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    The letter on the subway

    Story written on March 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=77115
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    Chapter 8

    Chapter 8
    Bette eyes were closed tight but feeling the blonde relax in her embrace made her loosen her grip and the pressure of her kiss. She did not want to part from her though and began placing,  long lingering and increasingly softer kisses on her closed mouth, again and again.
    Tina brought her hands up and held onto the brunette’s wrists lightly. She did not move, she did not flinch and surrendered entirely to the actions of the brunette. She felt herself respond to each tender kiss  Bette was placing on her lips.
    The softness which replaced the initial urgency grew in intensity. Their bodies inched closer craving the warmth of the other. 
    Bette paused momentarily and withdrew only slightly to look at the beautiful face in front of her. The brunette was greeted with the most delightful but yet timid smile. With her  hands still cupping Tina’s face, she let her thumbs lovingly caress her lips before covering them with her own once again.
    She kissed Tina’s bottom lip  and let the tip of her tongue trace its contour before sensually entering the blonde’s mouth anticipating the ultimate intimate caress. Entry was eagerly granted and their tongues met for the first time. 
    The brunette’s right hand moved around the back of Tina’s neck to pull her closer  whilst her other arm slid around the blonde’s waist. Tina’s hands found their way up into Bette’s hair.
    Both women let out  a whimper of contentment as they sank further into the passionate kiss allowing the most wonderful feeling to wash over them. 
    They finally pulled away, breathless, their heartbeats racing against one another. They pressed their foreheads together. Eyes closed.
    Bette released her grip from Tina’s neck and took one of her hand in her own. She gently turned it over and pressed a tender kiss in the palm of her hand. The sensation of the brunette’s lips on her skin sent a jolt through Tina’s body. Their earlier almost confrontation and the unexpected turn of event had awaken every sense in the blonde’s body.
    "Please forgive me" Bette spoke first very softly.
    "Forgive you? Why?" was Tina’s whispered response.
    "I have been wanting to do that from the moment I first saw you"
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    10. Why were you worried?? This was a very beutiful chapter, even though I have to agree with Jackiee1, B should tell her about the letter soon. But I bet you have that covered aleady ;)

    11. Amazingly beautiful Kins, no worries! You’re already a master at giving us Tibette in their most loving and intimate moments. We’re hooked, and it’s only getting better! So glad Tina didn’t let Bette leave that studio. To borrow your wording: Bette and Tina appart tonight?… Not an option!! ;) Thanks!

    15. Still here….reading your wonderful work…I may not comment all the time but you know I’ve been fan of your work since the beginning…as usual, loooved it…PPS

    21. Fantastic chapter. So happy they’ve found each other at last. Now, as I asked in a previous chapter, I want Bette to olet her know that she found the letter or take her to her apartment and show her the letter. Maybe she should have her write something on her stationery and then take her to the apt. and show her the letter and let Tina know how affected she was by it. And now, she has found the love she too was seeking. Wonderful chapter. Thanks for posting.

    23. Hmm.. Kins40, you left me in a dreamy state :-) …. Huh?? A bit worried you said?? … Well if I may be honest too… are you insane to be worry because of this excellent writing?? Oh please, no worries dear! … The one who should be worry is US-the readers! Because I am sure that the one who is addicted to read more of your story is not only me! You have no idea how eagerly I am waiting for your post, and to ease that, I re-read from chapter one in a slow mode… Sounds silly-i know, but it’s true :-p Anyway, back to the story, when will Tina found out about Bette is having her letter?? I dont think it would be any issue there but make them closer after all the time they know each other.. Right? :-D … Hahaha… See.. I am too eager to read more but since there’s no more, you left me babbling >_< PPS?? Thanks! :-)

    27. No reason to be nervous. Loved you having Tina repeat the comment “your hand is made to fit mine” as it so perfectly describes their connection and was such a romantic way to move their relationship forward. You’ve written them so sweet, and open, and adorable with a whole lot of sexy mixed in!

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