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After the Ultrasound Chapter 2
Story written on October 3, 2012 by justkeepswimming.
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(Tina’s point of view)
I can see the tears in Bette’s eyes as I finally feel my body relax again after the high created by her caresses. I wonder momentarily if I’ve hurt her. I mean, I do lose control of how I react when she makes love to me, and it’s been so long since she’s touched me this way. But then I see the smile take over her face. God I love her. It takes every ounce of will I have not to say it.
I try to refocus. I fooled myself into believing I could retain control this afternoon. Her personality is so powerful, and the power she exercises over me has become crystal clear in the last hour. When she took my hand in that ultrasound room I knew it was time to shift the direction of our relationship. As soon as I kissed her this afternoon, I knew we would end up where I wanted to. It was the last time today I felt as though I had any ability to determine our path. I’ve caught her furtive glances several times over the last few months, sometimes laced with love, other times simply rich with desire. Today, we’ve started to experience each other physically again, which is only a stepping stone to experiencing each other emotionally as well. But the physical part is far from over.
I reach behind her to remove her bra and lean her back onto the bed. I take her wrists in my hands and bring them up above her head. I feel so awkward, being so pregnant as I do this. But alternately, I also feel like I want her more than ever. This time I can’t keep from saying it.
"I’ve never wanted anyone more than I want you right now," Tina said quietly as she looked into Bette’s eyes.
I don’t want to give her a chance to feel as though she has to respond, so I kiss her full on the mouth. Not that I feel I need to have an excuse to kiss her. Our kiss ends, but we are still so close I feel her breath on my face. I take her bottom lip into my mouth. I always loved doing this to her; foreshadowing my plans for further south. I hear her respond to what I’m doing with her lip. I close my eyes and it doesn’t take me long to feel transported. After all, my tongue is touching moist, wanting flesh as involuntary moans escape her throat. It doesn’t take much imagination. I position my thigh between her legs and move against her. Her breaths come shorter and closer together.
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Hurray!! Pondering new story ideas…woohoo! You’re awesome.
OMFG…more please :)
Perfect update,thank you.Moore please.
I’d like to second what BetteAndTinaForever said. That was beautifully written. You did a great job of writing in the voice and manner of each character Swimmie. I haven’t seen this episode in a long time but I think I like your version better ;)
Really lovely…looking forward to whatever comes next.
”I’ve been seduced. I’ve been masterfully played by someone I thought incapable of such actions. How very sweet it is to succumb to her will.” – great story !
Truth be told I wasn’t going to read this story because of the title but damn I’m glad i did. It was beautifully written and makes me want to relive a moment in l word history i didn’t think i would
Read both your updates on this story. That was simply beautiful. Thank you
Very nice
So beautiful, thank you.
Amazing!!!! Thank you
😊👍 … Deep bow to you JKS! ^^,
Perfect match to a great chapter one!
Hot! I really love and am intrigued by this fic. PPS!
I’m happy to see you posted this again. It’s such a great take on this episode. Hopefully people will be reading it for the first time and get to enjoy it.