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    Story written on January 20, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76785
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    Tina’s POV – There is confusion and distance, but also a strong connect.

     

     

    One quiet evening, when Angelica had gone again to play, I put my hand gently on Bette’s shoulder, and felt it shrugged off. That confused me.

    “Bette …” I had whispered, afraid that something was horribly wrong. My tone asked all that needed to be said.

    I knew she would never ask me to leave, but it started to seem as though it might be for the best. Her friends thought I was straight, and only making myself available to her so we could stay in the safety of her home. Had I known that at the time, everything may have been different.

    Still, we were both burdened with this new distance between us that I didn’t fully understand. Well, at least I didn’t understand it at all. I even tried speaking with her another night, once Angelica had gone to sleep. I knocked on her door, and was let in only to be told that it wasn’t a good idea, and that she didn’t like anyone to be in her room.

    “But it’s me,” I insisted quietly, looking into her eyes. Her troubled eyes. I wish I had seen just how troubled she was, and what she suspected of me. I suppose it would make sense to anyone after being harassed by friends and thus persuaded, but it hurt me because I hadn’t known.

    She didn’t give me a proper answer, but sat on her bed and dropped her head in her hands. When I sat next to her for comfort, she jumped up and said that she didn’t want me in her bed.

    That statement was too much, and so I left her to herself.

    It didn’t take long for me to call another friend, and ask for a favour. I wasn’t certain where I would live, but I would need some time to earn money and decide what I would do with it, and where Angelica and I would eventually go, because I couldn’t stay with Bette.

    It was a late supper at which I announced this decision to Bette, as I was fiddling with the mashed potatoes on my plate. I glanced up at her and then back down to my plate. “We’re uh … I think it’s best if me and Angie give you some space.”

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    3. I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.

    6. I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!

    10. Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.

    14. Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

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