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I Write Sins Not Tragedies-Chapter 3
Bette and Tina walked in hand in hand into "The Planet" with Bette walking ahead dominantly and Tina following behind with her head down.
"Long night ladies?" Shane asked with a small smirk.
"Very," Bette answered grinning.
"We know what that means," Alice said laughing.
"Hey!" Dana snapped.
Alice immediately shut up. Obviously Dana was pissed at Alice for something and she had just disobeyed her by talking. Jenny looked at Alice sympathetically, she looked a bit worn out, like Shane had tortured her all night.
"How you doing Jenny?" Bette asked.
Jenny glanced at Shane, who gave her a nod, then she said, "good, and you?"
"Excellent," Bette responded.
"So Tina, Helena opened a new club in West Hollywood," Dana commented, "is Bette gonna take you?"
Dana had walked in on them once when they were drunk fucking in an alleyway and other than Helena, she was the only person who knew about the real Bette and Tina. Though Shane, Jenny, and Alice were giving her confused looks, asking why she asked the submissive that question and not the dominant, Dana knew that Bette wouldn’t be able to answer.
"I think she might if I’m bad," Tina said glancing over at Bette who tried not to shudder.
Dana laughed and Shane cocked her head in confusion, she was picking up on it. Tina thought it would be interesting to see how long it would take their friends to guess their true natures, but she hadn’t expected it would take almost 9 years for them to start even suspecting it.
Bette, on the other hand, was hoping they’d catch on because she hated acting like the dominant, she always got carried away and said something that got her severely punished-and that’s not always a good thing.
At that moment a gorgeous Latina woman walked into the cafe, and everyone at the table turned to her. "Shit, she’s smokin!" Shane said.
"Wowza!" Alice exclaimed.
Dana’s head snapped around so viciously everyone could have sworn her neck cracked. "What the fuck did you say?" Dana growled in a low tone. Alice looked like a deer caught in the headlights.
"N-nothing mistress!" Alice cried.
"Get up," Dana spat, "we’re going home!"
"Yes mistress!" Alice cried standing up and walking in front of Dana.
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damn, what a hot story! I love it :) And I love dominant Tina :DPlease keep going for a long time…Thank u!!!
Fried my phone. Thanks for the hotness oh queens hotness
Damn damn that was fucking hot and awesome, love it!
Woot!Woot! That was smoking hot!!! Can’t wait for the next one ladies :)
hot damn. Bette Tina Carmen. I can’t think of a hotter combination.
Ha! Bette did say her name in the end! Great chapter although I simply don’t see Bette as a sub,but still you write it so well. Tnx for posting
Damn that was hot LOL :)
Oh Damn! That was so hot! Wow! Just no words am glad I read this at home :) Thank you for this story.
wow that was hoooot …
WOW.PPS
This story is freaking amazing!!! AND IM ONLY UP TO THE SECOND CHAPTER!!! :D