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Playing By Heart
Chapter 21
The Planet
“This is probably the best Cobb salad I have ever had.” Tina declared as she tossed her napkin on top of her plate and sat back to allow her meal to digest.
Oscar and Esai both had their mouths full with their own entrées but nodded vigorously in agreement.
“Look at this plate, it was huge. I ate entirely too fast and still couldn’t finish it. I can’t believe I’ve never even heard of this joint. I think I’ve just found my new favorite lunch spot. And the coffee and tea selection is so much better than the overpriced bullshit at Starsucks.”
As the three continued discussing their tasty dinners, a brunette woman walked into the Planet and looked around.
The waitress noticed that Tina was done with her plate and headed for their table.
“Excuse me miss,” the blonde asked as the young girl picked up her plate. “What can you tell us about the show you guys are hosting on Friday?”
“Show?” the girl repeated with a confused look on her face.
“Kit Porter and the Stouts?” Tina clarified.
The brunette’s ears perked up when she heard a voice utter the name of the band and quickly turned to where the voice had come from. She saw a young waitress standing at a table. Though she could see only a young Latino man on one side of the booth, a large pillar blocked her view of who else was at the booth. A smile slowly crept upon the lips of the brunette as she was pretty sure she recognized the voice. She adjusted her suit jacket and smoothed out any wrinkles on her matching slacks and began walking toward the table.
“Oh,” the waitress blushed. “I’m new. This is only my second day, so, um. The owner is here though. I can bring her out and she can probably tell you a little more about that.” She offered.
“Only if it’s not any trouble.” Tina said with a warm smile.
The young waitress had noticed the jeans Tina was in and the diamond framed Cartier watch with its trademark roman numerals on the face adorned on her wrist. There was no doubt that this woman was important in this town and if it meant a bigger tip, the young waitress was more than happy to introduce her to the manager.
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(44 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
They keep missing each other, I am getting nervous will they meet soon?
I like the car choice for Bette… A black cadillac cts! So HOT!!!
Frustrating, my friend. Now you’re just being a meanie! Jodie is like an annoying gnat. Can’t wait for Friday… or will it just be another opportunity for your wicked teases??
I thnk you need to start your sentenses with “As” instead of “Had” – the possibilities thereafter are endless!Like fx. As Tina turned her head…she saw the sexy driver…(much better – right?)
Btw Yup! As is better! Much better! Agree with Mette!! :-) LOL
Hey meloveslu, More teasing and taunting as Bette and Tina’s paths cross and yet they actual met again. This is the sweetest torture. meloveslu, you really know how to string this out. I love how Tina can’t stop thinking about Bette and has even made the most tenuous links to other’s comments and conversations. Tina really does have it bad. Now the pressure is on. Please let these gals reconnect and finish what they were just about to start – a first kiss. Thank you for keeping the tension and excitement in this great adventure. More please and Many Thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
OMG…. another bump?? :-/ …
Arrrhh come on this is killing me, let them meet again already lol. Please post more, thanks!
seriously meloveslu, your killing us with all this teasing *rolls eyes* ….. but it makes the story all the more enjoyable lol cheers.
Great update, even if you didn’t let them meet this time. Please kill jodi now before she inflicts too much angst into the story and their lives. Tina hates her and we do too. You know our Ms. Porter is a car snob of the worst order much as she is about everything else, she will only drive a SAAB or maybe a Beamer, never anything as mundane and domestic as a Cadillac, even though the CTS is a sweet car. lol Hope they meet soon. Thanks for posting.
You are never going to let them meet are you? It’s all been a tease. Damn girl, is the meeting going to ever take place?
Oh man! I was sitting at the end of my seat and almost yelled turn around turn around :) Excellent update bloody brilliant thank you.
Come on ,please,let them meet:THank you for the update.Great story.
you are so bad… and oh so good… still reading on..