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I Write Sins Not Tragedies-Chapter 3
"Well damn she’s gonna get it," Jenny commented.
"Do you think she’s hot honey?" Shane asked.
"Am I gonna get punished if I say yes?" Jenny said cheekily.
"Yes."
"Then no."
Bette and Tina laughed as Shane smirked and said, "smart ass. Hey, Bette, do you think she’s hot?"
"Moment of truth," Tina muttered.
Bette looked at her and noticed that the woman was absolutely beautiful with perfect curves. Her stomach was flat, her ass was nice and rounded, her breasts were large and perky, and her face was flawlessly beautiful. Bette gulped and said, "she doesn’t compare to my fiancé."
Shane scoffed, Jenny laughed aloud, and Tina grinned. "Come on honey," Tina said with a smile, "you can be honest here. That woman is beautiful."
"You can say it too Jen," Shane said with a sigh.
"She’s insanely hot!" Jenny said.
Everyone looked at Bette who tried to look as dominant as possible as she said, "I guess she’s pretty."
"Hmm, well, it’s too bad she looks pretty dominant," Shane commented.
"What! You were actually considering inviting her?" Jenny exclaimed.
"Well, this is the way I see it," Shane said, "if you invite a friend, you are likely to destroy that friendship. Friends can only be invited to watch as a torture device. If you should invite someone into your bed to touch you and your woman, she should be a complete stranger so that neither one of you will ever see her again no matter how good or bad she was in the sack. Now I don’t like anyone sharing the dominance with me, so I wouldn’t invite that sexy Latina."
"Well that’s too bad," Jenny commented. She immediately stiffened up once the words flew out of her mouth.
"So you wanna sleep with her?" Shane said.
"Uh oh," Tina breathed.
"No! Of course not!" Jenny cried.
Shane stood up in firm manner and said to Bette, "sorry for leaving you guys like this."
"No problem," Bette said.
"Bye," Tina said giving Jenny an "uh oh you’re so dead" look.
Jenny gulped and followed Shane as she grabbed her hand and guided her out.
"That was a big fuck up on Jenny’s part," Bette said.
"So why don’t you tell me the truth now?" Tina purred moving up close to Bette’s ear.
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damn, what a hot story! I love it :) And I love dominant Tina :DPlease keep going for a long time…Thank u!!!
Fried my phone. Thanks for the hotness oh queens hotness
Damn damn that was fucking hot and awesome, love it!
Woot!Woot! That was smoking hot!!! Can’t wait for the next one ladies :)
hot damn. Bette Tina Carmen. I can’t think of a hotter combination.
Ha! Bette did say her name in the end! Great chapter although I simply don’t see Bette as a sub,but still you write it so well. Tnx for posting
Damn that was hot LOL :)
Oh Damn! That was so hot! Wow! Just no words am glad I read this at home :) Thank you for this story.
wow that was hoooot …
WOW.PPS
This story is freaking amazing!!! AND IM ONLY UP TO THE SECOND CHAPTER!!! :D