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Savannah
Story written on December 3, 2011 by kins40.
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Bette parked her powerful jeep in front of the house. Pulling the hand break to secure the vehicle into its spots, she ran her hands briefly in her unruly hair to tame it. The open top had been welcome in the late evening drive, cooling her skin, the freshening temperature allowing her to stay awake after the gruelling activities of the day.
"Home …. finally …." She sighed. She was exhausted. "Home." She smiled to herself; it had been a long while since she had referred to the sprawling habitation as home. Yes, she lived there and it was her house but it had been a long while since it had felt like a home. She wondered if the presence of a certain pretty blonde inside the cool walls of the dwelling was the reason for her shift in descriptive term.
She reached below the steering wheel feeling for the bunch of keys in the ignition to cut the engine. Her hand then lifted and connected with a lever turning the knob on the end of it to turn off the car’s headlights.
She had left this morning in darkness and was returning in darkness. It had been a very long day but it had been beyond successful and that was reward enough on its own.
She stepped down from the jeep executing a little jump from the metal grid step which enabled driver and passenger to climb into the high-above-ground vehicle.
Her body ached from her exertion all day and she limped away slightly as she walked away from the car to get into the house. Before slamming the door, she made a mental note of the fact that she had left the keys in the ignition but thinking about it for a couple of seconds she decided that there was really no one about to steal cars. She shrugged her shoulders and turned away towards the front door leaving the keys behind.
It was so quiet and so peaceful around the estate. She was struck by the enveloping silence. After all the excitement, mayhem, dust and deafening sound of fleeing animals, she felt as though she had stepped into another world.
She walked into the house.
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Oh NO! damn,Tina playing hero won’t end well, Bette still didn’t confess her love, there’s trouble ahead and you stoped. Hmph. PPS:)
Pleaseeeeeeee post soon.
NO, NO Tina!!! Don’t go alone and take a weapon of some sort, maybe the hot water. Oh my stars, please keep her safe and let someone come to help her. Please don’t let jodi get anywhere near her. Thanks. PPS
Noooooooo… Tina, noooooo!!! Don’t you do this, woman! Wake the beauty up or go get that rifle, but don’t venture out there by yourself, sweetie!… Arrggh, and I am the tease??? But I suspect that you have developped a sweet addiction to that habit of yours, dear friend… Not good, not good at all! On another note, I happened to be listening very cheesy music when I read the beginning of this chapter, and god, was that good!! Then I got to the part where Tina was watching Bette sleep and that was very sweet! Though I have to asmit that when you started to describe Bette’s face as she was sleeping, for a moment I feared that you might include the much dreaded drooling on the pillow. But thankfully, you spared us that glimpse of realism and gave us Tina’s ILY instead. Bless you, woman!!! You are the best, as always, and that was a truly beautiful update, especially the first part of course! I’m also delighted that Tina might consider a move to Africa, which shall lead to a happy ending (pleeeaaaase?). Thanks my friend, you’re a star! And good luck with the Christmas preps, BTW! xxx Kw
Oh no…please don’t stop now!! I just love this story..great update!
Dumb, Tina, dumb! Bette knows best after living there so many years. Take something that makes a piercing loud sound to at least awaken Bette.
this is amazing story please post soon thanks!!!!
Oh, for heaven’s sake, Tina… don’t you watch any horror/mystery movies? That’s where we all learn not to go creeping into the dark unknown in our skivvies or in high heels or carrying lots of heavy bags, etc. (Wait, what IS Tina wearing?) Hopefully Bette is not too deeply asleep to hear the confrontation. Now about those keys left dangling in the ignition… will they aid Jodie’s escape, or Tina’s pursuit, or???
Shoot them with a tranq gun Tina, or just shoot them
No, no, no – you did not do that again. Here I thought the joys of the season were catching up on you, and then you go do something like this – Come on, leave the decorations, back to the laptop..you can do it. Please…
I just have to ask.. would that pack of lionessses still be around by any chance?
What a cliff hanger! Somehow I don’t think the element of surprise is going to have the effect that Tina is expecting. I’m afraid that Jodie is going to use this as an opportunity to inflict more harm on Bette. Please get Tina out of there safely….
Oh No, Please let Tina be Okay, but catch that devious Jodie in the act, before she can hurt her beautiful baby Bette. I love that Tina took good care of Bette in her hour of need, who would not love a nice massage after a hard 15 hour work day. Keep the love coming.
Wake up Bette !!!!Thank you for the update.PPS
No No Tina don’t play hero. Call someone! You’re writing is so wonderful that I’m sitting on the edge of my chair. Please post soon. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Oh no! Kins40, you’re giving Santa a hard time deciding where to put your letter, in the naughty or the nice pile?
Oh no! Tina! Get out of there!!!! Ahhh!!!
OMG Tina!!!!! Please don’t let anything happen to her K!!!! Take a spear or something Tina, wait don’t go there!!!!! Thank you for the awesome update.
Holy Cow! No Tina, not a good decision. Please let Bette wake up soon. PPS!!
Dang! What the heck are you doing Tina?! If you want to act by yourself ensure you are able to protect yourself! Uhm.. Any possibility she is good in any martial arts or self defense or maybe she’s a super hero on disguise or…??? I really hope nothing bad happen and won’t make Bette missing the opportunity of confessing her love… Argh!! Bad Kins! Bad! You are addicted to this edgy now, don’t you?! :-( … Looks like I need to join you in early prep of Xmas too as I am sure to do my list and put these in my wish list: more stories from Kins40… More updates from kins40… More pages on each update of Kins40 story … More often of update and definitely less edgy ending like this chapter :-p lol ..: thanks anyway Kins for the update (not so much on the ending though :-p LOL)
Nooooo! DON’T GO INSIDE!… Scream?!..SCREAM TINA! …SCREAMMMM!!!!
Cliffhangers are forbidden around here, didn’t you get that memo? Amazing post, but I would expect nothing less. Looking forward to more as I join Bette in dreamworld…
Oh bloody hell Jodi! nothing stop this woman from doing evil. Tina should be careful, confrontation ALONE not always a good idea! Thanks Kins for the update can’t wait for next week update ;D
Oh how sweet! What a nice way to be greeted after a long hard day playing with the animals (grr ;) . And even sweeter that they both think of Bette’s dwelling as “home”. Looks like Bette’s best laid plans (no pun intended – honest) to tell her sweetie the big news will have to wait a bit. As for that “home invasion” matter… I’m putting my money on the blonde from NYC to know how to protect her woman and foil Jodi’s plan. Go ahead T, open up a can of whup ass on JL and make our day (okay, a gal can wish can’t she?). Seriously though, I hope nothing bad happens to Tina because if it does Jodi is really in deep $hit! Very suspenseful and fun chapter Kins! For all the joy you’ve given us with this story I’ve asked Santa to be extra good to you this year :) xxx – iHH.
Oh no hope Tina will be ok