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    Something so right – Chapter 121

    Something so right

    Chapter 121

    Bette closed her eyes – in the current mood of the siblings attacking their mother was not the way to win any of his children over.

     

    “No we don’t know you – well I feel that I don’t but I haven’t been privy to any sort of one to one conversation with you. You seem to be treating Bette more of a family member than me. What I know is that that farm is my inheritance and I am not about to let anyone else take a cut. I don’t care about your new son – I care about my mom and the farm “ Willow said spitefully

     

    Niall’s face coloured with anger at Willow’s dismissal of his new family

     

     

    “Way to go Willow “ Tina said sarcastically “ Why don’t you keep showing yourself up to be the money grabbing idiot that you always have been. You seem more bothered about money than about mom “

     

     

     

    “Its alright for you with the rich gallery owning wife to be – you don’t have to worry about money”

     

     

    “Like you are little ms poor “ Finn said dryly to his sister

     

     

    “Your mother can look after herself “ Niall remarked

     

     

    “She can but she shouldn’t have to “Finn looked at his father “ I am not saying that either of you are past it but you have worked that farm all your adult lives and you didn’t work it for all those years just to see it be carved up by lawyers. Mom should not have all the worry and responsibility and what the hell are you going to do with the next 20-30 years of your life. I am sure that you are enjoying playing daddies at the moment and being loved up but what are you actually going to do with your life dad and how are you going to pay your way through the rest of your life. Gee man – you really haven’t thought any of this through before you went off and wrecked your life and mom’s “

     

     

    “I am deeply touched by my children’s concerns for me “ Niall tried to be sarcastic but he failed

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    Comments

    1. Go willow! I’m sorry but Bette is getting on my nerves. Imknow Bette is trying to help but gees, they can answer for themselves. They don’t need no babysitter.

    2. There´s something icky about Niall, something that doesnt add up – or maybe he is just plain stupid and stubborn. I am sure your next update will bring some light, so please…

    3. How about everybody lighten up on Willow. I mean Tina & Finn have had longer to deal w/ their dad’s betrayal and their initial reactions weren’t any better than Willows. And why are they being so forgiving if Niall all of a sudden? He just gave his kids an ultimatum? I’m confused, but still love this story . PPS

    4. Yes Tina is in very good hands, but since Nialls knows that Willow is senative, he should seek her out and talk to her. It’s kind of appauling that Nialls pretty much land down the gauntlet and demanded his children show him their love and support when he has not done the same. Sure he supports B&T and their marriage, but HE is the one who should be offering the olive branch to all of his kids, not Bette. PPS :o).

    5. Great update. Willow is very angry and her father knew what he was doing, he just played her like a finely tuned Stradivarius, he knew she would come unwound. He knows his children very well. He wanted to do that to get her out of the way and to see if the other two would play his way and give in to him. And they did just that. They should be wary of the bastard and get the best attorney that money can buy for Sarah because I think she will need it. Hopefully she won’t let him play her as he just did Tina and Finn. They should have let Willow knock the hell out of him. Everyone else has had a chance to cool down from their tirades now it’s Willow’s turn and they should not deny her that opportunity. Great chapter AllyE. Can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.

    6. Hey Ally, That was so tense and heated at the start. Good thing that Willow walked away when she did as this let Finn and Tina accept their father’s decision. This is a very difficult time for the family however Bette is being a total star as acting as mediator.Bette is able to assess the situation and out the fires out before they really take hold and destroy everything in sight.Bette and Tina’s wedding was a lightish way to end this part. And as raised some questions, I hope it doesn’t cause too much trouble.I can’t wait to read more as this imaginative continues to draw me in.Thank you for sharing.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

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