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The Affair 18
The two women lay side by side, their towels spread out on the golden sands of Santa Monica beach. The blonde was trying to peacefully enjoy the afternoon sun, however her peace was being repeatedly interrupted by the fidgeting brunette to her left. She lifted her sunglasses to give her lover one of her looks.
"T…I just cannot believe that Helena Fucking Peabody is here this weekend!" Bette exclaimed.
The blonde laughed "I haven’t heard you call her that in years"
"Yeah well" huffed the brunette.
Tina leant on her side and placed a hand on the brunettes arm, trying not to get distracted by the sight of her lover in her bikini "Please tell me your not gonna go on about this all day"
"Teeeee" Bette whined "I just don’t want to share you this weekend"
"Have you seen Helena at all this weekend?"
"No"
"Have I spent any time away from you apart from when I’ve been in the bathroom?"
"No"
"Have I given anybody else my attention since we got here?"
"No" the brunette admitted quietly, still sulking.
"Exactly. Helena’s kept her distance and the weekend’s gone just as we planned. Besides, we always knew that this secret affair would have to come to an end. Our friends aren’t that stupid"
"Well….one of them is" Bette pointed out.
"Are not even a teensy bit looking forward to the look on Alice’s face when she realises she was the last to find out?"
"Maybe" the brunette tried and failed to hide a smile.
"Is that a smile I see Ms Porter?" the blonde teased.
"You’re unbearable T, you know that?"
"Oh am I now? I guess I’d better just take my unbearable self in this unbearable bikini down to the sea by myself then!"
The blonde got up giggling to herself. She ran down to the sea with the brunette in hot pursuit, letting herself be caught just as they reached the water. The two women stumbled into the sea, the cold water splashing up around their legs as Bette wrapped her arms round the blondes shoulders.
"Fuck it’s cold!" Tina shivered.
The brunette stepped to one side to look at her lover.
"I can see" she mused with a glint in her eye.
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(26 votes, average: 4.88 out of 5)
Wow hot and a great story
Holy Jesus, Mary and Joseph! I feel so honored and hereby more cautious of what I ask of you. I read this while at work. Oh my, it’s going to be a long drive home. Did I mention that was sooooo…..fucking……..hot?!!!!!!
Holy Jesus, Mary and Joseph! I feel so honored and hereby more cautious of what I ask of you. I read this while at work. Oh my, it’s going to be a long drive home. Did I mention that was sooooo…..fucking……..hot?!!!!!!
Holy Jesus, Mary and Joseph! I feel so honored and hereby more cautious of what I ask of you. I read this while at work. Oh my, it’s going to be a long drive home. Did I mention that was sooooo…..fucking……..hot?!!!!!!
I am glad I learned my lession last chapter, and read this alone on my computer=) LOL. You rock!!And you know, it can be many princesses, but only one Queen=), so just hold on to your crown proudly=)!Thanks for the update, and PPS=)=)!!
Loved the way you wrote and fulfilled tis fantasy. Hope there are many others like this coming up! Thanks for posting.
OMFG!!! i think i died cause i forget to breathe and i’m in heaven now…that was sooooo freaking hoooot!!!from now on i will read the chapters with an oxygen tank lol.submissive Tina and alpha Bette are my favorite stories.YOU ARE THE BEST!
So Hot!!! Thanks for having a great imagination and sharing it with us lol…
Jesus Christ and His Mother! That was HOT and I should know better than reading it at work! Fuck! I made a mistake like a school girl. That was… smoking hot. Excelent, as always and thank you so much for the post. I can’t wait for the next one. Kisses
OMFG…that was beyond hot.
Hahahahha! I too, love this damn story, but the responses had me laughing out loud. You are doing an amazing job keeping us all hot and bothered with your stories! Great job and cannot wait for another post. Bring it BB!!
Yes, indeed, talking and loving does most certainly work for me. Now I will read the chapter. Thanks so much.
OFMG!!!! SMOKIN HOT!!!! You are so the OUEEN of NC-17!!! Thanks PPVS
After reading some of the comments, it appears that Tina wasn’t the only one speaking in religious tongue. LMAO! You’ve written a chapter that has readers praising the holy family as you continue to “resurrect” B & T’s desire and romance. Brilliant! **I bow to your amazing writing skills**
Hi BabyBeals, That was A-MAZ-ING!!! I really do adore how you are showing all facets of Bette and Tina’s reunion and physical pleasures. There was intimacy as these gals shared this forbidden fantasty. There was heat and intensity in their fucking. Okay, this wasn’t slow, gentle and tender love making but it really worked. This showed just how together Bette and Tina are now. Tina was totally filled by Bette and so enjoyed a powerful orgasm then trigger a drenching of Bette. I was happy that Tee managed to gather her strength and pay Bette back. I can’t wait to read more of this magical stroytelling. You have a true gift. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
I love your fantasy.WOW.
Oh my was that hot or what! Just read both your updates. Now this is definitely a weekend to remember. Thank you for this story.
Brilliant! Another post bringing the treasured couple a little closer to all of our expectations of a great, enduring relationship! Acted out Fantasies can be a source of increased closeness, attraction and fulfillment. Very steamy and explosive…
Fantasies and role playing are definitely never hurt! OMFG! This is one hell of writing, in a wonderful way of course. Glad I’m not reading this at work, or I will never concentrate. You do erase bad memories by your story!
After reading this chapter, I truly wish I hadn’t. Others have asked for more chapters like this and I sincerely hope you do not write any more S&M chapters. “Our girls” high moral characters would not sink to the levels of depravity of S&M. Fantasies are just that and are not always to be acted out. You are a brilliant writer and I would hope you maintain that high level of storytelling as you have done in the previous 17 chapters. Yes, I know, we have the right to read or not to read a story or chapters of a story. This is a wonderfully loving and warm story of love, forgiveness, and reclamation of a love lost and I would hope it stays that way. Just my opinion. Thanks for posting.
That was hawt! Bette punishes real well. Can Tina do some punishing now?
Damn they are so hot and awesome!