about henry so they can put him away forever. Bette where is Bette! Please post more, thanks!
Thanks for the second gift. It hard to see Tona this way. She should be able to tell Henry to step off if not for herself then for Angie. What a pickle. Great story
2 really really heartbreaking chapters. There is some good coming right? Thank you for this story am sure it must have been tough to write.
This is one of the most difficult post I ever read. I am crying and my heart hurts. Can Tina tell the police where to find Bette and ask the Social services to bring Angie to her? please, fix this as soon as possible.PPVS
This is a nightmare.PPS
God! I read this with my hand pressed against my chest the entire three chapters! It’s intense…it’s powerful…it’s heartbreaking…and I wish I could read the next chapter right now!! Damn, this is good! Thanks for posting!
my breathing just slowed down, fuck!!!where is Bette?????Angie and Tina need you and kill Henry please!