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Savannah
Story written on September 15, 2011 by kins40.
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Bette finally opened her eyes and was met by the morning sunlight seeping through her huge bay window. The fan up above her was rotating quietly and slowly above her bed. The airflow it was creating gently played against the mosquito netting which surrounded her, making it sway like net curtain in a soft breeze.
Hers had been a restless dream filled sleep and her mind immediately shot to the reason behind her fitful night’s rest. Tina.
Throwing off the covers, she turned to look at her watch which was lying by her bedside.
"Oh no, no, no, no, no, oh my God." Bette jumped out of bed and grabbed her telephone.
She dialled the number she knew by heart and after talking briefly to someone, she anxiously waited as a second ringtone echoed through the handset.
Finally, a sleepy voice answered. "Hello." The word was half pronounced and half yawned.
"Tina?" Bette asked hesitantly not recognising the voice.
The blonde instantly smiled, sinking further in the comfort of her bed, wrapping the covers tighter around her. "Hey." The smile in her voice was evident. She felt warm all over, having recognised the soft tones of the vet.
"Have you seen the time?"
Tina popped one eye opened and strained somewhat to look at the watch on her wrist. "Oh sh.. Oh my God." She managed to correct herself at the last second.
"Yep." Bette laughed. "Looks like we both slept in."
Tina bolted up. "I can still come over, right?"
Hearing the plea, Bette sat back down on her bed and let herself fall backwards in the softness of her bed covers. "Of course, why shouldn’t you?"
Relieved now, Tina stretched out and yawned.
"Awk, how nice!" Bette smiled hearing the cute noises the accountant made as she woke up.
"Oops, sorry." Tina was about to give off to her friend for mocking her, but instead she asked. "So, why are you also late, anyway?"
"Restless night, I guess." Bette hazarded not wanting to owe up to the fact that her night had been filled with images of the blonde in settings that polite conversation was not equipped for.
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*gasp* oh shit they’re stuck in the middle of the wilderness!! Omg I lOoooooveeeee this storrryyyy!!!! PPS
Ha!! Now that’s how it should be done!:)) Great job, really admire all the details you wrote in this story. WOnder will ther be problems for tibette in the night? Or they’ll be safe inside the car? :))) PPS!!!
Wow! That is some of the best writing I have seen lately. Fantastic! I love the descriptions of the animals and the interactions between Bette and Tina. Thank you!
Not good being stranded in the middle of no where.
Lol – Never thought of Zebras as a New York hooker in black and white stripes – hilarious comparison.
LMAOOOOO!!! I knew it…! I just knew it…!!! I had that hope in my head all along, and I prayed that you’d make this happen!!! Thank youuuu! This is going be sooo good! But you are such a tease to let us hang like that… Now… I have no idea what you have in store for them, but I so completely, undeniably, and eternally trust you to make it worth the wait!… God you’re good, woman!!! Thanks so much for this chapter, the descriptions were beautiful, but what I loved above everything else was that sensual flirting between our ladies. I am a sucker for these types of little moments and situations… The touching of hands… Awww…. The whispering in the ear… Awww X 10…. The arm around her waist to hold her back… Awwwwkay, you just killed me, woman! I didn’t want their day to end, but I’m absolutely delighted by that unexpected turn of events!!… So, what is it gonna be, K…? ;)
Oooo, slick, Bette… The old dead-battery-in-middle-of-the-Serengeti-with-dangerous-nocturnal-beasts-beginning-to-prowl-around-us maneuver… Guess you’ll just have to get all snuggly in the jeep until help arrives. (If it comes in the form of Jodie, make sure you’ve got a night-scope on the rifle so you can shoot out her tires before she encroaches.)
Wow! That was fascinating both from the amazing descriptions of the animals and the interaction between Bette and Tina; should be an interesting night!
OMG! You’re gonna kill us leaving us hanging like that! I love, love, love this story so much. Written so intricately, with attention to detail, and with obvious knowledge of the components of a dynamic ecosystem. Please post soon, since IDK if I can wait.
Oh no..stuck in the middle of nowhere..as always, incredible writing and story!
Wow….what a cliff hanger! I didn’t expect that. I’m sure they’ll be safe in the truck and Bette’s team will track them down in the morning. It should make for an interesting night. I can’t wait for your next post.
Oh my goodness, what a place to be stranded and overnight too. Hopefully Bette will keep them safe thru the night and help will arrive for them when it is noticed that they did not return home by dark. Mercy sakes. Wonderful update.
Oh no they stuck in nowhere
K40 this is beautiful how you describe the beauty of Africa .. But what the heck?..Engine trouble? You ruined the moment!? ..jk… :) But I’m more worried if they spend the night “out there.”
Amazing chapter.Looking forward to the chapter about a night under the african stars together.PPS
Your vivid storytelling reminds me of The Lion King. I hope if they have to spend the night under the stars they are fully equipped for it. Great chapter, love. I guess that means I’m up to bat…
Oldest trick in the book, car trouble.
Kins – It just gets better and better. I’m in awe of your talent and the caliber of your stories and your TiBette characters. I love how beautifully you portray them in all of your stories regardless of the setting. I have no worries that if they are stranded Bette will have the situation under control and Tina will trust her but then again things might go awry so we’ll just have to wait and see what adventure you have in store for us next. PPS
OMG KINS40!!!! how could you stop there?!? No..! No..! No..! >_< ... LOL.. You are so good and you do know how to make me beg! Don't you?! .... :-p ha3 ... I can't believe that, even in FF, that Saturday is simply too short!! ... Argh...! So will Bette showing more of her capabilities that she also good in fixing the jeep?? Or do you intend to let them spent their first night together under the stars by the river and in the warm embrance of the savannah?! ^^, My dear Kins.... Would you be kindly enough to please post the next chapter soon?? Very.. Very.. Soon?? * I wish there's an emoticon available here to put on very cute little puppy dog eyes * he3 ... Pining for your next update now... Thanks for your amazing chapter Kins40!! :-) enjoy the weekend ahead! ^_^
O Ooo, what was that? don’t tell me the engine died on them!come on Kins will we wait until next week to know, please update sooner pleeeeeaase ;D
Uh-oh! I absolutely love this story. You capture the beauty of the setting so well. Thank you.
Amazing and awesome update. Was written with so much detail that I could just picture it all in my mind. Thank you for this story and now I hope they will be safe. Thanks.
“Click” LMAO! “Click” …. I can just imagine the string of cuss words coming Bette now. I applaud you for not using the proverbial “ran out of gas” scenario ;) Kins, this story is such a joy to read. Your attention to detail that paints such vivid pictures continues to impress me – I so want to be on Safari! The electric but gentle current B&T share makes me sigh, and your wicked sense of humor makes me laugh out loud – loved the Zebra / “New York hooker in black and white stripes, far too tight, tights, and strolling on stiletto heels” bit! Oh mighty mistress of cliffhangers, you always leave me wanting and looking forward to MORE (but that’s a GOOG thing ;) …… I publicly Heart you. have a super weekend!