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New York Minute – chapter 31
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New York Minute
Chapter 31
Shane didn’t often feel nervous but she was feeling anxious. She was in The Planet waiting for her lunch to arrive. Alice and Tasha were sitting with her arguing about something. Kit and Roger were standing behind the counter fixing a till that wasn’t working properly. Only Shane knew who were going to walk through the front door at some point in the next 20 minutes or so. It had been fantastic to see Bette, Tina and Angie looking so happy and so much like a family. The crying shame was that Shane was the only person who was happy to see those three wonderful people so utterly content as a family.
“What’s got into you today ?” Alice asked Shane
“Nothing “
“You don’t have much to say for yourself “
“Not everyone has much to say for themselves as you Al “ Tasha fired back
Shane grinned – at least Tasha might be able to stop Alice running off at the mouth when Bette and Tina arrived. And even more luckily Jenny was out of town for the next 24 hours – those were good things in favour of whatever was going to unfold between people who used to be great friends. Shane was so busy daydreaming that it took Kit’s
“Oh my – look at that “ to snap her from her own thoughts.
Alice spun round and they all saw Tina standing a few feet inside the entrance to the café with Angie standing nervously by her side.
“Well – that didn’t take very long “
“What didn’t ?” Tasha demanded
“For them to see Porter in her true colours – what’s it been – barely two months and she’s back with her tail between her legs “ Alice flashed a look at Shane “So much for you believing all that crap about how much Bette has changed – once a cheat always a cheat”
“Be careful Alice “ Shane replied “ You might have to eat those words “
“The only one eating any words will be Tina – how can a grown women be so stupid “
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ok. this is getting bette’er. time for a real showdown between alice and her mouth. love this story and just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to share. can’t wait to read the follow up.
Alice is such an a…,and so is Kit.Great story.Thank you.
Showtime! Great update. What a selective memory Kit and Alice have developed – I would like for Bette to skin Alice, but a few well chosen words might do the trick. Can´t wait.
I absolutely love this story….. Bravo to Bette for fighting for her wife and daughter. I am completely pissed at Kit mores than Alice…. I wonder what they will say if they find out Bette almost died…. Great story!! PPS
This story keeps getting better with every update! Thanks for posting it 2 days in a row!
WOW!!! Kit and Alice are so out of line. I am glad Angie is out of the Planet. Can not wait to read what Bette does to Alice and Kit. I am glad Tina let Kit have it. Thank you Ally!!! I really love this story.
I just can’t believe this. Alice and Kit out of everybody shpuld have known better. Never mind Jenny, Kit is Bette’s sister and Alice’s is supposely her best friend.Now, I cannot wait for Bette and Alice meeting to take place.. Wow!! unbelievable.
Great update. I can’t wait until 7pm tonight !
I’m sorry but I’m with Kit and Alice. Has Tina forgotten that they their for her in her time of need? She quickly that it was that it was Bette that broke her heart and not them.
OMG! I just love this new Bette, but the “old one” could come back just to tell Alice everything that she needs to hear. And Kit needs to see that Bette is her sister and how many times Bette was there for her. PPS.
GREAT up date, and I agree with most that I am most upset with Kit. As Tina pointed out, Bette was there for Kit in her time of need and Kit has had problems with drugs and drinking herself. Didn’t she invite her to her wedding? If she didn’t throw her away them, she shouldn’t throw her away now. Kit should appologise to Bette in front of her family. Thanks Ally, PPS :o).
Well that visit to the Planet was interesting, do you think that Alice may still have feelings for Bette an is actually jealous that Tina was woman enough to get Bette back, when she couldn’t.
It almost seems like the Porter-Kennards went to the Planet to *purposely* look for a showdown… Why? There must have been oh, hundreds of other eateries in L.A., one where their custom would have been welcomed, and the two of them wouldn’t have been on the defensive the second they walked in the door! Why on earth would they have gone to the Planet if they’re on the outs with everyone, if not to have it out? And then act put upon, like the world is against them? I didn’t see Kit or Alice or Jenny in New York, confronting them. They went to a place where they thought the 3 of the people who inexplicably don’t approve hang out. I never understand why Alice is often such a vindictive jerk in your stories. It’s so hard to reconcile. Yeah, she has a big mouth, but I always got the impression she loved her friends and actually tried to like, keep the group together a bit. Jenny is just… Jenny. But Kit… what gives? Kit seems to have wanted Tina back with Bette to see her sister and Tina at least have a chance to be in each other’s life… hence giving Bette’s details to Tina. So what’s with the sudden about-face? I want to see what all Bette has to say to Alice and Kit. Their explanations for their past behavior are going to be very interesting, and I can’t wait to see how all these various confrontations play themselves out. Thanks for the chapter!
