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    Savannah – Malaika

    Story written on February 10, 2013 by kins40.
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    "Engaiyai tamayani kuna kera peetu ingera orkishu."

    Bette beamed as she heard the words for success and prosperity pronounced by her friend Wilson. He had accepted to preside over their wedding and both Bette and Tina had opted for a traditional Maasai union.

    It was not recognised by any Kenyan Laws or any Laws from further afield for that matter, but it meant something to the two brides. It was their union to each other and their communion with the land they had chosen to make their home.

    Tina was radiant in her traditional costume. She had worked on her inkarewa with the help of Augustine, who had patiently sat with her to teach the young bride how to decorate her bridal necklace. Armed with the little colourful beads, Tina had, as tradition dictated, created her own design, one which reflected her own tastes and showed off her newly acquired skills.

    Below the wide rimed, leather ring Tina wore a traditional Maasai wedding dress. An ankle length red gown with a white stripe along the bottom hem and over it and right now partially concealed by her large traditional necklace, Tina wore a brightly coloured shawl.

    She smiled just as brightly as Bette was, immersed as she was in the indescribable happiness which was theirs. Her blonde hair, seeming lighter than it ever was, bleached by the ever present sunshine, shone brilliantly below her wedding headdress made of more beads dangling from looped strings.

    Much earlier in the day, a group of chanting Maasai warriors had approached their home and collected Bette  and Tina to prepare them for the ceremony. 

    Tina was escorted to a group of eight women who helped her get dressed in the wedding garments, she had made under the guidance of Augustine.

    The flurry  of activity surrounding the blonde had been closely surpervised by Bette’s old nanny who tried her best to keep Bette at bay. But the vet knew what was going on, barely able herself to contain her own emotion in the midst of all the excitement. 

    They held the ceremony out in the savannah, at dusk, when the heat of the day had subsided and the vast land was being transformed by the most wonderful display of colours as the sun set on the horizon.

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    3. Holy friggin’ moly Indeed! Your writing is simply amazing. You’ve got mad skillz, woman. The manner in which you drew us into the story was exhilarating. Can’t wait for more.

    7. WOW! Brilliant as always. Excellent beginning as you paint the scene for us and then drag us into the story. Then leave us hanging!? What up with that??

    8. Wow i certainly wasn’t expecting this kinda ending.WTF you tbinking of .Poor Bette besides herself with worry hurtling down towards the wreckage.I hope Tina has survived.I guess we will be waiting now for a conclusion at some point.As usual your writing is brilliant in its description and so knowledgeable of your subject.Hope we have a hopeful out come .I have come to love your stories and the way in which you tell them .Loved it.Fix soon i hope.xC

    9. “Yippee!,” I think to myself, “another happy Savannah story!” *sigh* OK, I will just sit here and drum my fingers loudly, awaiting word that Tina is fine.

    10. Oh man… such beauty interspersed with the horror of Bette’s realisation. I’m on the edge of my seat here. I really, r e a l l y hope that Tina and the baby are alright. *Please* don’t be long with the next post. Thanks, kins!

    20. Thanks for bringing us more of the Savana and its lovely inhabitants that we all love so much. As bumsue said, “you bring us in and then wham!, you give us a heartache. Hope Tina is alright and as the title gave us a name, I assume Tina has or will give birth in this segment of the saga. Waiting with baited breath. Thanks for sharing more with us. We always want to know what elsw ia going on in “our girls” lives.

    24. OMG!!! What a way to come back?? I’m hooked already and can’t wait for the next chapter. I just knew something was going to happen to them. Please let Tina and the baby be ok!! PPS and welcome back. :)

    28. You did not just do that! Amazing writing, you create such beautiful pictures…and then Crash ..and on top of that, a vulture – I hate those!Back to writing..best remedy against fanfic-meltdown.

    30. Yay! I mean, no! Yay you posted and no I don’t like an “Out of Africa” or “The English Patient” ending. Please? Thank you kins40. I’ve missed this story.

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