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At first sight
Story written on February 16, 2011 by kins40.
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CHAPTER 12
The words had just left her mouth and Bette looked at Tina slightly panicked.
Had she been too forward? Was it too quick? How could she have ruined such a perfect moment, she chastised herself!
"Uh………what I mean is that I really would like to spend a little more time….with you!" Bette added nervously. "I would really like to spend the weekend knowing you better…..I hoped that…" Bette was now stuttering.
"I would like nothing more than to spend the weekend in your company.." Tina interrupted.
Bette laughed nervously as she released her breath she did not know she was holding. "Wow….great…..so how about I give you a lift back to your place so you can pick up a few things and then we’ll head back to mine?" Bette continued a bit more confidently.
Tina agreed. They found the rest of the gang and said their farewell, Bette tried to ignore the knowing looks from Alice as the pair walked away into the night.
As promised they stopped over at Tina’s. Once again Bette was in awe at how the blonde was managing as she was observing her in her own surroundings. She was moving effortlessly throughout the space and her hand always reached exactly what she was looking for. It did not take very long for her to put her weekend bag together. She also got changed into a pair of jeans and a t-shirt. Bette let her eyes linger on her behind a few times and she was walking back and forth around her. She felt guilty about it as she knew Tina would not be aware of her behaviour.
"You are awful quiet Miss Porter! I hope you are not taking advantage of the situation to check me out…are you?" she said mockingly.
Bette had been caught, she tried to mumble a response but it was met with a hearty laugh from Tina!
She was ready to go having packed in record time. As they were walking down the steps, Tina thought it prudent to warn Bette about the wobbly tile on the last step.
When they arrive at Bette’s house, the brunette was on a high. Tina was going to spend the weekend with her. She had no idea what it would bring but the fact that Tina was there was enough to make her very happy indeed. She reached her key to the front door and realised her hands were trembling a little.
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Oh boy, these cliff hangers are going to be the end of me…LOL…I think I held my breath until the very last page…it’s always great to have Bette and Tina at the beginning of a relationship as opposed to the show when they were together already for a long time…heck, what am I saying…as long as it’s Bette and Tina…I love reading it…and I adore your story…PPS. Thanks for this update :D
i just love this story,your ords paint a vivd picture of everything that is happening between them, cant wait for more xxjbxx
I can’t believe you stopped there. What a tease. PPS
This story is amazing! I love this Bette! She is so careful and kind with Tina. Can’t wait to read more
Great, as always. But that kinda calls for a follow up, don’t you think? Hehehe… Alright, I’ll be patient. Thanks!
Please don’t leave us here… Not too long I hope. Thanks for the post! :)
Breathe Tina. PPS. This story is amazing.
Woah… No more pages?? What a way to keep wondering what’s next…!! I need to breathe.. Phew… :-) looking forward to your next post! Thanks!
Dang, those cold shower feelings are dangerous. One could die from a heart attack or in this case they can die from a sudden stoppage of making love.
I loved this story. The way you write about the handicaps of Tina is so real, I can’t wait for the next update.
It’s a cliffy..But i think it’s necessary..It’s Tina’s first time.. not only that..She have a condition that can be a liability to their new relationship. ..Think Tina is being wise here.
Looking forward to the next chapter.I hope,Tina is not too affraid.Love your story.Thank you.
Amazing story..leaves me wanting more!
Now that was a little cruel… but excellent as always. Thank you.
Ahhh not nice to leave us like that hahah, that was great and getting hot in there lol. Please post more, thanks!
love this… you paint a picture with your words… keep it coming… and like the others said… your killing us with the cliffies… pps
Hi kins, Thank you for another beautiful chapter. This beginning is so gentle and adorable. Both Bette and TIna are feeling their way in to blossoming relationship. I love that Tina took charge when Bette got all flustered (so cute) and agreed to spend the weekend with Bette. As for the ground rules, I could sense the panic in Bette as she welcomed this ‘straight’ girl into her home. Tina alleviated this quickly as she clarified her needs in a new location. It was so sweet to imagine Bette leading her on the tour and describing all of her belongings and layout of her home. It was great how quickly Tina felt at home. There is much love to be given and acceoted here. I do sense that Bette so desires a grown up, adult relationship; to share a life and love with her soul-mate. Tina is confused by her attraction to Bette and I hope can get over the fact that the person she loves is a woman. Their connection was instant and has developed so quickly that Tina needs to pause and assess where she is and why she is there. I can’t wait until these women move forward as I know that we are in for a beautiful and magical romance. I do hope to read how Tina’s love-making is based on touch, taste, hearing and smell. It is bound to be poetically written and played out in your lyrical words. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Great chapter. However, Bette must control her libido. She must remember that this would be Tina’s first time with a female and even though it is elemental, it is still her first time and she just might be a little freaked. Another thing Bette must consider is that Tina even after being in her house for the weekend will still need a little help getting around the house. Bette should haves gone out and got some of those little plaques that can go on the door facing, (as in major buildings and elevators), as you enter a room so that she would know what room she is attempting to enter. The guided tour was great but a little more consideration should be given to her visit. Maybe I’m being just a little too sensitive but I am thinking of Tina’s complete comfort. This is such a lovely story of first love and we get to see it from the beginning. Thanks for posting.