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After the Ultrasound Chapter 3
Story written on October 5, 2012 by justkeepswimming.
(Bette’s point of view)
Tina broke our kiss suddenly.
"Bette, you have to feel this," Tina said with some urgency in her voice.
God the woman is insatiable! She grasps my hand and places it – on her belly? I feel an undulating wave progress under my contact. I can feel my eyes grow wide as the realization strikes me. The baby is moving. And not just a little bit. I sit up, alternately fascinated at the energy being expended and overwhelmed by my own emotions. I place both my palms wide over Tina’s taut skin, thrilling to the sensation of our daughter’s enthusiasm.
"Did your mommies wake you sweet pea?" Bette asked into Tina’s tummy as she started to move her hands in an effort to experience as much of the activity as possible.
Just at that moment, an elbow, a knee, a foot – something, pushed with such force that it moved my hand off of Tina.
"Did that hurt?" Bette asked, genuinely concerned that Tina might feel the effects of such activity.
"Surprisingly not," Tina smiled in response. "She’s getting a lot more active over the last couple weeks. Move your hand over here – that’s her bum!"
I trace the contours of where Tina’s hand had directed mine.
"Hello little baby bottom," Bette whispered. A tear escaped out of the corner of her eye and traced its path down her cheek, before it landed on Tina.
"Why are you crying?" Tina asked as she ran her hands over the top of Bette’s head.
Where to begin? I’m crying because I’m amazed at my good fortune today. I’m crying because of what I’ve missed over the last six months due to my own selfishness. I’m crying because I don’t know where this interaction is leading. I think it’s time to find out.
"I’ve missed you so much," Bette said quietly as she leaned forward to kiss where the tear had landed. "And I’m hoping this is you giving me a second chance, rather than you exercising the power you know you have over me right now."
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(29 votes, average: 4.45 out of 5)
Wonderful. Thank you
This is great – keep going, keep going, keep going!
This is just wonderful JKS! Keep ’em coming!
Bette, you better work hard. Not only in the bedroom but outside of it. I know you can do it! Great fic! PPS!
Salutations…all Bette really needs is a second chance.
Great job
This is exactly the way it should go. How come they didn’t think about it and we ended up having the horrible S3?
YES !Sooo right,thank you.PPS
Even after all the passing years, they still have IT. Thanks for rekindling those memories so perfectly.
Wow!! Thanks JKS for this amazing development!! 😊👍👍👍 I wonder if this is an alpha or beta version of the S3?! Or maybe the published S3 is actually the alpha version?! 😱Because it is so obvious that this development is so make sense and so not confusing (or frustating?) as what IC given.😞 Anyway… PPVS 😁
awesome – just great – its terrific to have you back.. please stay
I welcome any attempt to purge the horror of S3 from our memories, but I especially welcome any attempt from “jks”! Splendid, as usual.
yay…cheers to second chances once more :)