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Is it Finally The End of The Road – Follow up Chapter 4
Con’t…
The elevator suddenly jerked, causing the women to grab for the walls of the compartment, and at the same time knocking the two bottles of water over. “Shit!” Bette watched as they started to roll away, and then without thinking she leaned to the side stretching her arm out to grab them, the movement causing her shirt to stretch across her stomach.
Tina’s eyes went wide as she took in the scene before her…all the snacks which had never before been a part of Bette’s diet…the box of ginger candy…and Bette stretching to grab the bottles.
“Oh my God,” Tina gasped, covering her mouth with her hand. “You’re pregnant!”
Chapter 4
Bette froze, her outstretched arm just an inch short of the bottle she had been trying to save. Afraid to look at Tina she slowly moved back to her original position, keeping her eyes down and protectively spreading her hands over her stomach.
For a moment neither woman spoke, then finally when the silence had reached a point of being deafening, Bette lifted her head. She stared into Tina’s eyes as her own filled with tears, and a smile that started out tentative in a flash burst forth with such pride and joy it was heartbreaking in the best of all possible ways.
“Yes,” she whispered.
As Tina watched Bette’s heart visibly expand with her announcement, she was unable to keep her own from breaking into shards. She stifled a sob that threatened to escape, not wanting to take away an ounce of Bette’s happiness.
Bette watched the myriad of emotions cross Tina’s face, confused by the deep pain that was there for a second, and then quickly replaced with a smile.
“Wow,” Tina finally choked out.
“Yes,” Bette repeated, almost as if she herself couldn’t believe it.
Tina lowered her head, her fingers fiddling with each other. “I’m happy for you Bette,” she managed to get out before clapping her mouth shut, afraid of the bile that was threatening.
“Thank you,” Bette responded sincerely. “I was incredibly lucky and got pregnant after only three months.” Bette studied Tina while neither of them spoke. She realized that Tina was not only feeling some kind of emotional pain over her news, but was truly shocked as well. “I guess I thought that Alice might have said something to you by now.”
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geekygal says
LOL – “I have to pee” – soo funny! Love this story..and here i thought Bette was thinking of something else :)
scarlett26 says
Oh, she was definitely thinking something else! :) This is great. PPS!
mette hartmann says
Oh God seahurst, what a priceless way to end this post.
tiggerbounced says
Oh god, Seahurst, I blame you for getting me shushed and evil-stared at in the library. School library to be exact. The last line just made me burst out laughing, that was amazing comedic relief. =D I was breathing a sigh of relief when I read that Jodie wasn’t a part of the process, totally phew. hahaha, thanks so much for this, and don’t leave us hanging again please!! =))
funnyone says
I TOLD YOU that the baby daddy would be pale! Well, OK, maybe you’d already figured that part out. Did Bette claim to have to pee just so she could watch Tina empty the bottle?
monrazz says
LOL. I am sure she had the urge to do something! Thanks for the one and please post soon!!!!!
theJadedRogue says
*waving from the shadows* — Hey, some of us don’t wanna write, remember that! No amount of PMs will change that, darling, Sea :) – but it is nice to see you back and writing!
mc says
As always – you write so damn well- you leave me wanting more just like Bette wants Tina and Tina wants Bette. More please.
didi1956 says
What a great story,looking forward to the next chapter.
robbeedee says
Hey Seahurst, That is still much emotional pull between Bette an Tina so they have to work at it and seee where it takes them. They belong together and need to have a little faith in each other to deal with the past and work on a future together.I hope that these green shoots get a change to grow into a full blossoming partnership. You have create a beautiful and twisted tale which I love. More please as I need my fix.Just utterly magical.Many thakns from Your Loyal Fan.
pattifloatn says
Oh man, thank goodness jodi is not in the picture. I do hope that with time Bette and Tina can move forward in their relationship, whether as friends, co-parents or lovers (I vote for lovers).
Madcapper says
I’m surrounded by pregnant ladies at work. “I have to pee” totally make me laugh! Enjoyed the post, thanks.
Gumby says
I GOT A SHOUT-OUT, I GOT A SHOUT-OUT!!! Yeah for me! OK, now that I’m done with that, I have one thing to say before I write my comment. Jaded–what if we begged you to kill someone off if you returned to writing? Would that help?! LOL! I know that you said this chapter was short, and it was because I’m really into this story, but it was well worth it and I’m happy to have gotten it! Great writing, I can see that things are looking up for them. Even if they remained friends, which I beg for you NOT to let that happen, at least they have some relationship. Please post soon!
BetteAndTinaForever says
from serious to hilarious…what a treat…thanks
24betteandtina says
So…how do you know that my deepest, darkest fantasy is a pregnant Bette! Loving your story!
Massmom says
It’s all in the details, and this chapter has some great ones. Your writing here is tender and funny and thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks!
Vixien00 says
Thank you for this story. It’s beautiful the interaction between B&T !!:)Post sooon!!!!!!!!!!
viceroy says
Love this story. Bette being pregnant can only lead to more funny moments, esp with Tina. Can’t wait or more.
lodeerca says
Priceless! I love this story! Thank you for writing it!
allyemmerson says
i think getting a certain Seahurst to write more is something that might need a PM campaign. Brilliant and just so darn good x
favcouple says
THis was just simply amazing. Love this story and this update. So beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Sammer says
Thanks for the update. I give Tina a lot of credit for being able to swallow the pain she was feeling and just show Bette that she truly is happy for her. Now, if we can only keep them trapped on that elevator long enough for them to both realize they’re still right for each other….
Zuzu's Petals says
Seatails… i just LOVE your writing. i finished this and immediately checked to see when you posted it so i’d have some idea of when i could begin to whine:’pleeeeeze post sooooon…’ I know you initially thought this would be a shorter story- but I hope you are rethinking that. Sincerely, Your toe tapping (hypocrite) fan.
thetagirl says
haha love it!!! keep going!
thetagirl says
haha love it!!! keep going!
tibettenation1 says
Lol this hilarious and heartbreaking,wondering if Tina is dating someone she never answered the question..please update the story