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Savannah
Story written on November 27, 2011 by kins40.
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The sound of a siren tore the air over the thundering noise of galloping hooves, indicating that the ground crew could now jump into action.
Surging from their hiding places, Bette and the rest of the rangers sprang into action, running after the fleeing herd pulling with them the canvas curtain to close off the trap.
The zebras were caught, confused somewhat by the unexpected corral they found themselves in but by no means panicked.
The capture continued to progress faultlessly as the animals were quickly driven further into the boma. Rangers bravely entered the enclosure, banging the ground with stick to entice the animals deeper towards the crush. Curtains were drawn behind them with each progression stage to avoid any break back. By now the zebras would have detected human presence up ahead and would try to escape at all cost. The team work tirelessly until the wild horses found their way to the back of the awaiting trucks.
Bette then left the crew of rangers, to attend the animals in the shipping cages at the end of the tunnel. She climbed onto the trucks to administer sedatives to the feistier individuals. Conscious to avoid injuries inflicted by menacing teeth, the brunette thought it wise to jab the livelier specimens with the help of long poles from holes in the roof of the well ventilated cattle-type unit built on the back of the vehicles. She worked fast and precisely, never losing sight of the task at hand.
She admired some of the larger stallions. Big bat ears, a mane as proud as a roman centurion’s plumes and the unmistakable and elegant coat of slimline stripes. She checked for injuries as the confined spaces would generate much fighting and was relieved when the mild sedatives started working and the bucking, stomping and kicking finally quietened down, indicating that the animals were now relaxed enough to take on their journey to a new territory.
She took a deep breath at a job well done. She smiled at the surrounding crew giving thumbs up all round. It had happened so fast that the dust the herd had kicked up had no yet settled.
She was beyond tired but happy. She loved her job, she loved her life and she …… loved Tina.
The image of the beautiful blonde made her smile an even wider smile… She let herself fall backwards above the cabin of the truck and lay there for a few minutes waiting for the rhythm of her heart to settle.
It beat so fast no longer because of her action packed afternoon but because she was going home to Tina and tonight she was determined to tell her…….
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I’m scared. What will happen, will she get home to tell T…?? PPS!
Welcome back. I missed your story. Why are people like Jodi and mr. Chang allowed to ravish beautiful animals? Keep Bette safe as she put an end to the evil.
Thanks, loved it
Thanks for giving us another wonderful update. What’s keeping you busy Kins? ;-)
Really cannot stand Jodie..but that description of Tina, in the morning, was sexy! Amazing update!!
Thank you. Looking forward to what happens next.
Damn!..Jodie at it again?..Would she not let it go?!..But knowing her..think the only way she will stop if she’s Behind bars!..I’M SOO AFRAID WHAT SHE’S PLANNING… Thanks K40.
Jodi is evil personified. You write w/the confidence and style of a professional writer.
Thank you for the update.Please not too much drama,ok.PPS.
I absolutely love reading your work. Every word written is like a soft brush stroke on a canvas. Beautiful work of art. Thank you for sharing this with is
Arhhh the suspense…Can´t you just dump Jodie in the middle of the Savannah with only a can of tuna – really that woman is infuriating.
To tell her what???… Oh Kins u keep on teasing, u said u will resolve this problem on yours for the new year ;Dand what about Jodi night plans, will she succeed in hunting the big elephant? would Bette be in the picture? why she is too insistent on killing the poor animal?
Yeah….Tell Her.. Go Bette. I “GOT” what you put for me. And it was WOW. Post soon Please.
And there you go again with the ambiguous blonde reference – grr! At least this time it didn’t take me as long as the last to know you weren’t talking about the lovely Ms. Kennard (BTW, loved that sleeping beauty description of yours – MEOW!). And in contrast what a vile piece of work is that Jodie !?! Too bad Duvalier didn’t squeeze her under his other sweaty armpit just to put her out of our misery and his. Really though, this story is just so awesome – I love it! The translocation exercise was so vivid and exciting, it made me feel like I was part of the crew. I know you’ve mentioned that you do research for this story, but the way you bring the details to life I swear it seems more like you’ve actually participated in these activities and are writing about them first hand. That’s what ultimately makes this so enjoyable to read. Once again Kins, Brava! This was three pages packed with awesomeness. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all :) xx – iHH (PS nice cliffy you’ve left us all with once again. Between you and Kw, I don’t know who is worse but I do believe that you both get immense pleasure being teases :D
PPS I’m with rubber duckster about your stories having a benevolent vibe.
That update was scary. I sure hope that Bette nor Tina fall prey to Jodi and her psychotic behavior. And please save the animals too.
That’s good
I’m not afraid of your villains because all your stories have a benevolent vibe.
I’m scared too, you have set everything up so perfectly I just know Jodi is gonna do something to her, at this moment I more worried about you posting fast so I can know what happens to Bette, then thinking of more creative ways that bitch Jodi can DIE!!!!
What is Jodie up to now? I really hope that all of her plans end up backfiring on her. Bette needs to get home and let Tina know how she feels. It’s so sad that Tina has to leave. Please find a way for them to be together…
I hope Jodi’s plan backfires and Tina gets to stay. :)
Hey K! Great update! Gotta love Tina in the morning… Oh, and as a discreet side note,, just wanted to let you know that you got all mixed up with your chapters and posted the wrong one, cause you forgot the “shower” chapter… It’s okay, surprisingly, I don’t think anybody noticed, but you might want to correct that quickly, cause you never know what those crazy French chicks in Paris could do to you as a reprisal… Just saying… Oh, so ambiguity it is then? Well, as long as Tina limits herself to elephants, I’m happy with that! On a serious note, I have a bad, baaaaad, feeling about that elephant that Jodie “wants”… Hope it’s not Ellie! Bette would kill Jodie if she harmed Ellie… No, wait… She would kill Jodie if she harmed Tina. But she would hurt her very very much if she harmed Ellie… Wonderfully written as usual my friend, I’m amazed a bit more everytime by the precision of the details and descriptions. Not only are you a great writer, but wow, you’re a hell of a researcher as well! (Unless you were a vet’ in Africa in a previous life… Were you?) Okay, enough now, got a chapter to post… Yayyy to you again, and thank you!! xxx Kw.
Hi Kins! :-) love your update! :-) well written and so descriptive! Who won’t fall for T in the morning when they witness what B’s saw?!? :-p ugh! Hate the 1st page and anything in relation with you know who! also detest anything that will harm the elephant, which hopefully not part of Elly’s or Elly herself! And pleaseeeee… Be kind to give tissue warning shall there’ll be anything in relation on preparing the tissue before reading your update! Well at least, I can find secluded place before read that ;-D lol.. I hope you’ll have more free time to write and updating your story Kins! ;-) and noup! :-/ I still away from home, my holiday turned out to be a visit to my parents hometown. And frankly there were times where being a responsible adults sometimes sucks :-( good thing I still able to find some free time for Internet and found some fun on this virtual land ;-) so, thanks again for updating! :-) You have no idea how much it means to me! Well.. hopefully all can be settled soon and I can go back to my holiday plan :-) meanwhile … So looking forward to what Bette will tell her ;o)x and how she will react …
Another great chapter. Please keep them safe and don’t let the evil one do anything to either of them. Thanks.
Another great chapter. Please keep them safe and don’t let the evil one do anything to either of them. Thanks.
Thank you for this story. I know there has to be some drama and all that but I trust you will not let anything happen to Bette and she will be able to get back safely to tell Tina she loves her. Wonderfully written. thank you again.