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    Breathe Me * Chapter 26

    Story written on October 9, 2010 by scaf.
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    promises

    CHAPTER 26

    Tina shot through the back door and pumped her legs as hard as she could. She watched as Wills ran into the wooded lot behind the house and immediately felt a sense of dread. He knows this place better than I do. This is his territory. Tina felt the buzz of her mobile on her hip and flipped it open as she kept her gun pointed toward the very place Wills had disappeared into,

    "Officer down!" She yelled in the phone. "I need backup. Shane! Back up!"

    Tina shoved her phone in her pocket and stopped at the tree line. Her heart was pounding and her breaths were shallow. She needed to calm herself if she was going to find him. She needed to be able to hear him, and she couldn’t do that with the sound of blood rushing through her ears. Blood. Bette. There was so much blood. Tina tried to push the thoughts away. Bette would be okay. She had to be. Tina crouched down low and looked for any sign of Wills. She had to go in, she didn’t have a choice.

    ***

    Bette painfully reached for her cell but she had no signal.

    "Fuckkkkkkkkkkk!" She groaned as she tried to roll over on her side.

    It was bad. She could see that, could tell from the fact that it had only taken a minute for her shirt to be soaked through with blood. She needed to apply pressure. To calm her self so that her heart didn’t continue to pump out the blood at an alarming rate. Bette managed to get herself to her knees and nearly passed out from the effort. Keep your eyes open. Stay awake. Tina. It was a mantra she kept repeating in her head, it gave her something to focus on other than the blinding pain in her abdomen. She stood slowly, yanking at a curtain and tying it around her midsection. She tied it as tight as she could, hoping that the pressure would buy her time. She grasped her gun in her shaking hand and made her way out the back door, using the wall and anything she could get her hands on to propel her forward.

    She stumbled, falling to her knees twice before she made it to the edge of the lot. Bette leaned against a tree and for the first time in her life since her mother walked out on her, she began to pray. Please keep Tina safe. Give me the strength to do just this, if nothing else. Fidelity. Bravery. Integrity. They were the words she lived by. She had given her life to the Bureau and as much as she would have given anything to give Wills the slow torturing death he deserved, she wanted Tina safe first.

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    1. Amazing Update!!! Bette sure knows how to kick some ass!!! Now Bette needs to be OK. Tina needs to fuss over agent Poter until she gets better. Thank you PPS

    5. bette has to be okay, she just has to be…i still don’t think this is the guy who killed all the girls but it’s just a writer in me LOL i hope both B&T are going to be okay

    6. No way, this is so tense. I can’t beleive Bette didn’t pass out sooner than she did. So glad she saved Tina, but what will Bette’s fate be? Post soon!

    8. Good thing that this crazy man went down, I hope he doesn’t have an accomplice. Steely and forceful Bette will make Tina fall for her even harder if that’s possible… So read you very soon.

    9. Scaf, I just read all your 3 updates and I was just sitting at the edge of my seat. Excellent story and writing. Can’t wait to read the next update. I’m sure you’ll keep our Tibette safe :)

    12. I was panic when I read this was your last chapter from your author’s note. Please no, not yet! Then I realised it was not the last “last.” Thanks god for that! Love this story, please post real soon :)

    16. Mixed feelings, happy the f… is dead, but sad that Bette has been shot.Please make her feel better. Thank you for this story like scarlett26 stated, it nice to have our girls strong in this one. PPVS

    18. YES, they got the slime..and you left us with yet another cliffhanger. Now you really need to stop doing that, but I´ll forgive you as long as you make Bette come out of this, kick the pompous feds and give our girls a little time to themselves. Thank you so much for this amazing story.

    21. Yay for the girls! This is going to be touch and go for Bette, but we know you’ll have her pull through. And then…oh the things Tina can do with a bed-ridden Bette…LOL. Post when you can – we’ll be eagerly awaiting!

    24. Whew! Well done! This is a great chase, danger, edge of the chair, and everything else chapter. I look forward to the next time you are able to post. Thank you for this great story.

    27. Hello Scaf, I have just caught up with your last three chapters and Wow-wee!!! That was awesome.Bette shot while Tina was nearly the next victim of a deranged killer. One who Bette took out.I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out if Bette survives.I do hope so. Shame is that the story is coming to an end and I love it.More please of this brilliant tale.Your Loyal Fan.

    29. You actually had tears in my eyes with that chapter. I love waht Bette said to Tina about keeping her promise, that was made to Tina’s Dad, now T will realize that they actually talked. Please let Bette be ok.

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