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Breathe Me * Chapter 31 (Final Chapter)
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CHAPTER 31
"Took you long enough," Bette teased as Tina entered the living room with their dinner in hand.
Tina sighed and shook her head, grabbing a tray for Bette and helping the brunette to sit up comfortably enough to eat.
The women ate in silence, casually glancing at one another every now and again, waiting to see which of the two would go first. Bette took a sip of water and smiled as the blonde glanced in her direction.
"How’s the case?"
Tina finished chewing and turned to get a better look at Bette, shifting her plate onto her lap.
"Shane’s still processing evidence. Shane, Alice, Dana, and Schecter have pretty much taken up residence in the house of horrors. He kept souvenirs of his conquests, of course. There’s enough hair, clothing, etc…found to tie him to all of the victims." Tina cleared her throat.
"What else?"
"Pictures. Audio tapes of the victims. It’s horrible, Bette. You can’t even imagine."
"Unfortunately I can," Bette stared at Tina as the blonde pushed the food around on her plate.
"Alice actually got a call today from the Boston PD. A Detective Rizzolli thinks Wills might be tied to a couple of open homicides in her jurisdiction. Her ME Dr. Isles was faxing Dana some autopsy photos when I dropped by the department this morning."
Tina looked up from her plate and looked to Bette,
"I’m glad he’s dead. It sound’s horrible but it’s true."
"Me, too." Bette reached out and caressed Tina’s face. It was now or never.
"Anderson came by today." Bette rushed the sentence without intending to do so.
"Oh yeah?"
"He asked me to come back."
Bette’s phrase hung in the silence of the room. Tina sighed as images of Bette in a plane headed toward California invaded her thoughts.
"Are you considering it?"
"I don’t know," Bette answered honestly. "Initially I was planning on telling him to fuck himself, but my life has been with the Bureau, Tee. I could actually retire in a few years with a government pension. Maybe do some consulting work."
"So you’re going back to California?" Tina hadn’t meant the question to sound like an accusation but the hurt and fear were evident in her tone. She stood abruptly, muttering something about needing more wine.
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wow will u do a sequal like maybee 5years later or someting that wud be awsome
Scaf, thank you so much for the happy ending! I really enjoyed this story, well, all your writing, and hope to see another story when you’re ready
Sad because was the last one, but I really loved the story. Can’t wait to see you writing again
thanks for the wonderful happy ending…hope to see you here with another story
I hate that it has ended! Love your story! It was fantastic! Can we get a part 2! LOL!
Did it really have to end here? It has been an amazing journey. Hopefully you will return.
Excellent story. One of my all time favorites. Loved it from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
Oh….*pout*.. don’t end it….please? I’ve loved this, and thank you so much for that little Rizzoli & Isles reference! Take a “breather” (haha) and come back with a sequel soon!
Thanks Scaf for writing the best police themed fan fic I’ve read. Who could ever forget Bad Ass Bette preventing a suspect from escaping when she wrenched his arm behind his back and slammed him on top of Shane’s desk? Or the passionate love scenes between Bette and Tina?Have a good rest and please write us a sequel. You have a wedding to plan so that Bette can make an honest woman out of Tina.
Great job Scaf!!! Thanks for the happy ending…would you consider a epilogue with a “real welcome home moment.” Heh-heh!
Greta, qweet srory, glad the drama’s behind them and whole new life ahead! Tnx for posting, really wnjoyed it, someone mentioned maybe sequel and I’m hoping for it too;))
Aww how sweet, … “Welcome Home Baby. Fantastic story. Really and truly enjoyed it. During the bad parts I was afraid for both of them but you brought them through. Would really liked to have seen some interaction with Tina’s parents, especially her father after the case was solved. He loved him Pumpkin and he truly liked Bette. I wanted them to be able to visit with him and discuss the case a little bit now that it’s over because he would have enjoyed called those other detectives, “buttheads” or worse. Loved the way you wrote her father, he is a very special guy. I wonder what he would have called the perf, I can just imagine. Thanks for sharing this wonderfully loving story with us. A sequel would be wonderful when you can come back with more. Thanks again. .
That was awesome and sweet, love it. so happy for them and love the happy ending. I like the Rizzoli & Isles in here ahhaha, thats cool. Thanks for sharing this with us and hope to se you soon with another happy B&T story, thanks!
Sad to see this story end. I loved it for as it was a straight forward story. No play, full of care, love and emotions. Great story the way I like them. Just hope to read a sequel because this story deserves and own it. Sowell rwritten that it will be crime against humanity if we don’t get a sequel lol. Thank you for sharing this with us Scaf. See you soon.
Thank you scaf! What an amazing story, awesome!!!! :)
Great story sorry that it has ended maybe a sequel up your sleeve, please.
I’m sad to see this story go because it has been so enjoyable to read. Thank you for posting. I hope you come back with another story soon.
Hey Scaf, Thank you for a wonderful adventure and love story. Finally Bette and Tina are together, planning a future in New York. I do think that a sequel would be a great new challenge. Please take a rest and then come back with new interesting and entertaining tales to tell. Thank you so much for a must-read story. Your Loyal Fan.
Yay! THE “GREAT” END!!! Thanks a lot for this wonderful story, Scaf. It’s been an amazing journey, and you brought it to a perfect resolution, without ever drifting away from its original tone and atmosphere. And I loved it. Too often, stories tend to become mushy (sometimes wonderfully so, but still) once Bette and Tina have “done the deed”, and drift away from a great initial intrigue. But you kept us aboard with Agent Porter and Detective Kennard all the way. Thanks for that, and enjoy the deserve break, hoping to see you back soon! Take care! K.
Thank you so much for this story, Im sad to see it end, or maybe a sequel, or another story.Thank you.
I love this story. Thank you.
Thanks for this story!! I enjoyed every chapter, even the icky killer parts. Thanks again.
thanks for sharing. nice story. I agree, u could totally do a sequel! hint (:
Thank you for this mazing story.Please come back soon.
That was bittersweet, I loved how it ended, but very sad to see it end. I loved the journey that you took with this story. I loved how you always had Bette and Tina communicate with one another, and allowed them to admit they LOVED each other.
This story was absolutely AMAZING!!! The intensity, the love, the fear, the shooting, it was all almost too much but not enough. The totally binged this, unable to put it down. Fantastic story and storytelling.
I hope you so an Epilogue at some point. Where are they now lol