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The Goddess
There she was, at the bar sipping on her martini so slowly with those scrumptious lips. Her straight, brown hair cascaded over her shoulders and her tight pencil skirt dress hugged every single curve of her amazing body. I licked my lips, unable to stay still in my seat. Then the bartender handed her another drink and she smiled at him with those beautiful white teeth. Her smile made heart leap and I feel creepy crawly things in my stomach. She’s a goddess.
     But what am I doing? I’ve never felt like this for anyone! Especially a woman! God if my family ever found out about this they would say I was going to hell and they would disown me. I have to stop staring at her but I can’t tear my eyes away.
     "Tina!" the voice of my fiancé snapped me out my trance.
     I looked at him and said, "oh sorry, Eric."
     His hand closed around my wrist strongly and I let out a groan of pain. "You listen to me," he said in that menacing tone I heard so often, "you don’t go off into another world. You look at me and only me!"
     "S-sorry," I said trying to escape his strong grip.
     "You do it again and I will punish you!" Eric said pulling my arm toward him and lurching me forward my stomach hitting the table. I groaned in pain and nodded my head as tears slipped from my eyes.
    I felt someone watching me and I turned to see the goddess’ eyes on me. Her beautiful brown eyes were laced with sympathy and I ripped my gaze quickly from her as to not anger Eric again.
     He wasn’t like that before. He was the sweetest man that’s why I agreed to marry him. But he started getting more hours at work and he started to become aggressive and I felt only disgust when he touched me.
     "Go get me another beer!" Eric ordered angrily.
     I nodded anxiously and headed towards the bar. I approached the bar and the beautiful woman who was looking at me. She seemed to be smiling with her eyes and I tried to monitor the rapid beating of my heart.
     "Bartender," I called once I arrived. The bartender smiled and gave me a signal saying that he would be with me in a minute.
     I could feel her eyes on me and I kept my head straight, feeling the blush rush to my cheeks. I chanced a look at her and met eye to eye with her, then I was unable to look away.
     "Hi," she said confidently. I imagined someone as beautiful as her would be.
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Enjoyed it. Thanks.
this is really great for a short story. but its much better if youll continue on writing this fic. i love their sex talk lol!
That was awesome and hot, love it!
loved it… now I’m off to school LOLZ. I won’t be able to concentrate… Thank you haha
That was a brilliant story. thank you.
Perfect.Thank you.PPS.
brilliant thank u
hey T24 Thanks for this look forward to more :)
Lovely story. Really liked it. Hope you can continue with it. Men that beat women should be executed because they will never stop. Thanks for posting.
Hi Tibetter24, That was fun. I loved how quickly Tina realized that her relationship with Eric was over. Good that she ran towards Bette. It was sweet that they got to know each other first and then their love-making was tender and intense. I would love to read more of their life and love together. Many thanks from your Loyal Fan.