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UNBREAKABLE CH TWENTY-THREE
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"And you’re Angelica’s other mother?…Is that right?" Mikey asked.
"Yes" Bette confirmed, looking at Candace again, who looked away as the tears formed…No way was she gonna show weakness. ..
Bette had some serious fuckin’ explaining to do..
"Ok.." Mikey said, then he bent down and picked up Angie, "Wow kid, that’s a lot of info to get in a short period of time huh!?"
Angie nodded her head as she yawned. She snuggled her head down onto her brother’s shoulder…
"But Momma B’s here now – She’ll make everything ok again. I know she will Mikey…. She’ll protect us all from Daddy Henry" The little girl said softly as she started to doze off in Mikey’s arms…
Mikey looked up and his gaze met Bette’s…Her heart went out to this poor boy who had to become a man so early in life…She felt a tenderness towards him…She could see he was clearly crazy about Angie.
Candace broke the silence…
"Come on kids, let’s get you back to the house. We’ll all get a good night’s sleep and figure some things out in the morning"
She stated, getting the kids moving toward the exit doors.
"Thanks Candy," Bette said.
Candace turned around, stared at Bette for a moment, tears clearly evident in her eyes…
But she didnt reply to her lover..She just turned around and followed the kids out the door…
"I can’t even believe this is happening!" Bette mumbled, as she headed back to Tina’s room…
MEANWHILE
It was basically a quiet car ride on the way back to Bette’s house.
Angie was asleep in the back seat and the rest of them made small talk sometimes…
When they pulled into the driveway, they got out of the car, and Candy and Scott waited while Mikey picked up Angie. Then they all went into the house together…
"Is anybody hungry?" Candace asked.
"No, I’m just so tired," Scott replied…."And hey, thanks for letting us crash here"
"It’s no problem at all" Candy said with with a look of genuine sincerity.
"Uhm… I think I should sleep with Angie tonite" Mikey said, "So when she wakes up, at least something will be familiar…"
"Good idea" Candace agreed. "Ok, you and Angie can sleep in the guest bedroom and Scott can crash out here on the sofa…Does that work for everyone?"
"Yep" They agreed.
After about 30 minutes, the lights went out in the house…
And about 10 minutes after that…
A loud hammering on the front door began…
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Let me guess, Henry the Horrible has shown up to try and wreak more havoc in the lives of his family. Hope he ends up in jail for good! Thanks for the post!
Oh man, not again..give them a break! lol, I think Scotty need to knock Henry down again. thanks for the post, PPS.
Great job, love this story. I just hope it’s Alice or Kit at the door.
I hate that mother fucker Henry. He really needs to die. Seriously. Drop fucking dead. On another note, I’ve loved your story for awhile and can’t wait for more. Thank you.
This guy just doesn’t stop…but Angie’s right, Momma B will take care of him, and then help take care of all of them in a totally different way. :-) Thanks!
If it is henry at the door, I hope the boys and candy beat the living hell out of him. Hopefully candy won’t be vindictive and let the children go with henry, he only has legal rights to Mikey, not the others and they don’t have to go with him and I don’t really think Angie will go with him anyway. They should call the police if it is him and not let him in the house. PPS
If it is henry at the door, I hope the boys and candy beat the living hell out of him. Hopefully candy won’t be vindictive and let the children go with henry, he only has legal rights to Mikey, not the others and they don’t have to go with him and I don’t really think Angie will go with him anyway. They should call the police if it is him and not let him in the house. PPS
Oh man Damn Henry’s at the door right! Can someone just please kick his butt? Thank you fro this story.
Hope that isn’t Henry at the door because the odds are if anyone ends up hurt or dead after another violent encounter it won’t be Henry. I don’t expect any heroics from Mikey or Angie so likely Scott or Candace will take action. Imagine if either one of them gets killed in the process? They are the innocent bystanders and now they are caught up in this drama. I’m not a Candace fan (even though we don’t know how she ended up with Bette in this story) but I have to give her kudos for taking responsibility for three stranger’s children while her lover takes care of an ex-lover. Not only an ex but an ex with a child she didn’t know existed. Under the circumstances she had every right to walk out and leave Bette to care for Tina and the kids since it’s apparent that Candace has been nothing but a place holder for however many years they’ve been together. Now that Tina shows up out of the blue does she just get tossed aside and Bette resumes her happy life with her wife and daughter? I’m anxious to see how all this plays out. Thanks for the intrigue.
OMG What the hell is going on now? hope its not hendick again, he need to be gone and never see him again. Please post more, thanks!
Hey IILWT, This story is totally heating up now.Bette and Tina are together with Bette refusing to leave her former lover.I can understand why Candy is so pissed but true love never dies.Angie was precious when she was talking to her another mother.Mikey was the best big brother as he protected his little sister.Now I just hope it isn’t Henry banging on the door…You are so mean for leaving it there. I hope to read more posts soon.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
If this is henry then man be prepared because you won’t get away this time. But I think it is the police. Maybe Angus and Dylan found Henry and got Bette address. They want to make sure Tina and the kids are fine. PPVS
Argh! This story is sucking me in! PPVS
This is such a powerful story to read.At times it is almost unbearable to read. Emotions run very high while reading this very difficult subject. Congratulations for a job well done. Look forward to more posts.
Wow i just could’nt stop reading it, if thats henry at the door i hope they shoot him.
Henry again?Call the police…PPS
Maybe Candace will cowboy up and shoot the slug; about time she did something positive