Can’t wait for Alice and Bette to have it out. They need to. By the way I love this story.
Sooooooooooooooo good. Thanks for updating. Hope to read more soon.
Love this story! So seeing something like the Shane and Poppi showdown in slowmo as Bette walks into the planet tonight. Loved how Angie took up for her moms and got her point in as well. Still can’t understand what is up with Kit but Alice is going down BIG! Bette will take no prisoners in this battle because she is hurt by Alice’s behavior. Have my chair in place for a ring side seat…going back to pop some popcorn now.
Great chapter. I agree with Mette, skinning is too good for Alice. Kit is a puzzle though. Bette always supported her through thick and thin and then to turn on her like that is strange.
Great chapter. I agree with Mette, skinning is too good for Alice. Kit is a puzzle though. Bette always supported her through thick and thin and then to turn on her like that is strange.
Clearly Alice and Kit have forgotten the meaning of the words friend and family. All I have to say it GO BETTE!!!!!! Then after you have taken care of your unfinished business, your FAMILY will be waiting for you. Thanks Ally!!
No Alice, Tina hasn’t forgotten that you all supported her and Angie. It is you who have forgotten that meaning of the word friendship. Do you honestly think that Tina should forgo her happiness because of *your* hang-ups? Why are you so angry with Bette, she did nothing *to you*. She cheated on *Tina* not you, she is the one who missed out on 5 years of her daughters life.And Kit, Kit, Kit. Why do you always appear so jealous of Bette. And why do you always like to drag her down. A throw back to your childhood with Melvin perhaps?
I Love this story. My favorite. Thanks for posting. Have fun this weekend.
Great chapter AllyE. Can hardly wait for the next chapter to see Alice get her ass kicked by Bette, which she so desperately needs having done. Now Kit is another matter altogether, as I said the other day. Bette has picked Kit up from the drugs and alcohol a lot longer than Kit had to do that for Bette, she invested in the cafe for her when the bank wouldn’t give her a penny. Bette defended Kit to their father when he was so down on Kit and Bette helped rear David when he was a boy before she went off to college and kept in touch with him when he was in college, did all kinds of things for him. Where the hell was Kit then, drunk and drugged out and prostituting herself to any man that would give her a toss for another hit and another drink. Alice, well Alice is just jealous of Tina and Bette because it has worked out for them and it didn’t work for her and Bette. Alice is an airhead loser and just thinks she is important. She has always been jealous of their love and didn’t want to see them together in the first place. She was always insulting to Tina at first, behind her back of course and Bette made her stop it. Bette should have let Tina take her out for calling her blondie, which Tina hated. Well, I’ll get off my soapbox for now. Whatever Bette says to Alice and Kit they deserve. Both of them should be on their knees begging forgiveness from Bette, especially Kit. Great chapter. Just don’t let Bette break before she tells them off and please don’t let her have a drink after the talk with them. Hopefully it will only take her 5 minutes to tell them off and leave the place. Thanks so much for posting.
Hey Ally, This latest chapter was a doozie. Alice and Kit were too set in their old ways to see the change in Bette as well as the happiness in Tina and Angie.I can understand that they were trying to protect Tn ain the past but now is the time to support the Kennard-Porter family and rebuild their friendships.Kit really does have a cheek casting Bette aside after all she put her sister through with her own addictions.A little compassion goes along way.I want Alice and Kit to judge Bette on her actions now. I want them to watch her and see how she interacts wtih Angie and Tina. I want them to treat Bette with respect.Bette was very restrained and I now can’t wait until she has adult words with her ‘sister’ and ‘friend’. I feel a can of ass-whopping being opened.Rock on!Ally, you continue to provoke and entertain in equal measure. I can’t wait to read more.Many thanks,Your Loyal Fan.
Damn good! Can’t wait for the conversation between Bette and Alice. Great story. Thank you.
Yeah, I think Alice has forgotten the meaning of friendship, just as Kit has rejected her only sister. Forgiveness seems to be a lost art for Bette’s former entourage. Great chapter, Ally!
It’s completely out of line the way Kit and Alice are behaving. Tina was the one who was heartbroken and she forgave Bette. Why are Kit and Alice on such a mighty moral high horse? PPS