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Savannah
Story written on September 15, 2011 by kins40.
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"Hey yourself…. I brought breakfast!" Tina said almost triumphantly. "I hope you haven’t eaten yet, have you?"
Bette stared at the back of the blonde as she turned around to retrieve the box and two travel coffee mugs that lay on the table beside her. She couldn’t take her eyes of the accountant. There was something about that woman that captured her every time they were near each other. She had chosen pretty much the same attire as Bette. Jeans and t-shirt complemented with the comfort of sturdy walking boots.
"No, I haven’t, thanks but what would you say if we had breakfast on the go, I’m anxious to get going so we can make the most of the day."
Tina couldn’t repress the thought which immediately entered her mind, "You have no idea how much you have made my day already, Bette."
The smile on Tina’s face prompted the vet to ask. "Why the big smile?"
Tina shrugged. "Just happy about today."
"Me too." Bette agreed and she repeated the sentiment in her head several times.
"Do you want to come with me to check on the baby?"
Tina’s face instantly lit up at Bette’s proposal.
"Come on then, but you be best to leave those here for the time being or you may be wrestled to the ground for them." Bette said pointing at the box of pastries that Tina had brought and hinting at the lack of table manners of some of the inmates from the nursery.
They quickly reached the dormitories where all the orphans were gathered. The babies had had their morning feed already and waited for their keepers, who were busy tidying away the feeding bottles, before they would all set off for their morning browse.
All the calves seemed to have woken up in jovial mood, running and trumpeting around as they playfully bumped into one another in a friendly pushing match.
Just emerging from her room was the little girl, Bette and Tina had rescued the day before. She stood wrapped in her grey and pink blanket secured by a makeshift belt made out of rope. The morning was still cool and the fragile little elephant needed the extra warmth. Her head, ears and trunk were drooped in what could only be described as grief.
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*gasp* oh shit they’re stuck in the middle of the wilderness!! Omg I lOoooooveeeee this storrryyyy!!!! PPS
Ha!! Now that’s how it should be done!:)) Great job, really admire all the details you wrote in this story. WOnder will ther be problems for tibette in the night? Or they’ll be safe inside the car? :))) PPS!!!
Wow! That is some of the best writing I have seen lately. Fantastic! I love the descriptions of the animals and the interactions between Bette and Tina. Thank you!
Not good being stranded in the middle of no where.
Lol – Never thought of Zebras as a New York hooker in black and white stripes – hilarious comparison.
LMAOOOOO!!! I knew it…! I just knew it…!!! I had that hope in my head all along, and I prayed that you’d make this happen!!! Thank youuuu! This is going be sooo good! But you are such a tease to let us hang like that… Now… I have no idea what you have in store for them, but I so completely, undeniably, and eternally trust you to make it worth the wait!… God you’re good, woman!!! Thanks so much for this chapter, the descriptions were beautiful, but what I loved above everything else was that sensual flirting between our ladies. I am a sucker for these types of little moments and situations… The touching of hands… Awww…. The whispering in the ear… Awww X 10…. The arm around her waist to hold her back… Awwwwkay, you just killed me, woman! I didn’t want their day to end, but I’m absolutely delighted by that unexpected turn of events!!… So, what is it gonna be, K…? ;)
Oooo, slick, Bette… The old dead-battery-in-middle-of-the-Serengeti-with-dangerous-nocturnal-beasts-beginning-to-prowl-around-us maneuver… Guess you’ll just have to get all snuggly in the jeep until help arrives. (If it comes in the form of Jodie, make sure you’ve got a night-scope on the rifle so you can shoot out her tires before she encroaches.)
Wow! That was fascinating both from the amazing descriptions of the animals and the interaction between Bette and Tina; should be an interesting night!
OMG! You’re gonna kill us leaving us hanging like that! I love, love, love this story so much. Written so intricately, with attention to detail, and with obvious knowledge of the components of a dynamic ecosystem. Please post soon, since IDK if I can wait.
Oh no..stuck in the middle of nowhere..as always, incredible writing and story!
Wow….what a cliff hanger! I didn’t expect that. I’m sure they’ll be safe in the truck and Bette’s team will track them down in the morning. It should make for an interesting night. I can’t wait for your next post.
Oh my goodness, what a place to be stranded and overnight too. Hopefully Bette will keep them safe thru the night and help will arrive for them when it is noticed that they did not return home by dark. Mercy sakes. Wonderful update.
Oh no they stuck in nowhere
K40 this is beautiful how you describe the beauty of Africa .. But what the heck?..Engine trouble? You ruined the moment!? ..jk… :) But I’m more worried if they spend the night “out there.”
Amazing chapter.Looking forward to the chapter about a night under the african stars together.PPS
Your vivid storytelling reminds me of The Lion King. I hope if they have to spend the night under the stars they are fully equipped for it. Great chapter, love. I guess that means I’m up to bat…
Oldest trick in the book, car trouble.
Kins – It just gets better and better. I’m in awe of your talent and the caliber of your stories and your TiBette characters. I love how beautifully you portray them in all of your stories regardless of the setting. I have no worries that if they are stranded Bette will have the situation under control and Tina will trust her but then again things might go awry so we’ll just have to wait and see what adventure you have in store for us next. PPS
OMG KINS40!!!! how could you stop there?!? No..! No..! No..! >_< ... LOL.. You are so good and you do know how to make me beg! Don't you?! .... :-p ha3 ... I can't believe that, even in FF, that Saturday is simply too short!! ... Argh...! So will Bette showing more of her capabilities that she also good in fixing the jeep?? Or do you intend to let them spent their first night together under the stars by the river and in the warm embrance of the savannah?! ^^, My dear Kins.... Would you be kindly enough to please post the next chapter soon?? Very.. Very.. Soon?? * I wish there's an emoticon available here to put on very cute little puppy dog eyes * he3 ... Pining for your next update now... Thanks for your amazing chapter Kins40!! :-) enjoy the weekend ahead! ^_^
O Ooo, what was that? don’t tell me the engine died on them!come on Kins will we wait until next week to know, please update sooner pleeeeeaase ;D
Uh-oh! I absolutely love this story. You capture the beauty of the setting so well. Thank you.
Amazing and awesome update. Was written with so much detail that I could just picture it all in my mind. Thank you for this story and now I hope they will be safe. Thanks.
“Click” LMAO! “Click” …. I can just imagine the string of cuss words coming Bette now. I applaud you for not using the proverbial “ran out of gas” scenario ;) Kins, this story is such a joy to read. Your attention to detail that paints such vivid pictures continues to impress me – I so want to be on Safari! The electric but gentle current B&T share makes me sigh, and your wicked sense of humor makes me laugh out loud – loved the Zebra / “New York hooker in black and white stripes, far too tight, tights, and strolling on stiletto heels” bit! Oh mighty mistress of cliffhangers, you always leave me wanting and looking forward to MORE (but that’s a GOOG thing ;) …… I publicly Heart you. have a super weekend!