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When She Loved Me (11) – Final Chapter
Still, they kissed and made up for all the time spent apart with curious touches. Bette even got to take Tina’s fingers into her mouth just the way she liked, and a way she never thought she would enjoy again. She smiled as Tina pulled them out, touching herself and then Bette with the same hand. It always felt so erotic when Tina pushed into her that way, their bodies so close. It was orgasmic.
With a smile, Bette tucked Tina’s hair behind her ears; closing her eyes with the way Tina had made love to her. She didn’t know what to call their love, but she knew that it was as real as her own existence. Something that she would never recover from, and something for which she never desired a cure. Closing her eyes and holding Tina close, they relaxed into a welcomed rest.
The morning after their reconnection, Tina turned in Bette’s arms to gaze affectionately at her. Fingering a stray curl from Bette’s bangs, she smiled at the sleeping goddess beside her, whose eye opened just a sliver at the act. That smile would always melt her, she was sure.
“It’s a beautiful morning,” she said softly, smiling at the blissful ease of Bette’s content. She looked so at peace, and so indefinitely so. When the soft brown eyes really opened to her, she melted all over again, and watched the little smile on Bette’s lips. It was the only response Tina needed, bringing herself a little closer and sealing the reality of their love with a tender kiss before Bette held her once again, each content that they had found each other once again. This was it, the beginning of a new life together.
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Bette sat with her back to the tree with Tina’s head in her lap, listening to the way Tina read her words – her newest work, finally published. She looked up at the branches, the beautiful apples, and shook her head before looking back to Tina’s smile. "I never thought I would be so lucky."
"Interruptions," Tina smiled up at her, "Are not allowed."
Leaning her head back against the tree, she brought both hands to Tina’s hair and played with the soft strands as she closed her eyes. "Here … with you … and this tree."
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(58 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
i have loved this story tremendously, i wish there was more of it :) thanks for writing GR! :D
this story is so beautiful
Thank you for this very sweet and well written story.
Thank you for this sad, happy, up, down and uplifting tale. You did a great job of portraying the complex emotions of these two women on their journey to each other! Can’t wait for the next one.:)
Beautiful story. Could really feel their pain. I pictured it so clearly as a film all the way through. Looking forward to the next, thanks! :o)
I knew you would bring them there. Thank you GR.
True love story! Soo sweet:))
Thanh you for this beautiful, thrilling and living fic.
Thank for such a gripping, evocative and passionate story. And thank you for the happy ending!
A great emotional, beautiful story. You’re a wonderful writer. Thank you!
I really loved this story and the track you chose. To be honest, I’m never one to click on those the links to songs that some authors attach to their stories because somehow, I get distracted. But, your selections were so complementary to the story and I really enjoyed it -almost as much as your writing.
Thank you so much for this beautiful story.
Thanks so much for this story. I’m so glad they made the move to LA so that they can be together out in the open.
What a bittersweet journey. I really loved this story, it was complex, and beautiful. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
That was wonderful and so happy for them, love the happy ending. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon with another happy B&T story, thanks!
Thank you for the happy ending.Beautiful story.
U know u do this to me every time. These beautifully written love stories so full of passion, deep connections and an understanding that is expressly so wonderfully through your writing and then u take it away. I’m a little sad rite now. So i’m gonna go back to the beginning and pretend like it don’t know the ending. I love this story, Thank You Beautiful.
GR stands for Gettit Right. Short and sweet and oh so beautiful. November 6, 2009 is when you loved us and have been ever since. And we love you right back GR :) thank you.
Lovely poingnant(I can’t spell) story, sorry to say goodbye to it. Thank you
Thank you very much for this beautiful story and your fantastic, amazing writing.. I’m so happy for their happy ending. Thank you ^^
Amazing, amazing writing. Loved that Bette was now seeing life in colour instead of shades of gray. Happy that the found their way back to each other. You are one talented writer. I hope maybe more tibette beginnings come up, need to get the thinking cap on. Thank you.
Thanks for the story.
Just caught up with all your updates. Wonderful story. Thank you.
The end of your story, can be described as Bette&Tina’s love-Simply the Best. I am so glad that they are together and left town, even though in some way I hoping that they would be brave enough to show those bigoted people what true love looks like. There seems that there could be more of this story to tell-Bette’s writing, Tina’s degree-job. Life in general-with the relationship and the friends. Thank you for the beautiful journey.
I really felt for this story. Sweet with a little bit pensive content. Maybe the best and touching twisted Tibette beginning I’ve ever read.