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Savannah
Story written on November 27, 2011 by kins40.
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“Just a minute!” the blonde yelled in growing exasperation to whoever was knocking with irritating insistence on her bedroom door.
She was battling with her expensive luggage set and the locks did not seem to want to align properly to allow them to close shut.
Her patience, of which she famously had very little, was on her verge of snapping and she was ready to throw an almighty tantrum at the inanimate object on her bed, if it did not indulge her soon and obey her orders to shut. Finally, the click of locks falling into place announced her victory.
Something had finally gone her way on this most frustrating trip to Kenya. Each day had brought its fair share of disappointment and infuriating delays and she blamed it all on one woman and one woman alone….. Bette Porter!
She felt herself get angrier and angrier just thinking about it, when the knock on her door resounded one more time.
“What?” She yelled again as she jerked the door open, hoping the intruder recognised that she was in no mood to entertain any nonsense.
The swung open door revealed a regular sheepish looking Duvalier.
“Oh, it’s you..” There was no surprise in Jodie voice. After all she was expecting the man.
Today was an important day, where all the perceived wrongs which had befallen her would be made right again and she could not wait for the world, as she saw it, to go round again
“You did ask for me to meet you here, this afternoon…” Duvalier started hesitantly as was his usual when he faced the volatile and ill-tempered woman.
“Yes yes yes… I did..” Jodie started already irritated by the sweaty man in front of her. “Do the needful with this luggage,” she continued, pointing to the numerous bags strewn around her room, on the floor and on the bed.
The game tracker scrambled to the task as soon as the order was uttered, grabbing two suitcases and tucking a third one, a soft looking holdall under his sweat drenched armpit. Jodie grimaced at the sight and immediately thought that this particular piece would need replaced on her return to L.A.
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I’m scared. What will happen, will she get home to tell T…?? PPS!
Welcome back. I missed your story. Why are people like Jodi and mr. Chang allowed to ravish beautiful animals? Keep Bette safe as she put an end to the evil.
Thanks, loved it
Thanks for giving us another wonderful update. What’s keeping you busy Kins? ;-)
Really cannot stand Jodie..but that description of Tina, in the morning, was sexy! Amazing update!!
Thank you. Looking forward to what happens next.
Damn!..Jodie at it again?..Would she not let it go?!..But knowing her..think the only way she will stop if she’s Behind bars!..I’M SOO AFRAID WHAT SHE’S PLANNING… Thanks K40.
Jodi is evil personified. You write w/the confidence and style of a professional writer.
Thank you for the update.Please not too much drama,ok.PPS.
I absolutely love reading your work. Every word written is like a soft brush stroke on a canvas. Beautiful work of art. Thank you for sharing this with is
Arhhh the suspense…Can´t you just dump Jodie in the middle of the Savannah with only a can of tuna – really that woman is infuriating.
To tell her what???… Oh Kins u keep on teasing, u said u will resolve this problem on yours for the new year ;Dand what about Jodi night plans, will she succeed in hunting the big elephant? would Bette be in the picture? why she is too insistent on killing the poor animal?
Yeah….Tell Her.. Go Bette. I “GOT” what you put for me. And it was WOW. Post soon Please.
And there you go again with the ambiguous blonde reference – grr! At least this time it didn’t take me as long as the last to know you weren’t talking about the lovely Ms. Kennard (BTW, loved that sleeping beauty description of yours – MEOW!). And in contrast what a vile piece of work is that Jodie !?! Too bad Duvalier didn’t squeeze her under his other sweaty armpit just to put her out of our misery and his. Really though, this story is just so awesome – I love it! The translocation exercise was so vivid and exciting, it made me feel like I was part of the crew. I know you’ve mentioned that you do research for this story, but the way you bring the details to life I swear it seems more like you’ve actually participated in these activities and are writing about them first hand. That’s what ultimately makes this so enjoyable to read. Once again Kins, Brava! This was three pages packed with awesomeness. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all :) xx – iHH (PS nice cliffy you’ve left us all with once again. Between you and Kw, I don’t know who is worse but I do believe that you both get immense pleasure being teases :D
PPS I’m with rubber duckster about your stories having a benevolent vibe.
That update was scary. I sure hope that Bette nor Tina fall prey to Jodi and her psychotic behavior. And please save the animals too.
That’s good
I’m not afraid of your villains because all your stories have a benevolent vibe.
I’m scared too, you have set everything up so perfectly I just know Jodi is gonna do something to her, at this moment I more worried about you posting fast so I can know what happens to Bette, then thinking of more creative ways that bitch Jodi can DIE!!!!
What is Jodie up to now? I really hope that all of her plans end up backfiring on her. Bette needs to get home and let Tina know how she feels. It’s so sad that Tina has to leave. Please find a way for them to be together…
I hope Jodi’s plan backfires and Tina gets to stay. :)
Hey K! Great update! Gotta love Tina in the morning… Oh, and as a discreet side note,, just wanted to let you know that you got all mixed up with your chapters and posted the wrong one, cause you forgot the “shower” chapter… It’s okay, surprisingly, I don’t think anybody noticed, but you might want to correct that quickly, cause you never know what those crazy French chicks in Paris could do to you as a reprisal… Just saying… Oh, so ambiguity it is then? Well, as long as Tina limits herself to elephants, I’m happy with that! On a serious note, I have a bad, baaaaad, feeling about that elephant that Jodie “wants”… Hope it’s not Ellie! Bette would kill Jodie if she harmed Ellie… No, wait… She would kill Jodie if she harmed Tina. But she would hurt her very very much if she harmed Ellie… Wonderfully written as usual my friend, I’m amazed a bit more everytime by the precision of the details and descriptions. Not only are you a great writer, but wow, you’re a hell of a researcher as well! (Unless you were a vet’ in Africa in a previous life… Were you?) Okay, enough now, got a chapter to post… Yayyy to you again, and thank you!! xxx Kw.
Hi Kins! :-) love your update! :-) well written and so descriptive! Who won’t fall for T in the morning when they witness what B’s saw?!? :-p ugh! Hate the 1st page and anything in relation with you know who! also detest anything that will harm the elephant, which hopefully not part of Elly’s or Elly herself! And pleaseeeee… Be kind to give tissue warning shall there’ll be anything in relation on preparing the tissue before reading your update! Well at least, I can find secluded place before read that ;-D lol.. I hope you’ll have more free time to write and updating your story Kins! ;-) and noup! :-/ I still away from home, my holiday turned out to be a visit to my parents hometown. And frankly there were times where being a responsible adults sometimes sucks :-( good thing I still able to find some free time for Internet and found some fun on this virtual land ;-) so, thanks again for updating! :-) You have no idea how much it means to me! Well.. hopefully all can be settled soon and I can go back to my holiday plan :-) meanwhile … So looking forward to what Bette will tell her ;o)x and how she will react …
Another great chapter. Please keep them safe and don’t let the evil one do anything to either of them. Thanks.
Another great chapter. Please keep them safe and don’t let the evil one do anything to either of them. Thanks.
Thank you for this story. I know there has to be some drama and all that but I trust you will not let anything happen to Bette and she will be able to get back safely to tell Tina she loves her. Wonderfully written. thank you again.