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    When She Loved Me (11) – Final Chapter

    Story written on November 7, 2010 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76518
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    FINAL CHAPTER – Bette and Tina talk.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N4GYqDfOzMA

     

     

    Chapter 11

     

     

    The only break from Tina’s relaxed contentment came when she awoke later that afternoon, finding Bette untangling herself as carefully as she could. She couldn’t help but smile at the care she took. "Mmm I’m awake."

    Bette looked out toward the kitchen in confusion, regarding the tidy counter. Her gaze immediately fell to Tina, as if to analyze what she found in her expression.

    "I threw it all out," Tina confessed, stretching as she rolled onto her back. She looked up to Bette with a certain tenderness. "And I cleaned up your … dishes." It had only been glasses, and Tina was obviously worried about Bette’s eating habits.

    "I ate," she answered, sitting on the bed with her back to Tina. "I just … had a few drinks."

    "A few?"

    "A lot," Bette corrected with honesty, looking over her shoulder at Tina. A look that would always melt her. "I drank a lot."

    Tina immediately addressed the issue, talking it through with Bette and smiling when she heard the guilt in Bette’s voice about dancing with another woman. How shocked and fearful Bette had been when she realized it wasn’t really Tina. Through the events that had transpired, she found herself relating to Bette almost completely; understanding that extreme amount of emotional pain, and why Bette hadn’t wanted to jump into sex when Tina had arrived, because that was all it would have been.

    She did her best to soothe Bette’s fears while explaining her own worries, and her own story. Bette was elated upon hearing that the boy had been a friend, but there were still bits of the story she wanted to hear. She did, however, have something to say.

    "I don’t know what we’ll do … but I told myself I’d say something if I could ever speak with you again." With that, she turned and climbed over Tina; looking down to the only woman she would ever speak with in that same tender way. It took her a while to summon the courage, but when she finally let it out, it was the most honest thing she could have said, and the most obvious. "I love you."

    Tina’s smile beamed as she reached up and touched Bette’s lips, as she often did. The brunette seemed so sensual at times like these, and sometimes that felt like the only way she could really understand her thoughts. "Bette …"

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    4. Thank you for this sad, happy, up, down and uplifting tale. You did a great job of portraying the complex emotions of these two women on their journey to each other! Can’t wait for the next one.:)

    11. I really loved this story and the track you chose. To be honest, I’m never one to click on those the links to songs that some authors attach to their stories because somehow, I get distracted. But, your selections were so complementary to the story and I really enjoyed it -almost as much as your writing.

    17. U know u do this to me every time. These beautifully written love stories so full of passion, deep connections and an understanding that is expressly so wonderfully through your writing and then u take it away. I’m a little sad rite now. So i’m gonna go back to the beginning and pretend like it don’t know the ending. I love this story, Thank You Beautiful.

    18. GR stands for Gettit Right. Short and sweet and oh so beautiful. November 6, 2009 is when you loved us and have been ever since. And we love you right back GR :) thank you.

    21. Amazing, amazing writing. Loved that Bette was now seeing life in colour instead of shades of gray. Happy that the found their way back to each other. You are one talented writer. I hope maybe more tibette beginnings come up, need to get the thinking cap on. Thank you.

    24. The end of your story, can be described as Bette&Tina’s love-Simply the Best. I am so glad that they are together and left town, even though in some way I hoping that they would be brave enough to show those bigoted people what true love looks like. There seems that there could be more of this story to tell-Bette’s writing, Tina’s degree-job. Life in general-with the relationship and the friends. Thank you for the beautiful journey.

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