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Lazy Afternoons
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Bette stared into the night as she tried to focus on the building in front of her. She knew it was the club they were in search of, but sitting in front of it waiting for Alice and Dana to arrive was creating a lot of anxiety for her.
"What time did she say they would be here?" Bette looked at her watch once more, fidgeting in the driver’s seat of her Saab. "Are we supposed to just sit out here all night waiting?"
"We can’t go in without the embossed invitation." Tina snickered as she rested her hand on Bette’s thigh. "I never would have guessed that a BDSM club could be considered elite."
"I would be shocked if you knew that," Bette replied smiling lovingly at Tina, but feeling very nervous inside. "Do we even know what we’re supposed to do once we get inside?"
"Have a drink," Tina answered simply. "That’s what we came to do, and watch Dana and Alice to make sure they don’t get themselves in trouble."
"That’s inevitable," Bette muttered as she jumped, startled to see Alice and Dana standing near the car.
"Let us in," Alice whispered as she looked around nervously. "It’s Alice and Dana."
"I can see," Bette seethed as she unlocked the doors with a shaking hand. "You scared the shit out of me!"
"Shhh!" Alice pushed Dana inside, forcing her to slide the length of the backseat so she could enter the car. Dana bumped, nudged, and otherwise displaced Tina’s passenger seat in the process.
"Now that you’re settled," Tina mocked as she situated herself once again in the seat, looking down at her carefully crafted outfit.
"You’re not wearing the outfits we gave you," Alice instantly pointed out, ignoring the shocked look on Tina’s face at the outfit she had chosen for herself. "We were giving you the makings for the complete domme/submissive thing."
"And we don’t need that," Tina stated, thinking it best that she tackled Alice tonight rather than leave it to Bette. Their interaction could be deadly for at least one of them. "Bette and I are happy to help you, but on our terms with what we’re comfortable with."
"What you’re comfortable with won’t be believable," Alice said in a voice barely above a whisper. "If you look here…." Alice began to thumb through a small book, with several Post-It notes hanging off the edges.
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Thank you for this story. I was laughing so hard it brought tears to my eyes! :) Am looking forward to Maxine’s tail. Thanks!
LOL! Tupperware! LMAO! Well done!
Oh God I´m laughing so hard. Alice´s safeword is onomatopoeia, topped by Bettes floor mat. I wish this had been an actual scene from the L-word. Hilariuous. What a way to start the day. Thanks.
LOL Your talent shines through in this final chapter Ms. Gumby! This was laugh out loud funny, yet at the same time loving and thoughtful…and showed what good friends Bette and Tina are to Alice and Dana. Floor mat…ROTFLMAO!!!! Thanks Gumby
Just wasn just so hilarious. Thank you. Love this story.
Great story.
You are so funny Gumby. I loved it!
OMG this was hilarious!!!My favorite line was “She will likely be able to breastfeed a horse by the end of the night,” I love your stories
I am really liking how you took something scary to Bette and Tina and turned into something very meaningful for them as a couple. I only hope that Alice and Dana get to that point too.
That was a very interesting take on bdsm. I loved what Bette told Alice and Dana about how she learn to appreciate her and Tina’s relationship and love life.
Also Tina in the doorway;PRICELESS.
This chapter was so funny,I was laughing so hard.Priceless.Thank you.
GUMBY!!!! you are such a gift to this website. This was laugh out loud funny that only you could deliver. Thanks for posting.
unbelivable…:D
Hey Gumby, That was a laff-roit. I think I peed myself a little when reading this as it was so full of LOL moments.The whole discussion around “safe-words”, Bette and Tina’s inadvertant visit to the play area”, watching a woman, leashed and growling had my side splitting.This so should have been a scene from the show. I can really picture the looks of shock and horror.Gumby, you have excelled yourself with this witty and wonderful writing.Please add more of your work soon.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
So Damn funny!!!! Great Story Gumby!!! Thank you
Gumby I think is the first post I’ve left for you. Onomonotopia, faults, net, tupperware, all great. Thanks so much for this story.
I found it incredibly interesting to see this world through fearful eyes, and also humorous. Especially a safe word that’s difficult to pronounce – good luck to Alice in uttering that overly complicated term in the heat of the moment. Thank you for this story. It is interesting to know how frightened one might be in a blind terror of something that can be absolute perfection to another.