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Savannah
Story written on October 2, 2011 by kins40.
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"What did you say again, we were going to do?" Tina asked still perplexed by the proposition from the brunette.
They were crossing the large courtyard in the middle of the compound.
"Massages…. with this….. coconut oil." Bette answered lifting her two hands which held two spray bottles.
Tina acknowledged the fact that she had understood that part but what she still remained unsure of, was, for whom the massages were intended.
She had not seen the vet in the last couple of days. Her schedule had been taken over with a number of foundation related work commitments and by the time Tina had arrived in the morning, Bette was usually away and the reverse happened at night also.
So when the beautiful brunette popped her head around that morning and asked if Tina was interested in spending the morning with her, the blonde had jumped at the opportunity.
"The orphans, the massages are for the orphans." Bette had replied with a mischievous grin on her face.
Tina had spent enough time in her company to know that the orphans she was referring to on a regular basis, were….. elephants.
Right enough, the two women rounded the corner and were faced with the motley crew of the nursery inmates.
With breakfast over, they were hanging around the front of the dormitories, casually swinging their trunks and bumping into one another in a friendly pushing match.
Tina stopped and looked on with her mouth wide open. "She wasn’t kidding." she thought to herself.
Noticing that the accountant was not following her anymore, Bette turned around and called her over. "Well, are you coming or not?"
Tina sighed and shrugged her shoulders and muttered under her breath. "Beats number crunching, I suppose!"
Bette explained that the task was not exactly a spoiling exercise but more of an effort to try and replicate what a mother elephant would do in the wild. "We can’t do exactly what the mother can do, but we try and do something close to that."
Aiming her spray bottle and the rear end of her first ‘customer’, Tina was surprised when the one year bull named Kenia, darted away from her.
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AND,Hey! i seem to have lost the next page? help me out here pleeeeeeeease Kins………x
I’m with meemaw, where’s the last page? what a place to stop. BTW, I’m not making nor keeping book on jodi demise. Don’t know how anyway. I just want the bitch DEAD!!!, anyway you want to do it. lol But making book on it is a wonderful idea. I laughed when Tina discovered that Bette really did mean to massage the baby elephants, kinda shows where her mind was. lol Wonderful chapter. Thanks.
So good!
you never disappoint kins! great update, but……we need the rest of the action! I can’t help that I’m an impatient person! Tina is going to help Bette warm to the idea of loving again, and Jodi better not eff it up. Love this story!
Finally…..a kiss! An amazing kiss. I’m so glad Bette opened up to Tina. Tina knows she has to take things very slowly with Bette. I can’t wait to see the next page!
Soo sweet and tender. Really love this story and look for it everytime I check the site! Wonderful job.
I kept waiting for little Tembo to barge through the trees wanting to join in on the grown up fun.
How can I tell you how moved I am…. To this chapter?…No words actually… But one thing for sure… YOU HAVE TO POST ANOTHER ONE?!! PLEASEEEEEEE!!!!…
… I also wanted to echo fishbird’s sentiments about you and Kw in my last comment ;)
O_o … ugh!! Looks like there’s an error here… I can’t find anymore page.. Hmm?! Kins!? Would you leave Kipepeo and Maralal for a while and check your posting, so it’s not hang in the air anymore?! :-p lol.. Such a great chapter and may I say this chapter is a revelation of your cheeky nature!? :-D ha3.. The not so clear sentence about the massage is so misleading, not only for T but frankly, also for me *blush* :-p … Then what a jester are those elephants..:-D And it’s kinda sweet that day is part of those days when they look back and remembering their first kiss… Is the same day as Kipepeo’s accepting Wendi by kissing her too :-) uhm.. does it mean there’ll be correlation on the progress of relationship between Tibette and Kipepeo?! Lol.. :-D
Oh yeah but I agree where is the next page. Cruel!
Well their first full on kiss was worth waiting for,patiently. That was with love and compassion. But did you lose a page?
Awesome, first kiss
Yep! Delightful!
Oh Lord I think I just died and got resussitated! Then you say you’re not a tease but you leave us there!!!!!??? The kiss was absolutely perfect it was just what I expected but OMG I want moreeee!!!! Update update update! Ahhhh!
Yes!Finally!Great update,thank you.
I love your stories.. oh, how I love your stories. They kissed. Finally. I was waiting for it. Great work..
Your words always have the ability of making special stir to my emotion pool. So instead of being a silent reader on this site for such a long time, I come out (LOL) tonight to show my support for one of my favorite authors. And I’m also waiting for the comments of Kword75, who I’m wondering when would give us another story of hers. Kword75, come on, you can’t keep reading kins40′ masterpiece and have no impulse to write something, can you?
oh! What a tease! You forgot the next page – you really did :) Please post soon….please! Thank you for this story.
From the first word of your updates, I hear African drums beating. I am so enthralled with this story! So amazing!!
Psst Kins..?? I realized something which I forgot to put in my previous comment… That Alex who’s broken Bettes’ heart… Was she a welder also? With surname Owens?? :-D if so, no wonder Bette has difficulty to get over her :-p
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! You my dear are the BIGGEST ff tease. Don’t look now but that lynch mob ou wondered about last time I believe is is headed you way ;) Seriously though, you have outdone yourself with this newest chapter. Wonderfully written and lyrical in it’s narrative. I feel as if I’m experiencing it all through Tina’s eyes. And how playful and precious are these elephants, esp. the kiss – I have to wonder if it didn’t inspire the ensuing and long awaited kiss between our two ladies :) I just loved how tender and caring Tina is with Bette after hearing about her first love and heartbreak. Now that Bette has let her guard down it will be interesting o see how their relationship grows – and how they ( err, you) resolve the issue of what Tina does once the audit is complete. Ooooo, this story is just so dang GOOD. What a great way to start my week! Looking forward to your next post. (PS – I’ll “see” you when I see you. iHH x)
Holy hell! I’ve been up to my elbows at the office and didn’t even realize u had posted 2 updates since my last chapter. Looks like I’m in debt. To make matters worse, I’m at the office w/o my laptop, so even if I wanted to post 2 chapters right now I can’t! What’s a girl to do?By the way, what’s with the cliffhanger there at the end? Did u forget to post the rest of the chapter? Should I expect to post 3 when I get home? I love how you are easing us into the slow burn. It’s about to pay off, I’m sure. XOXO!