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    The Thawing of the Ice – Chapter Four

    Story written on September 21, 2010 by MoreThanSatisfied2.
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    In blows a tornado named Tina.

    Chapter Four
    Bette’s droopy eyes had begun to close when sound of the doorbell roused her from an impromptu nap. She’d fallen asleep in the wooden rocking chair in her bedroom. It was used quite often to read to Angelica or to snuggle with her when the little girl was sick or cranky or unable to sleep. Bette had shared many quiet moments with her little boo in the wooden rocking chair and on that evening, after a long day of legal maneuvering and heartfelt acquiescence, she’d needed to feel the presence of the infant she adored.

    Ignoring the angry flash of her answering machine and the many missed calls on her cell phone, Bette had settled herself in the chair, covered her legs with a quilt and rocked herself gently. And now, with the sound of the doorbell ringing in the distance, she jerked her head up and focused her eyes to get her bearings.

    A worried Kit Porter was her evening visitor. The sisters faced one another in the front doorway of Bette’s empty home. Kit’s weary eyes studied the tired and lonesome woman before her as she said, "Baby girl, I’m just checking in on you. Hadn’t heard from you since we left Joyce’s office. You okay?".

    The elder Porter had come bearing food. A planet takeout bag was in her hand and she offered it up to Bette as she was ushered into the house. "You hungry?"Kit asked.

    Bette shook her head and replied, "Not really. Shane was by a little while ago. She fed me."

    Kit’s eyes opened wide. "Shane? So she finally showed up, huh?"

    "Yeah. She feels bad."

    The older woman’s eyes narrowed, the slight wrinkles in the smooth brown skin now visible. "She should. Leaving that poor girl at the altar. Sounds like something out of a lesbian Lifetime movie."

    Bette had to chuckle and though she hadn’t been fishing for laughter, Kit was pleased to hear that sound. They shared a warm sisterly moment as their eyes met and this connection made them both smile wider than they had been only seconds before.

    Kit rubbed her sister’s arm. "You sure you’re okay?"

    Bette’s smile faltered a bit as the question made images of Angelica dance in her mind. "I am. I miss her, Kit. But I’m okay. Please stop worrying about me." Dark brown eyes traveled down to Kit’s midsection.

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    8. I loved how Bette handle this situation. She made Tina realized that she is not taking any BS from her anymore. I find Tina’s action to Bette as being afraid that if Bette is no longer interested to fight for Angie, Bette has no more reason to see her. Angie is the only connection that holds them together. I think deep inside, Tina is afraid that she will totally loose Bette in her life and will loose Bette’s attention that she is no longer fighting for her love inspite of her being w/ henry.

    9. Well! Bette’s taken a stand, and it’s good that she did. Maybe, one day, Tina will calm down. Til then, Bette’s gotta take the time to work on herself. Great story, it was a pleasure catching up with all the chapters. Thanks :)

    10. I hated S3 Tina and like Bette, I hate this version of Tina too. I know you said this is a Bette-centered story but I hope you’ll also shed light on how Tina became a giant ball of contradictions so that I can feel less hate for her and probably understand her better. This version of Bette is not a saint too. Kidnapping her child was downright dumb. I just realized I don’t really like revisiting that dark season. But I’ll try to keep up. Thank you just the same, MTS.

    11. I love it!!!! I am so glad Bette stood up to Tina and kicked her Ass out of the house. Bette needs to take some time for herself. I would love to known what the fuck Tina is thinking. Thank you PPVS

    12. Hi MTS, Another great example of your brilliant writing and plotting.I think that Bette needs to work through these dark emotions and get to a more balanced place.Tina’s sudden arrival and rather ill-measured rant only further pusehed these former lovers apart.I can totally understand Bette’s reactions and hope that the future will let these feelings thaw.Only then do Bette and Tina have a chance at rebuilding their friendship and parenting Angelica as equal partners.More please as I am completely hooked and can’t wait to read more magical muses from your mind.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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