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    Breathe Me * Chapter 26

    Story written on October 9, 2010 by scaf.
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    promises

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    Tina found herself surrounded by trees. The sun had begun to set and she knew that in another thirty minutes or so she’d be surrounded by darkness. She needed to get back to Bette. She swung her gun out and to the left at the sound of a snapping twig. But there was nothing there, at least nothing she could see. Her chest hurt; in fact, the pain was so bad she felt as though she was having a heart attack. For the first time in her life she was scared. Scared of what Wills would do to her if he caught her. Scared for Bette. Bette. What if he had doubled back and gone back to the house for Bette? She hadn’t thought of that. Bette would be helpless. Why the fuck did that not even reg…..

    ***

    Bette moved as quietly as she could from tree to tree. It was becoming more difficult as her strength receded. Her vision blurred at the edges, she was sweating profusely, and she couldn’t quite catch her breath, yet another concern. Bette’s makeshift tourniquet was now soaked through and dripping down her pant leg. She stared at the blood that darkened her thigh as she tried to catch her breath. That was when she heard it. A loud thwack as though someone had hit something. Hard.

    ***

    Tina was stunned, the fierce blow from behind violently knocking the breath from her lungs. The blonde had been knocked out, but it couldn’t have been that long because she didn’t necessarily remember blacking out. Her vision was clouded, though, and she had the vague feeling of being rolled over. She tried to regain consciousness, desperately trying to focus on the face in front of her, then was immediately sorry when she did. Wills smiled down at her. Her arms were pinned down with his knees. She couldn’t move. And as he flashed his sickening smile, he transferred his gaze from the knife in one hand to the gun in the other.

    "This is going to be fun."

    He leaned down and licked her cheek and Tina fought the gag that rose in her throat.

    "Fuck you!" Tina spat at him and tried to move her arms but it was hopeless. He shifted his weight on top of her so that it was even harder to breath. She felt as though she was going to pass out.

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    1. Amazing Update!!! Bette sure knows how to kick some ass!!! Now Bette needs to be OK. Tina needs to fuss over agent Poter until she gets better. Thank you PPS

    5. bette has to be okay, she just has to be…i still don’t think this is the guy who killed all the girls but it’s just a writer in me LOL i hope both B&T are going to be okay

    6. No way, this is so tense. I can’t beleive Bette didn’t pass out sooner than she did. So glad she saved Tina, but what will Bette’s fate be? Post soon!

    8. Good thing that this crazy man went down, I hope he doesn’t have an accomplice. Steely and forceful Bette will make Tina fall for her even harder if that’s possible… So read you very soon.

    9. Scaf, I just read all your 3 updates and I was just sitting at the edge of my seat. Excellent story and writing. Can’t wait to read the next update. I’m sure you’ll keep our Tibette safe :)

    12. I was panic when I read this was your last chapter from your author’s note. Please no, not yet! Then I realised it was not the last “last.” Thanks god for that! Love this story, please post real soon :)

    16. Mixed feelings, happy the f… is dead, but sad that Bette has been shot.Please make her feel better. Thank you for this story like scarlett26 stated, it nice to have our girls strong in this one. PPVS

    18. YES, they got the slime..and you left us with yet another cliffhanger. Now you really need to stop doing that, but I´ll forgive you as long as you make Bette come out of this, kick the pompous feds and give our girls a little time to themselves. Thank you so much for this amazing story.

    21. Yay for the girls! This is going to be touch and go for Bette, but we know you’ll have her pull through. And then…oh the things Tina can do with a bed-ridden Bette…LOL. Post when you can – we’ll be eagerly awaiting!

    24. Whew! Well done! This is a great chase, danger, edge of the chair, and everything else chapter. I look forward to the next time you are able to post. Thank you for this great story.

    27. Hello Scaf, I have just caught up with your last three chapters and Wow-wee!!! That was awesome.Bette shot while Tina was nearly the next victim of a deranged killer. One who Bette took out.I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out if Bette survives.I do hope so. Shame is that the story is coming to an end and I love it.More please of this brilliant tale.Your Loyal Fan.

    29. You actually had tears in my eyes with that chapter. I love waht Bette said to Tina about keeping her promise, that was made to Tina’s Dad, now T will realize that they actually talked. Please let Bette be ok.

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