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FORCE of NATURE
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FORCE of NATURE
Chapter 14
Pasta al Dente
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Previously:
The dance reached its end and both women paused before breaking the frame of their embrace. Bette’s heart raced when the blonde’s eyes dropped from their shared gaze to her lips. It was the universal sign she would follow with a kiss had a sudden thought not intervened.
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‘I’ve got to do this right!’ Bette froze with the thought, derailing her sensual response. Tina’s gaze was caressing her lips and their held hands was stroking her desire; the words she spoke did not stand a chance of coming out smoothly, they were in direct conflict with the motivating force of the moment. “I… I want to date you.” She blurted. ‘WTF!?… great Porter, just great… way to go…’ Bette had had a lead-in, segue of sorts planned after dinner and it sounded nothing like the blunt statement she just uttered.
Tina read the brunette’s lips before she heard the words. Bette’s voice sounded distant as though it traveled much further than the half-step between them. She brought her eyes up to meet the brunette’s and responded to the fear darting across the deep brown eyes.
Bette watched the blonde’s expression change and without taking time to understand the tenderness in the hazel eyes she jumped head first into a rambled discourse of the tangent thoughts around her desire to ‘date’ Tina.
“I know what you’re thinking…” She interjected hurriedly before the blonde could say a word.
Tina was surprised by Bette’s presumption for she had not had time to think beyond how endearingly vulnerable the brunette mommy had suddenly become.
Bette dropped her eyes to their held hands and nervously spoke as she brought the blonde’s hand between them to be held in both of her own.
Caressing Tina’s hand with both of her thumbs, the brunette rambled. “I know our children are friends and our dating… well… it doesn’t have to create problems… we’re both mature adults and really if you think about it, their friendship is more of a reason in favor of our dating than a reason against it… and I know you’re worried about moving on.. I would never rush…” She looked quickly into the hazel eyes. “I hope you know that… I know I have a past that is hardly representative of stability but I’m … I’m… umm… “
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So cute and not really proper work time reading. Hope there’s enough time before the rain for you to fix things. The only mechanical belts I’ve replaced are on a vacuum cleaner. I’m impressed!
One plate one love. Yes it’s funny to read the whining comments when people are teased by our stories. I wrote a tease once and busted up laughing over the remarks. But I promised not to be a tease. But that one someone enjoyed me to tease a bit. I think a tease is only good when you’re going to post right away. **hink** a tease then a long wait makes you a big tease. So don’t be a Big Tease. Please.
Wew I finally was able to catch up. Quite the love story you have going here. I see the two of them with the one dish just as the kids ordered. That’s so perfect yea to Kit for fufilling her part to a T. Nice dancing too. Thans SK this is just so sweet.
You’re right, sk, a kiss and a song got you right back in good graces. Now then! You’ve just to give us all even *more*. ;) I hope you got the tractor fixed. Thanks for posting! :)
No one writes a romantic story quite like you. I remember the first time (yes I read it several times) I read Rhythmic Freedom. I was as deep in love as Bette was with Tina. Looks like I am in for another one of those rides that I can get completely lost in.
Mmm…that was good…exceptionally good and sexy…thanks for spoiling us
This story is getting sweeter and sweeter. Just luv it. PPS Thanks so much for sharing with us your fascinating stories.
Oh Excellenty wonderfully brilliant! Thank you SK. This story is just so charmingly romantic. Good luck with the tractor. Thank you for this wonderful story.
this story is so sweet I am loving it.
That helped a little, sk. I guess you are off the hook…for now. Love the frequent posts. Thanks and good luck with the mower belt; although, I think that I feel sorrier for the mowing deck that is about to be assaulted, lol!
Those three posts were actually one chapter, right?
come on sunkissed you can do the tractor easy hey lol.I think a page is missing sunkissed lol.Like lodeerca said, those three posts were a chapter right???? pmsl.
”Thank you all for you kindness and time. I’m enjoying the revisal of this story and looking forward to the chapters to come!” – No, no sunkissed – we should be thanking -you- for your time, and as for looking forward to the chapters… we can’t wait! thanks sk ;-)
After this very lovely post, I guess I can relent and take back the charge of “meanie.” Loved the chapter and what is happening with them is so sweet. It is so much fun to watch in my minds eye and read. You do have such a way with words. Really enjoying the reprisal. Thanks for posting. PPS
This story is just too cute for words. I love the “Lady and The Tramp” dinner set up! My neck of the woods is expecting rain all weekend also. That means a lot of reading time will be available. Maybe you should post some more cliffy chapters for us while you’re being rained on! :)
oh so so cute – as cute as their kids. Ok – that will help for now, but like everyone above, I need more! You have created a beast, and no amount of deflection with your tractor excitement is gonna keep us down! PPS!
Oh so wonderful, but oh so short. Need another fix soon please.
Ah SK…that was so beautifully written. Ok…the Etta James wore me down. You are back in all our good graces…only because I so adore your story! Sigh…I won’t be calling your brother, or Dr. Drew Pinsky. Perhaps your brother can help Lindsay Lohan? Kidding.
What an absolutely delightful story