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The letter on the subway
Story written on March 28, 2011 by kins40.
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Chapter 9
Bette woke up in the strange surroundings and it took her a few seconds to realise where she was. She had slept so soundly that she was having trouble shaking the cobwebs of the night. She felt like she was waking up from a wonderful dream, filled with unbridled pleasure, sensuality and warmth. Only it was not a dream.
The memories of last night came hurtling down into her now conscious mind like an unstoppable torrent.
They had made love all night long.
Bette smiled broadly at the feeling that still lingered, butterflies took flight in her stomach. She stretched the whole length of her slender body like a beautiful cat sprawled on a cushion. As she did so, the top sheet descended along her sides revealing her beautiful naked body. She relaxed her stretching and curled into a ball grabbing Tina’s pillow. She brought it close to her chest burying her head in the softness of the fabric and inhaled deeply the remnants of Tina’s scent.
She had already noticed that she was alone in bed but she could hear rustling coming from below the mezzanine and she knew that Tina was near. She sat up in the bed raising herself on tall knees and she saw her just below her, the beautiful girl she had loved all night now engaged into some kind of incessant to-ing and fro-ing.
"She is painting" Bette said to herself quietly.
She got up from the bed and searched for something to wear.
She discovered her white shirt at the foot of the bed where it had been discarded the night before and put it on. She only fastened the two middle buttons at the front and let the cuffs opened. The sleeves reached down to the middle of the back of her hands. The bottom of the shirt barely covered her to the top of her thighs and the top let expose most of her chest from her long slender neck down to the valley of her breasts. Her dark coloured curls tumbled in an unruly fashion over her shoulder and around her face.
Bette made her way down the metal staircase and walked gingerly on the balls of her bare feet towards her lover. Her long tanned legs seemed to stretch for ever and her light stride gave her the grace of a Serengeti gazelle.
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Am I first??? Awesome!! I love your writing, as I already said and the relationship growing between the two of them. Thank you :)
Very sensual… very nice. But there’s a bit of tension at the end. Bette should come clean about the letter at some point… the longer the omission of her telling Tina about it goes on, the harder it might be when the truth comes out. Loved the chapter, thank you. :)
Another amazing chapter!
Amazing.Thank you so much for another great chapter.
Excellent!!! Now come on Bette spill it.
I can’t figure out why Bette doesn’t want to tell Tina that she found her letter. I may be missing something. Hmmm… Love the post! Thank you for posting sooner. I love your TiBette!
I’m with the others… bette should tell tine she found her letter… love this… pps
Dare I repeat myself but, love this story. Wish Bette had let her work more on her painting before she interrupted her. Laurel does love to paint in passionate red and yellow combined and she loves the female form, I’ve not seen a male form in her work at all, her work is so beautiful. Fantastic chapter. Thanks for the post.
Ok, I want closure-the letter and all, but will that mean that the story will have to end? Or if we are reeeally nice , you might consider going on, and on, and on………..
This story is beautiful! Hope you’ll keep it going that way; sweet, loving and innocent. Really love that it’s not overly dramatic:) Thank you for update, eagerly waiting for next one!
Love that Tina is an artist in this story (hadn’t realized the parallel with Laurel, but that’s even better). And loved that little Tibette version of another sensual scene involving good ol’ Patrick and Demi… Only 10 times better of course. “SENSUAL” being the masterword to qualify this beautiful chapter. God, couldn’t we totally picture JB in that white shirt?! Thanks a lot for the update, you made my night! K.
Thanks for the post! I love the detail that you include in your writing.
I really loved this chapter, but I too am not quite sure why the letter should be such a secret. I’m sure you will let us know though!
Now that is the way to start a morning. I would love to see this painting that Bette and Tina are creating.
Hi Kins.. I wonder if romantic is one of the blood type or not.. ’cause it seems like it’s in your blood hence you are able to write the story beautifully!?! ^^, btw why Bette was not telling Tina about the letter? I hope later when Tina know about it, she wont feel as merrily one of Bette’s conquest only >_< pining for the next chapter ... :-) PPS, thanks!
This was so utterly beautiful!! You´re such a good writer, please continue soon. :)
That was wonderful and sweet, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Your line. Delicious. Your Plot. Interesting. Your Dialogue. Like i’m listening to BnT!.. Your NC17….AMAZING!..pps.
Their feelings for each other are so intense. They really do seem to be made for each other. I just wish Bette would tell Tina about the letter. The longer she waits the more awkward it’s going to be when she finally tells her and that could cause problems.
you’re the best writer in this site. Your style is so exquisite, so readable. I come here every day to see if you updated your story.I want to ask a huge favor to you, You can send me the whole story? I’d love to have it on my computer…(flavinha484@hotmail.com)Thank you very much!
So wonderful written and so beautifully romantic. Thank you.
Wow so sorry that I’ve been MIA, been so busy but was nice to catch up. I’ve missed so much but was definitely worth the read. Will Bette tell Tina about the letter on the subway. I think its really unfair if she doesn’t. I’m enjoying the ride, so I’m going to sit back and wait to see what next you have in store for us lot. Great few chapters your best yet! :) Caramel