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UNBREAKABLE CH TWENTY-THREE
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CHAPTER 23
Bette walked out to the lobby of the hospital to see the kids.
The minute Angie saw her, she bolted right over into Bette’s arms…
"Is sh-she ok?" Angie asked, "Is my mommy g-gonna be ok?"
Bette held her daughter close…
"You better believe it kiddo! – I just spoke with her doctor and he said she’s gonna be just fine" Bette answered, smiling.. "I’m gonna stay with her tonite in case she needs anything, but then she can come home in a couple of days"
Bette’s words made Candace’s heart sink…What did she mean by "come home"?
"Ah Bette? I think maybe we should have a talk? Don’t you?" Candace asked…
Bette let Angie go, stood up, and looked at Candy…
"We will, I promise, but not tonite. It’s already been one hell of a busy day and I think you should get these kids home and to sleep?"
"NO Momma, I want to stay here with you!" Angie cried.
Angelica’s words brought tears to Bette and Candace’s eyes, but for completely different reasons…
For Bette, it was hearing a name she had longed to hear for so many years…
For Candace, it was confirmation of something she had suspected for a long time…
Bette looked up to meet Candace’s eyes…
"Momma?" Candy asked in a slightly accusingly way…Sounding shocked.
"Later" Bette replied, "We’ll talk about it all later."
"Damn straight we will!" Candace snapped back.
Mikey walked over then and held out his hand.
"My name is Michael Morgan….But everyone calls me Mikey"
Bette took his outstretched hand in her own.
"It’s nice to meet you Mikey, my name is Bette…. Bette Porter"
"Uhmmm…this whole night has been really hectic and confusing…But if I’ve put things together right in my head, I think I have it worked out" Mikey said…Pacing a little and scratching his head…
"You’re the woman my dad was accusing Tina of being with today aren’t you? The woman she used to be involved with?"
"Yes, Tina and I used to be a couple…But I never saw her today until you all showed up at my house… ah..I mean our house" Bette caught herself..She glanced over at Candy apologetically…Feeling guilty for the pain this was causing…
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Let me guess, Henry the Horrible has shown up to try and wreak more havoc in the lives of his family. Hope he ends up in jail for good! Thanks for the post!
Oh man, not again..give them a break! lol, I think Scotty need to knock Henry down again. thanks for the post, PPS.
Great job, love this story. I just hope it’s Alice or Kit at the door.
I hate that mother fucker Henry. He really needs to die. Seriously. Drop fucking dead. On another note, I’ve loved your story for awhile and can’t wait for more. Thank you.
This guy just doesn’t stop…but Angie’s right, Momma B will take care of him, and then help take care of all of them in a totally different way. :-) Thanks!
If it is henry at the door, I hope the boys and candy beat the living hell out of him. Hopefully candy won’t be vindictive and let the children go with henry, he only has legal rights to Mikey, not the others and they don’t have to go with him and I don’t really think Angie will go with him anyway. They should call the police if it is him and not let him in the house. PPS
If it is henry at the door, I hope the boys and candy beat the living hell out of him. Hopefully candy won’t be vindictive and let the children go with henry, he only has legal rights to Mikey, not the others and they don’t have to go with him and I don’t really think Angie will go with him anyway. They should call the police if it is him and not let him in the house. PPS
Oh man Damn Henry’s at the door right! Can someone just please kick his butt? Thank you fro this story.
Hope that isn’t Henry at the door because the odds are if anyone ends up hurt or dead after another violent encounter it won’t be Henry. I don’t expect any heroics from Mikey or Angie so likely Scott or Candace will take action. Imagine if either one of them gets killed in the process? They are the innocent bystanders and now they are caught up in this drama. I’m not a Candace fan (even though we don’t know how she ended up with Bette in this story) but I have to give her kudos for taking responsibility for three stranger’s children while her lover takes care of an ex-lover. Not only an ex but an ex with a child she didn’t know existed. Under the circumstances she had every right to walk out and leave Bette to care for Tina and the kids since it’s apparent that Candace has been nothing but a place holder for however many years they’ve been together. Now that Tina shows up out of the blue does she just get tossed aside and Bette resumes her happy life with her wife and daughter? I’m anxious to see how all this plays out. Thanks for the intrigue.
OMG What the hell is going on now? hope its not hendick again, he need to be gone and never see him again. Please post more, thanks!
Hey IILWT, This story is totally heating up now.Bette and Tina are together with Bette refusing to leave her former lover.I can understand why Candy is so pissed but true love never dies.Angie was precious when she was talking to her another mother.Mikey was the best big brother as he protected his little sister.Now I just hope it isn’t Henry banging on the door…You are so mean for leaving it there. I hope to read more posts soon.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
If this is henry then man be prepared because you won’t get away this time. But I think it is the police. Maybe Angus and Dylan found Henry and got Bette address. They want to make sure Tina and the kids are fine. PPVS
Argh! This story is sucking me in! PPVS
This is such a powerful story to read.At times it is almost unbearable to read. Emotions run very high while reading this very difficult subject. Congratulations for a job well done. Look forward to more posts.
Wow i just could’nt stop reading it, if thats henry at the door i hope they shoot him.
Henry again?Call the police…PPS
Maybe Candace will cowboy up and shoot the slug; about time she did something positive