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    Story written on January 20, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    Tina’s POV – There is confusion and distance, but also a strong connect.

    She was about to cry then, giving my hands a squeeze. I could see how conflicted she was herself with it all, and suddenly the guilt was worse. There was something floating in the air, something that neither of us would say. We had kissed a number of times before, but touch isn’t verbal. I looked at her.

    “First of all, where would you go?” she asked, always the organized thinker. She was starting from the bottom to make sense of it all.

    “Ed,” I answered, slowly looking up at her again. “A friend of a friend. He has a place sort of in the heart of the city. I know it’s a little busier there, but-”

    “Ed?” she asked, and I could see that the whole discussion was leaving a bad taste in her mouth. “I really don’t like the sound of any of this. Why … why are you doing this? Why now?” She was so very hurt. I wish I never had to see that look that she gave me.

    “Maybe now is the best time, Bette,” I said softly, moving my hands up her arms; it all seemed one fluid motion, cradling her neck in my hands and looking into her eyes. “You’ve helped me so much. Through all of this … I don’t know where I would be without you.” I swallowed hard, and imagined her as the best friend a girl could ever have. I guess she was, but so much more. “I love you.”

    “You have to do this?” she asked quietly, finally bringing her eyes back up to mine. I knew that she desperately wanted to tell me I had to stay, but she wouldn’t. Whenever possible, she had always given me the freedom I needed, especially because of my past. She was so good to me.

    I nodded, seeing no other way, and it was settled. She would have her space, and I would find somewhere new. There was a distinct urge to hold her, and to be held, but neither of us would allow it. It would make the move much too difficult.

    The next day, Ed came over so we could talk about his kind offer. He knocked too hard, I remember thinking. Angelica didn’t take to him like she had to Bette, which was difficult, but he was a nice guy overall.

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    3. I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.

    6. I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!

    10. Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.

    14. Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

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