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At first sight
Story written on February 16, 2011 by kins40.
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As Tina followed Bette to her front door, she thought about how much her life had changed over the past weeks. She had met this incredible woman and she was going to spend some time with her for an entire weekend. She was both exited and apprehensive at the same time. A nervous tension formed in her stomach. It transferred to her hand which she had placed on Bette’s elbow to let her guide her to the entrance. Bette felt the slight shake.
"Are you ok?" Bette enquired.
"Yeah…sure!" Tina half lied. "Bette I was thinking that…uh….it would be wise to establish some ground rules for this weekend"
Bette was slightly surprised at the request but she did not want the blonde to be in any way uncomfortable.
As they entered the house, Tina continued, "what I mean is that I need to situate myself in your house, so I am going to need a guided tour of the house…I hope it’s ok…..and then I will need you to warn me about any low lying furniture that you might have……because bruises on shins are amongst the most painful……"she laughed. "You might even want to remove anything that is priceless to you because I can be a bit awkward and I would not want to break anythi……."
Tina did not get to finish her sentence as Bette had locked her lips on hers in a surprising kiss.
"The only priceless object in this house is you and I promise to look after you!" she breathed on Tina’s lips. A light moan escaped from the blonde.
They stood there for a little while, enjoying the comfort of each others arms.
Tina spoke first, "so how about this guided tour?" she asked.
Bette took her through the house and Tina built a mental map of the unfamiliar surroundings. Tina had been delighted to hear that Bette had a swimming pool in her back garden and had been surprised at the size of the house. It felt spacious and warm at the same time. Tina had removed her shoes and had enjoyed walking on the warm floor boards which seemed to run throughout the house.
They returned to the front room and Bette excused herself for a brief moment while she went to get changed. Yoga pants and a tank top were her clothes of choice and she relaxed in the comfort they afforded.
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Oh boy, these cliff hangers are going to be the end of me…LOL…I think I held my breath until the very last page…it’s always great to have Bette and Tina at the beginning of a relationship as opposed to the show when they were together already for a long time…heck, what am I saying…as long as it’s Bette and Tina…I love reading it…and I adore your story…PPS. Thanks for this update :D
i just love this story,your ords paint a vivd picture of everything that is happening between them, cant wait for more xxjbxx
I can’t believe you stopped there. What a tease. PPS
This story is amazing! I love this Bette! She is so careful and kind with Tina. Can’t wait to read more
Great, as always. But that kinda calls for a follow up, don’t you think? Hehehe… Alright, I’ll be patient. Thanks!
Please don’t leave us here… Not too long I hope. Thanks for the post! :)
Breathe Tina. PPS. This story is amazing.
Woah… No more pages?? What a way to keep wondering what’s next…!! I need to breathe.. Phew… :-) looking forward to your next post! Thanks!
Dang, those cold shower feelings are dangerous. One could die from a heart attack or in this case they can die from a sudden stoppage of making love.
I loved this story. The way you write about the handicaps of Tina is so real, I can’t wait for the next update.
It’s a cliffy..But i think it’s necessary..It’s Tina’s first time.. not only that..She have a condition that can be a liability to their new relationship. ..Think Tina is being wise here.
Looking forward to the next chapter.I hope,Tina is not too affraid.Love your story.Thank you.
Amazing story..leaves me wanting more!
Now that was a little cruel… but excellent as always. Thank you.
Ahhh not nice to leave us like that hahah, that was great and getting hot in there lol. Please post more, thanks!
love this… you paint a picture with your words… keep it coming… and like the others said… your killing us with the cliffies… pps
Hi kins, Thank you for another beautiful chapter. This beginning is so gentle and adorable. Both Bette and TIna are feeling their way in to blossoming relationship. I love that Tina took charge when Bette got all flustered (so cute) and agreed to spend the weekend with Bette. As for the ground rules, I could sense the panic in Bette as she welcomed this ‘straight’ girl into her home. Tina alleviated this quickly as she clarified her needs in a new location. It was so sweet to imagine Bette leading her on the tour and describing all of her belongings and layout of her home. It was great how quickly Tina felt at home. There is much love to be given and acceoted here. I do sense that Bette so desires a grown up, adult relationship; to share a life and love with her soul-mate. Tina is confused by her attraction to Bette and I hope can get over the fact that the person she loves is a woman. Their connection was instant and has developed so quickly that Tina needs to pause and assess where she is and why she is there. I can’t wait until these women move forward as I know that we are in for a beautiful and magical romance. I do hope to read how Tina’s love-making is based on touch, taste, hearing and smell. It is bound to be poetically written and played out in your lyrical words. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Great chapter. However, Bette must control her libido. She must remember that this would be Tina’s first time with a female and even though it is elemental, it is still her first time and she just might be a little freaked. Another thing Bette must consider is that Tina even after being in her house for the weekend will still need a little help getting around the house. Bette should haves gone out and got some of those little plaques that can go on the door facing, (as in major buildings and elevators), as you enter a room so that she would know what room she is attempting to enter. The guided tour was great but a little more consideration should be given to her visit. Maybe I’m being just a little too sensitive but I am thinking of Tina’s complete comfort. This is such a lovely story of first love and we get to see it from the beginning. Thanks for posting.