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Savannah
Story written on October 2, 2011 by kins40.
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"Hey ….. where are you going?" She called after the fleeing elephant.
"Did I do something wrong?" Tina asked Bette with a puzzled look on her face. All the other little elephants seemed to be enjoying the experience, why not hers? The vet could no help but laugh heartily.
"No, you didn’t do anything wrong." Bette reassured her. "It’s just that with him, you have to be a bit more careful. He doesn’t like being approached from behind. One too many injections, I guess!"
Before long, Tina, Bette and the keepers were surrounded by a lively bunch of coconut oil smelling elephants, each one of them shinnier than a new penny.
They set off for their morning browse, falling into an orderly line, trunk to tail and with a precise ranking order. Wendi, the mini matriarch was in front leading her obedient brood.
Little Kipepeo had also joined the babies for the outing, covered with a couple of blankets. Her petal pink ears were white with sunblock, and her keeper walked beside her clutching an umbrella which he was going to use during the day to shelter her from the scorching sun.
Tina laughed as she looked at the scene in front of her.
Each one of the little elephants was their own individual with their own signature walk. Some had turned out feet, others were pigeon toed, some shuffled while others took hurried short steps, but they all had one trait in common. Baggy bums.
The orderly bunch reached their normal grazing patch. An area of grassy ground, with shrubs and trees for food, shelter and exploration. In the middle of this little elephant paradise, stood a muddy pond, the elephants used for their daily mudbath.
However, as the elephant column arrived, they stopped dead in their tracks, realising that their favourite wallowing spot had been invaded by some undesirables.
A family of warthogs had made themselves at home in the thick red mud.
A stand off commenced as the pigs did not show any intentions of relinquishing their spot.
One of the older elephant bull and his side kick however, did not see it that way, and took exception to the intruders. They charged at the unsightly creatures to chase them away.
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AND,Hey! i seem to have lost the next page? help me out here pleeeeeeeease Kins………x
I’m with meemaw, where’s the last page? what a place to stop. BTW, I’m not making nor keeping book on jodi demise. Don’t know how anyway. I just want the bitch DEAD!!!, anyway you want to do it. lol But making book on it is a wonderful idea. I laughed when Tina discovered that Bette really did mean to massage the baby elephants, kinda shows where her mind was. lol Wonderful chapter. Thanks.
So good!
you never disappoint kins! great update, but……we need the rest of the action! I can’t help that I’m an impatient person! Tina is going to help Bette warm to the idea of loving again, and Jodi better not eff it up. Love this story!
Finally…..a kiss! An amazing kiss. I’m so glad Bette opened up to Tina. Tina knows she has to take things very slowly with Bette. I can’t wait to see the next page!
Soo sweet and tender. Really love this story and look for it everytime I check the site! Wonderful job.
I kept waiting for little Tembo to barge through the trees wanting to join in on the grown up fun.
How can I tell you how moved I am…. To this chapter?…No words actually… But one thing for sure… YOU HAVE TO POST ANOTHER ONE?!! PLEASEEEEEEE!!!!…
… I also wanted to echo fishbird’s sentiments about you and Kw in my last comment ;)
O_o … ugh!! Looks like there’s an error here… I can’t find anymore page.. Hmm?! Kins!? Would you leave Kipepeo and Maralal for a while and check your posting, so it’s not hang in the air anymore?! :-p lol.. Such a great chapter and may I say this chapter is a revelation of your cheeky nature!? :-D ha3.. The not so clear sentence about the massage is so misleading, not only for T but frankly, also for me *blush* :-p … Then what a jester are those elephants..:-D And it’s kinda sweet that day is part of those days when they look back and remembering their first kiss… Is the same day as Kipepeo’s accepting Wendi by kissing her too :-) uhm.. does it mean there’ll be correlation on the progress of relationship between Tibette and Kipepeo?! Lol.. :-D
Oh yeah but I agree where is the next page. Cruel!
Well their first full on kiss was worth waiting for,patiently. That was with love and compassion. But did you lose a page?
Awesome, first kiss
Yep! Delightful!
Oh Lord I think I just died and got resussitated! Then you say you’re not a tease but you leave us there!!!!!??? The kiss was absolutely perfect it was just what I expected but OMG I want moreeee!!!! Update update update! Ahhhh!
Yes!Finally!Great update,thank you.
I love your stories.. oh, how I love your stories. They kissed. Finally. I was waiting for it. Great work..
Your words always have the ability of making special stir to my emotion pool. So instead of being a silent reader on this site for such a long time, I come out (LOL) tonight to show my support for one of my favorite authors. And I’m also waiting for the comments of Kword75, who I’m wondering when would give us another story of hers. Kword75, come on, you can’t keep reading kins40′ masterpiece and have no impulse to write something, can you?
oh! What a tease! You forgot the next page – you really did :) Please post soon….please! Thank you for this story.
From the first word of your updates, I hear African drums beating. I am so enthralled with this story! So amazing!!
Psst Kins..?? I realized something which I forgot to put in my previous comment… That Alex who’s broken Bettes’ heart… Was she a welder also? With surname Owens?? :-D if so, no wonder Bette has difficulty to get over her :-p
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! You my dear are the BIGGEST ff tease. Don’t look now but that lynch mob ou wondered about last time I believe is is headed you way ;) Seriously though, you have outdone yourself with this newest chapter. Wonderfully written and lyrical in it’s narrative. I feel as if I’m experiencing it all through Tina’s eyes. And how playful and precious are these elephants, esp. the kiss – I have to wonder if it didn’t inspire the ensuing and long awaited kiss between our two ladies :) I just loved how tender and caring Tina is with Bette after hearing about her first love and heartbreak. Now that Bette has let her guard down it will be interesting o see how their relationship grows – and how they ( err, you) resolve the issue of what Tina does once the audit is complete. Ooooo, this story is just so dang GOOD. What a great way to start my week! Looking forward to your next post. (PS – I’ll “see” you when I see you. iHH x)
Holy hell! I’ve been up to my elbows at the office and didn’t even realize u had posted 2 updates since my last chapter. Looks like I’m in debt. To make matters worse, I’m at the office w/o my laptop, so even if I wanted to post 2 chapters right now I can’t! What’s a girl to do?By the way, what’s with the cliffhanger there at the end? Did u forget to post the rest of the chapter? Should I expect to post 3 when I get home? I love how you are easing us into the slow burn. It’s about to pay off, I’m sure. XOXO!