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Chapter 51
The Neighbor’s House
“Guys? Hey guys? Guuuuys?”
The three roommates finally paused the game to turn their attention to their hostage.
“Can you at least tell me if her car is still in the driveway?”
Carmen stepped towards the back of the television, with the game mic still in her hand, to look outside the front window.
“Yes Al, her car is still there.”
“Nice! Little P is finally getting laid properly.” Alice was excited that her former lover and current manager was finally spending some quality time with a quality dame. “Can you guys uncuff me now? I really have to pee.”
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Bette’s House
The mellow guitar strums to the intro of “Fade Into You” set the tempo for Bette and Tina’s sensual kisses.
The newly anointed Bettesexual dragged her fingernails along the muscular tone of the caramel-skin back that was still atop of her in post-coital bliss.
Intense stares were shared during intermissions for breath-catching. Few words had been spoken since the achievement of their mighty climaxes, but it didn’t stop the flurry of thoughts that each woman was trying to organize in their own heads.
Some kind of night into your darkness
Tina regarded Bette with a questionable look before speaking.
“Did you…?” she trailed off.
Colors your eyes with what’s not there
“Did I what?”
Fade into you
“Did you…you know?” The blonde rolled her eyes at her own question.
Strange you never knew
Bette knew exactly what Tina was trying to ask her. She bit her bottom lip when she felt a teasing smirk develop. “You mean did I come?”
Fade into you
“Yeah,” Tina smiled shyly, her already flushed complexion deepening.
I think it’s strange you never knew
Bette answered by stroking Tina’s shoulder down to her forearm, pulling it from around her back to take her hand. Shifting her weight so that she was now lying half on Tina and half on the bed, she guided Tina’s hand down to the site of her recent climax. As soon as Tina felt the evidence on her own fingers, she gasped at the warm, silky feel and immediately began stroking Bette’s inner lips.
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You did not disappoint. Loved it.
MeLL, MeLL, MeLL…… I was looking for more….of your story definitely, now if all following chapters are all in the same vein …. I will certainly accept your choice…..but you need to know that I love the entire story as a whole and I am still looking for more! ;0) thank you
Amazing as always,I love your writing.PPS .
Well, Well, I see Tina didn’t waste anytime gettign what she needed and allowing Bette to get what she wanted, again and again. That was thrilling.
While analyzing what I like about this NC-17, is that it is very realistic both in the description of their rapture and their pillow talk. Tina’s hesitancy in asking questions of Bette and Bette’s perception/sensitivity of what Tina was asking and lessening her embarrassment. Really good communication between the two lovers. That coupled w/three orgasms, well, one couldn’t ask for more than that. ;-) I love the way you describe the physical and the emotional. I have to say while “it” was great for them, “it” was good for your readers too. :-)
First of all, that was f***ing hot! Just caught up on the last 2 chapters. And b) did you steal my iPod? I mean really it’s eerie how all the tracks in my “sex mix” are in this little tale. Janet, Dave, Faith….I’m getting freaked out here(lol). So happy the ladies took care if Alice so that Bette’s night was uninterrupted. And totally hilarious Bette running around locking up the house and using a chair for extra precaution against…. Too funny,
I could read this chapter once, twice, dozens of times… It always satisfies. ;)
Sweet Jesus! I’m tingling with my own thin layer of sweat…that “spin around” about did me in…hahaha…this chapter begged for multiple reads! Perfect sex mix, will be making my own copy. Oooh, the Gremlin…always loved the name…red with a gold pinstripe…screams babe magnet, right??Hahaha, not quite. Have a good 4th!
Nothing like a bold Tina and a pleasantly surprised Bette.
That was another wow update. Wow! Just Wow! You’re doing more then fine writing these NC-17 Meloveslu :) Brilliant. Thank you.
WOW that was hot and yes the bold Tina is sweet and hot, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Try me!!!!!lol lol lol lol!!!! Don’t get me into there either my dear even though many women find me attractive, it’s disturbing for them knowing the truth otherwise!!!! I’m (sorry about that) straight lol and is soon getting married to a gentleman!!! But it’s true that if I was on , for sure I would have a problem having those girls round me!!!Therefore I appreciate your stories, the way you write them, although I have such big deal with it when it comes like those chapters wich is brilliantly written that I have to go and run or get to my piano to let my body ease ;)!!!! Because for real, as for me, I can transpose the love, this chemistry love between two people of same sex to my situation and it’s works. Don’t get me wrong, There’s deep love between straight people, but sometime or most time the love between people of same sex is very strong to fight against the world. Or maybe, the special love that Bette and Tina showed us on TLW was such unique, too well played.But it would be my pleasure trying something out with you, I mean with your lyrics!!!. Later tonight, will send to you a PM. Thanks for the update!!!! Now i need to run and playing piano at the same time, how can I do that????
Your writing did not disappoint, it was wonderful. If they don’t come up for air, Tina won’t have any feelibg in her legs, poor sweet thing. She has received a fantastic indoctrination into the world of girl on girl loving by the best. Hope someone catches Alice before she climbs out the bathroom window because I know she will try to get her nosey little butt over there. Thanks for sharing a wonderful story. Don’t want to sound like an ungrateful greedy guts but, MORE PLEASE!!!!!. lol
Once again you have delevired a beautifuly crafted piece for this I thank you. TY :)
Oh dear!! … MeLL!! You really make me speechless!! How did you do that!? :-D it’s not so long chapter but goodness!! It’s so hot!! I am at the beach today slightly got sunburn as it’s hot here but I don’t think it is as hot as this!! LoL … and the conversation between them!! Gosh!! I really can picture how hesitate and shy was T when asking B that!! Ah.. Yup! no hanging but looks like you play part on increasing the temperature worldwide in wherever your reader is located :-p he3.. Do you know that I really love this story?! :-) Thanks for posting MeLL! :-) looking forward for the next chapter ;-)